Reviews for Fate by sesshomarusama33

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333Tenshi (Chapter 12) - Wed 21 Mar 2018

She let 2 strangers who pulled up next to her like a hooked take her to their home, changed into clothes they gave her and then went out to a club with them? Would I be considered either old, naive or stupid to feel that she is an idiot?


333Tenshi (Chapter 8) - Wed 21 Mar 2018

I just realized that it described Rin as seeming human but Sesshomaru is not so was she adopted? I'm a bit confused by the flow of the storyline and the conflicting information being given.


333Tenshi (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 Mar 2018

Why did Kagura go from being a friend of Kikyo who went for dress fittings in the earlier chapter to being Sessh's ex-wife who nobody gets along with?


KyraTekak (Chapter 32) - Sat 25 Nov 2017

Great story 


Yuna (Chapter 6) - Thu 19 Oct 2017

Ahhh! darn it. It was getting pretty good until this chapter. Sesshoumaru was married to Kagura and had a child. This killed it for me. I felt this was put in suddenly but thanks for keeping me hooked for a bit but now I must take my exit and try to forget this. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Aug 2016

I loved it! Actually just read straight through and its 2 30 am cause I kept saying 'one more chapter' lol

Wonderful (:


blueanimegeek (Chapter 32) - Fri 08 Jul 2016

I just read this again and as always, I love it! I love all your stories!


CuddlesforSesshomaru (Chapter 32) - Wed 13 Apr 2016

Love it!!! You my dear are a very talented author and should keep up the good work!


Lauren (Chapter 6) - Tue 05 Apr 2016

There are a few continuity issues here. You said much earlier in the story that Kagura was a bridesmaid, but now say that she's Sesshoumaru's ex with whom he had a child? You mentioned Rin being in the wedding in the third or fourth chapter, but now Kagome is asking to mert her? I also don't get the jokes (the random cult and drug bits). It seems very immature/middle school for a group that's supposed to be ranging from twenty-eight to thirty-five.

 

I wonder how Kagome can.claim that she thinks she loves Sesshoumaru, and how Sesshoumaru could have such strong feelings for Kagome, when they haven't really spent any time together. They barely know anything about one another. It feels like the story was written at three different times...


DeathDagger (Chapter 19) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

I thought they were married not mated????


KShadeslady (Chapter 32) - Sat 09 Jan 2016

Darn! Did it again! I quit! Loved the story!


KShadeslady (Chapter 32) - Sat 09 Jan 2016

Sorry, I hate it when I mess up a preview.


KShadeslady (Chapter 32) - Sat 09 Jan 2016

Very nice finish! Everyone is happy and Karma ad her way with the bad guys. I see now that you had worked on this over a long period of time, which would explain some of the disjointedness. Nice story and one day, when your muse is pelting you with plunnies, maybe you can do a littlebre- editing. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 23) - Sat 09 Jan 2016

Yeah! Here comes the Calvary! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 20) - Fri 08 Jan 2016

HAHAHA! In laws to be can be so much fun! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 19) - Fri 08 Jan 2016

Oh that is evil! I'm really hoping that karma gets her chance.


KShadeslady (Chapter 17) - Fri 08 Jan 2016

Very nice chapter and the brothers are in agreement on disowning their ditzy dad! LOL! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 14) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Well, well, well...why isn't that POS in jail awaiting trail. Nice to have a rich daddy to bail you out. Great twist.


KShadeslady (Chapter 13) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

What a hardhead! Jumps right to the wrong conclusion.


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Hmmm...HELLO...Just say something... Duh!


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