This fang is as different from its brother as I am from mine. -- At that, my mind was airborne. That line is probably the perfect paraphrase of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's relationship. Wow, the sights I see from up here, with your meticulously detailed, heart-mapped stories down below. It's like an out of body experience sometimes. This chapter lifted me up and blew. Me. Away.
Beautifully written once again, especially towards the end. I 've always wanted to see Sesshoumaru use Tetsusaiga in the anime (I'm not sure if he ever did use it in the manga, haven't really read it:/) but just having him come to a realization and acceptance of the humans, I always thought that'd be a neat scene to portray. Also, I love the way you completely kept him in character as you wrote it what with his reasonings with the sword. Once again, nicely done!:)
aw. I liked this chapter...well I like all the chapters. but... I like how Inuasha kinda gets over it.
And the consideration for kagome's discomfort. :P
Sweet fuck! These episodes are always brilliant, but "Cornered" left me breathless. I felt my own wash of pride, honestly. Absolutely inspiring!
That was sweet and just made me smile. Nice job :)
Lilium (Chapter 4) - Tue 30 Jun 2009
I wanted to wait until I was finished the last chapter, but I couldn't wait to tell you this: I love your grammer! The words you use sometimes, are remarkable. Some I don't even have in my vocabulary. They make you think and they also enhance the sentence, making this story a joy to read. Thank you!
ooh, jaken sounds a lil' cweepy there... XP
:D If I could draw even a tiny bit, I would so have this scene sketched out! The picture on Jakken's face is a priceless moment in my mind.
A little Birdie (Chapter 85) - Thu 25 Jun 2009
Awwwwweeeee!
I love it.
You're such a talented writer! In a few paragraphs you take my breath away! No more is needed.
Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Beautifully written with deep, complex characters and a seem-less plot.
Talulabell (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Jun 2009
i love your story its very cute and funny and refreshing but i find myself going crazy about the slow pace im like ugh just fall in love already!! haha but i understand thats the style of the story and it does make it unlike most drabble stories about Sesshomaru joining forces with the rest of the group. So while the pace makes me INCREDIBLY frustrated i commend u for taking a worn out plot and making it exciting, new and refreshing. so thanks
with much happy frustration,
Talulabell
That haiku was perfect. You always give just... enough...
Absolutely wonderful, I can totally picture the scene and the look of disbelief on Sesshoumaru's face :)
Now this was a breakthrough chapter. You have stripped away his aloof personna, leaving him exposed. Very thrilling.
2lazy2login@themoment (at the library, *SQUEE* it's not bloc (Chapter 81) - Wed 10 Jun 2009
hmmmm....? so what is the first word that Kagome thinks of when she sees Sesshoumaru? *^_^* love this fic so much!
XD ~!
' sweet.'
I love how jaken got misty eyed. :P
LOL. Don't argue with Kagome.
Rikayu (Chapter 80) - Tue 02 Jun 2009
that was brilliant, forthright! purification is what you get if you piss kagome off. :P hilarious!
ha hah! He was 'out-snuck.' A very clever plan. :D
But what was the tea flavor? not that it matters. ^_^ Love this chapter! It amused me greatly.
lol, I loved InuYasha's little bit at the end: "Sneaky bastard got out-snuck."
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