Using the natural monkey flexibility is a wonderful idea! Now why didn't I think of that? Sorry for the late review, I was writting an exam. Great chapter!
I really like your story so far, it makes sense and sess is in character. Wanting her even if just physically and for her power is the first step right? they have time to get to know each other an fall inlove :) You said there will be angst (i'm scared! i hate angst too! it makes my poor little innocent romantic heart hurt and cry) so please, not much angst, not so much that it scars the relationship. (Misunderstandings, misconceptions and miscommunication is ok levels of angst, but if he or she strays , my heart will just break, so please be mild on the angst dosage :))
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee raRr! darn that was amaizng! more!
More of this romance! Inuyasha is just going to have to get over it and move on. Not like he has a choice.
GO KAORI!! MORE!!
Wanna see this Kaori. Bring her out, BRING HER OUT!! More!
>:3 go shippo!
o.o *wiggles update bribery c0okies a tyou* more!
This is going to be a fun courting...if it would get started. More!
As stubborn as all hell. He keeps this up and he'll continue to get hurt. There's always Mizuko. Sheesh! More!
~~I'm really enjoying this one! ^__^ Can't wait to get to more Sess/Kag but I'm willing to be patient! lol
Nyx (Chapter 24) - Mon 16 Apr 2012
A small villain might be good. The manga and anime both have many battles. Maybe a minion of the main big bad? A scout to test the waters or something? I'm about to start rambling, I'll stop there.
Nice job on the characters' personalities. Inu's first line in Chap 21 sounds so typical of him, I was left thinking "What? Serioulsy?", he totally deserved what he got. :P
thats freaking AWESOME! get him kagome! >:3
I is getting curiouser and curiouser. More!
Nyx (Chapter 13) - Sat 14 Apr 2012
Soil, it makes sense now.
I like Kagome at the end of this chapter. She's often bubbly, it's a nice change to see her act differently, at least while she's adjusting (is that the right word?) to having her beast.
Ahh Sesshy, at some point he will need to stop being so hard to get. Kagome is a demon lord, powerful,loves Rin and is kind and is educated and hot. What else could you want in your demoness? I'm pretty sure Inuyasha isn't the only one who will have the hots for her sesshy! haha
hahaa! I love that! Sango NEEDS to get miroku one of those, it's a brilliant idea. Pervert Shock Beads
I like that it's kagome doing the chasing. I hope sess reciprocates at some point, but the fact that she's taking matters into her own hands is commendable :)
lmao kagome eating people just makes me giggle :3
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | 