Reviews for Fate by sesshomarusama33

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KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Hmmm...HELLO...Just say something... Duh!


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Still really liking this story! Ugh! Hojo broke into her house. Creepy stalker! Okay on the last chapter she gets this great emerald necklace from Kikyo but never says Thank You or mentions it later when they are together. It's like it got thrown in and then forgotten. Sometimes this story seems like you want to rush and get all the good bits out there but they don't fit all the time or the timeline can be a bit confusing. Your other stories don't seem to flow like that. Is this an earlier one? It could use a bit of polishing up. Still enjoying it though. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Wed 06 Jan 2016

Such s fun chapter. Everyone from a crazy sweet Inupapa to all her conniving friends. 


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 32) - Wed 06 Jan 2016

this was a good story. i liked how kikyo and kagome got along in this one. the way you wrote them was a good change of pace for me. i like it when they are written this way. these two dont always have to be enemies. i hope you can take the time to finish your others stories. i would like to read them. making hojo the bad guy was diffent too. i found him to be a bit creepy in the anime as well. keep up the great writing. c'ya'


Seluna Maru (Chapter 23) - Mon 04 Jan 2016

Ok everything seems to be changing. Kagome's eyes were light brown now they are blue. inupapa's name has change from Inutaishio to Toga, and neither can be his last name since u already said it was Tenshi. Kahome already met Nakuru but in a later chapter it seemed like the office was their first meeting. Kagura was suppose to be a brides at the wedding but later when you put her as Sesshomaru's ex wife. Rin is their daughter and in the beginning you made her seem like she was kikiyo family cause kagome seemed to know her despite only meeting her way later. There are many other discrepancies but to be honest I LIKE THEM!!  but the story isnt consistent maybe u should change a few thing in the earlier chapters to match the later ones


Seluna Maru (Chapter 3) - Sun 03 Jan 2016

Good Story so far. However most of it is redundant. There is no need to tell us the story twice or three times. All you needed to do was say Kagome reiterated the tale to Sango then tell us her response. It get annoying after a while when you repeat so much. Im not trying to be mean or I would say it is a bad story. I am just giving advice 


Rhonda (Chapter 32) - Sun 03 Jan 2016

  Hope your Holidays and New Years were awesome!!

And Thank You for such a great read!  I truly LOVE how you wrote Inupapa. Great balance  to the story and awesome character  development. Truly enjoyed reading every bit of it!

Thanks again for a great getaway.....


Inuaddict (Chapter 17) - Sun 03 Jan 2016

"why couldnt it be follow the butterflies?" hahahahaha

I sincerely hope that was some sort of HP reference or I am just an idiot


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 32) - Sat 02 Jan 2016

This story was amazing and I enjoyed it, Happy New Year!


Alashia (Chapter 32) - Sat 02 Jan 2016

Yeah! What a beautiful ending! I've enjoyed this story so much!


KEdakumi (Chapter 32) - Sat 02 Jan 2016

Such a good wrap up to this story.  Loved it


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 31) - Wed 23 Dec 2015

Nice, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 31) - Wed 23 Dec 2015

Nice, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


MissKatt (Chapter 31) - Thu 17 Dec 2015

Aww (: I'm glad she's getting excited about it!


MissKatt (Chapter 30) - Mon 14 Dec 2015

Fluff is always good!


Saiya (Chapter 30) - Mon 14 Dec 2015

Hehehe So Adorable.


MissKatt (Chapter 29) - Sat 12 Dec 2015

Looooove!!!!


Mona (Chapter 28) - Tue 08 Dec 2015

Awesome, I am looking forward to the updates to come.


MissKatt (Chapter 28) - Tue 08 Dec 2015

Yayyyy puppies!!!


MissKatt (Chapter 27) - Mon 07 Dec 2015

Ahaha how embarrassing XD


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