Reviews for Imperceptible by forthright

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marisel (Chapter 99) - Sat 02 Mar 2019

Lovely story bUT the ending is lacking, ,!,what happened to kkyo and did they confess their love?   She went to the future and he stayed in the past ?? It she coming back or stay and what happens to the wish? .


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 99) - Tue 29 May 2018

Literal tears at that ending! I enjoy your writing so much. Is this the end of this story or is it possible to get one last wrap up chapter?


Carice (Chapter 99) - Thu 23 Nov 2017

I have loved reading your stories in the past, especially unspoiled, and also enjoyed this story :) I hope you still plan on finishing it someday! :] 


Nilee1 (Chapter 89) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

 This chapter is powerful.

As always, the beauty of your writing leaves me speechless.

 You never lose sight of Sesshoumaru's true nature -- Know your place. 


Kagome's Love (Chapter 99) - Tue 14 Mar 2017

I love this story, hopefully sometime in the future there will be a sequel... I know it's been a while since you wrote this particular one, but it's one I love to read over and over...


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 99) - Tue 26 Jul 2016

I know I reviewed this recently on FFN, but I read it again on here so figured I'd leave another one  (I think I've left like five or six lol) anywho.... it's been 3 years, and I'm still waiting on pins and needles to see what happens. I know you're busy, and you have an update schedule (not to mention real life is a thing) and I'm trying really reaaaaaally hard not to be pushy... but you're killing me Forthy. Actually you're killing a lot of us, because we all want to know what happens. So any chance you could pretty prrrrreeeetty please finish this someday soon? It's an amazing story, just like all your other ones. I've been on a Forthy kick and have pretty much reread everything you've written. This one has always been one of my favorites though, and not knowing what happens is torture!!! Sending lots of admiration and bribery co0kies your way!!!


Kat (Chapter 99) - Wed 25 May 2016

I honestly can't remember if I've written you a review, either for this story or this chapter, but I feel the need to do so now. You are an amazing author. I've read many of your stories, and even now I eagerly await the next chapter of Lord Charming. That being said I must also confess that this is my favorite of your posted stories, and I come back to reread it often, at least once a month if I'm to be completely honest. And each time I get to the end I still feel a pang of sadness, knowing that you plan to end it on the 100th chapter. But just tonight I realized that it's been 3 years since chapter 99 was posted. I sincerely hope that this story has not been abandoned. Have you by any chance posted the completed story on another site? If not are you close to finishing it? I'm sorry if this comes across as pushy, that is the furthest thing from my mind as I write this, I am merely excited to see how you plan to finish this compelling and addicting story. I hope this review finds you in good health and a happy mood. Thank you for posting this amazing work of fiction.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 99) - Tue 02 Feb 2016

OK this kinda sounds like the final chapter, but you did say 100 chapters and it is labeled as incomplete so........I am on pins and needles if there is one final chapter here......number 99 was just so touchingly romantic it just makes me wonder if Kagome will eventually come back or if she will meet any of the old gang in the future.

This isn't the first time that I read this fanfic but I just love it time that I do.


susie (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Dec 2015

I can't believe I've been reading this story for over 7 years!!  This is one of my all time favorite fics, and the one that introduced me to your great writing.  I can't wait to see how it ends:)


sessxkagfan (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2015

i love this fic soooooo much. thank you for keeping eveyone in character i really hope you come back and write more


Sapphyre (Chapter 99) - Wed 21 Jan 2015

why must you make me cryyyyy?! I love it. I can't wait for the final chapter.


Crystal (Chapter 99) - Sat 10 Jan 2015

I wish you'd continue and finish this story!! I enjoy reading all of your stories, but I hope you don't abandon this one!


Venomqueen83 (Chapter 99) - Mon 15 Sep 2014

Omg omg omg....this is freaking AMAZING! May the muse that helped with this wake up and let you finish because WOW is this good!


Kristi Lyles (Chapter 99) - Fri 29 Aug 2014

So is this over?

If not update! It has been foreverrerr.

Update Lord Charming as well please.


Arynn (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 Jun 2014

I follow what you write religiously -- from Froth, to Vassal, to Unexpected, and everything inbetween.

That said, this story is my all-time favorite of what you have written, and, for this pairing, of every story I've ever read. Your characterization of Kagome and Sesshoumaru, especially, are the standard to which I hold every other story that I read... it's quite a high one for anyone else to reach!

I love Lord Charming, but this story deserves a finish. One more chapter -- it ends at 100, I haven't forgotten!

It's likely difficult to finish... perhaps the inspiration isn't there, pehaps you don't have the time, and I can understand whatever reason you might have for this long wait; I'll still prod and poke you for the finish, because there's no story I enjoy more.


Sassy C (Chapter 99) - Sun 09 Mar 2014

I have been reading this story for, literally, years. Years and years. I think I must have started my senior year of high-school, and now I'm finally a senior in college. And I have finally finished it. This story was beautiful, heart-wrenching, totally mind-boggeling and such a joy to read. Your attention to detail astounds me, and the characterization of each character is spot-on. This was an incredible story, from the first tea cup to the last.


magdalen (Chapter 99) - Mon 23 Dec 2013

I'm looking forward to soon rereading this again from the start, and hopefully getting all the way to the end this time.  ;)


Himura Asami (Chapter 99) - Sat 26 Oct 2013

Do you plan to finish this story?


s_spina (Chapter 99) - Thu 03 Oct 2013

This last chapter was so beautiful. P le a se update soon :)


Azarius (Chapter 99) - Sat 10 Aug 2013

please reassure me that this is not how it ends,. Though I love it, it is just too sad,. I cried over it,. It was unexpected,. And honestly I would enjoy this ending be she's for once it goes against the whole happy ever after everyone usually writes about and gives it its own unique taste,. All in all I thought I would dislike this one but I ended up loving Moore than I had planned to,. <3


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