Mushin! I'm trying to figure out where they're going. The group's travelled pretty far north, if my memory serves... Well, in any case, the doubletalk in the past couple of chapters has been sweet. Lots of catching of the breath too. Hmm... Loving the indulgnces and examples of "trust". Oh, and having Miroku and Sango talk more is a nice change. They're more than warm bodies and bathing partners. Thanks. ^^ I'd hate to think you forgot the rest of the group was there. *continues reading*
~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
Sitting on the edge of my seat for the next update.
Sitting on the edge of my seat for the next update.
Sitting on the edge of my seat for the next update.
Lauren (Chapter 33) - Thu 29 Apr 2010
^^ I like that "I'm gonna eat you" attitude. It'd be strange and disturbing to actually see, but it's funny in theory.
Lauren (Chapter 25) - Wed 28 Apr 2010
Very cute and funny. "...the absence of evidence should never be considered evidence of absence." A very Inuyasha-like thing to do really. Half-baked agreements based upon not what cards were in Sesshomaru's hand at the time, but what cards he could see. I love it.
Lauren (Chapter 24) - Wed 28 Apr 2010
I liked this installment. Sweet/Caring reasonings by Kagome's ever-understanding mother, coupled with categoristic (Is that a word? Well, it is now! ^^) undertones. I think I understand the jist of "Offended Sensibilities". It's cute, yet has the ability to be very offensive. Flushing this one out was definitely a great idea. Great title by the way. And not just for this piece, but for most of the chapters. *continues reading*
~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
Lauren (Chapter 16) - Tue 27 Apr 2010
OHOHOHO! Miroku's very clever. Cute experiment and resulting chapter. The group definitely seems to be more cohesive now. I wonder where Naraku's hiding? He should be showing up soon, no?
Lauren (Chapter 3) - Sat 24 Apr 2010
What was the "one question" Sesshomaru asked?
Cinne (Chapter 97) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
Love this x4857834! I decided not to review every chapter, just wait to the end to review. I love how their relationship had a slow build. You can't even really call it a romantic relationship, in my opinion. It's very close, but I think it's on the fine line of Friendship, and Love! Overall you are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read the next update!
Karli (Chapter 97) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
Holy Cow i finished, took me all day and i finished,
Great story, mate well it must have been if i read it
Cheers mate
Karli (Chapter 78) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
question is this story linked with unspoiled??? only asked because i Hisoka in a chapter? and im just curious.
On another note im loving this story so far
Karli (Chapter 40) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
lol a bug hehehehe
Fox (Chapter 53) - Tue 13 Apr 2010
I love you so much right now. It's been a very long time since I've laughed so hard... and enjoyed myself so thoroughly in a single chapter of anything, much less fanfiction.
I doubt you'll ever cease to amaze me, Forth. And even if you do, that in itself would amaze me so you'd still win. I had an aweful day today, and this... really made me smile. It really made me happy, and I'll never be able to thank you enough for that. Remarkable in both simplicity and in it's thorough coverage of details, your writing provides a steady rythm in tune to my heartbeats.
oh so good edge of my seat cant wait for the next one
KEdakumi (Chapter 97) - Sat 10 Apr 2010
Ahhh... to use the miko's need to protect against Naraku. By being 'captured' by Naraku, Sessh is counting on Kagome's protective instincts to kick in and hope that she will charge in to 'rescue' Sessh and purify the jewel. Naraku won't know what hit him. He thinks the girl too scared now that her protector and ally is taken, the supposed strongest one of the group.
Atleast that's how it's starting to look to me. :)
Great story! Can't wait for more!
O_O ... WHAT THE *insert random string of words here* ~???????????????!!!!!!!!! Holy bee-gee cheese! Please tell me you'll update soon, 'cause that was a killer place to end. That was horrible and great all at the same time. Horrible only in referance to the events.
Wow. Just update soon. Now I got to go find something to occupy myself with till I'm blessed with your next chapter.
~Lune
Shae (Chapter 97) - Thu 08 Apr 2010
Ohoho, it seems to me that getting caught by Naraku is a very good way or getting through his barrier, and potentially being able to get to the jewel. Though of course he has also being injured and had his sword taken, but still. If he was planning this then seeing Inuyasha about to get caught would have been the perfect opportunity to make this happen without Naraku being suspicious.
Of course another thing it could do is inspire the others (especially Kagome perhaps?) to work harder at taking Naraku down. Not that they weren't already trying, but such a thing could give them a sense of urgency that could be good or bad.
Either way, love how this battle has gone so far. I especially liked that Hakkaku was thoughtful about his attacks, nice to have more minor characters acknowledged.
Naraku was so sneaky with his words, and Byakuya too. Can certainly tell that he's picked up one or two things from Naraku.
I feel kinda sorry for Inuyasha, fortunately he seems to favour denial first.
HOLY CRAP!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
Muy excellente!
Addy (Chapter 97) - Wed 07 Apr 2010
D: SESSHOMARU~!
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