Yes. I love this part "You chose that wraith over me for years, you have no right to decide anything for me. You have no right to demand anything of me, I am not nor will I ever be your mate." ... In your face Inuyasha. I like the badass, won't let anyone walk all over me Kagome.
aiko (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Apr 2012
whoo.. it goes in ways i never imagend... even if sess is still the ice lord to kagome....like it, hope for more soon
sh3e's like a chubchub! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
koneji (Chapter 10) - Thu 12 Apr 2012
Yay! You did use my suggestion! Now onto the next chapter!
A grave priestess? Not Kikyou? Interestinger and interestinger. Talk about a bird of prey youkai. More!
oh! plot thickens!
hahaha i just got this rather amusing image of sesshomaru being chased by a chick and he's all >:l at it, and the chick is all 0o0o0o0o :3 <3 at him
Lumi (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Apr 2012
This is going nicely so far. You describe things well. You may want to try varying your paragraph length a little more, though. It makes things look more interesting.
Ha ha! Sucks to be Kikyou. More!
Susan (Chapter 9) - Thu 12 Apr 2012
I'm glad that you updated
I've got a story idea for you
If Inuyasha tries to use Tetssiaga against Kagome - make it so that it doesn't work against her
After all it's HER sword not InuYasha's
she's the one who drew it from the seal - he's just borrowing it as long as he protects her
can kagome destroy kikyo? i'd like that. maybe when she gets that part of her soul back she can understand her birdie more!
Interestinger and interestinger. Want to see where this leads. The hanyou seriously needs to grow a brain. More!
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :3333333 i LVOES this!
This is getting really interesting. Update soon and we wanna hear Sesshy's thoughts on the new Kagome and HOW CAN INU STILL BE FROLICKING WITH KIKYO...SHE TRIED TO KILL KAGOME! argh, can you please inflict much needed bodily, emotional and any other harm available upon him soon? Thanks :)
Does she now look like the picture Aiko drew called Forever Damned? http://dokuga.com/gallery?func=detail&id=7408 I need a mental image and from what you describe I think that's what you are going for. I just wanna know for sure cuz i think the picture is absolutely stunning and kagome looks incredibly beautiful and if indeed that is what kagome looks like now, holy mother she's gonna have a long list of suitors.
Nyx (Chapter 8) - Thu 12 Apr 2012
I like that you included the smell of soil. I've read a couple fics where Kagome was hanyou or demon. I don't think she ever smelled that on him in those fics.
I can only imagine the looks of shock on their faces. Hopefully, Inuyasha grows a brain when it comes to that pathetic excuse of a miko. More!
koneji (Chapter 7) - Thu 12 Apr 2012
I wonder about the truths behind the gossip. Poor Kagome has a lot of thing bound to stress her out, no? So glad for the quick update!
hmmmmm hunt her down eh? teach them >:3
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