Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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Sora (Chapter 10) - Mon 07 Nov 2011

About these 3 options…

While threesome is nice, but in my opinion it would not fit this particular story, because Sesshoumaru doesn’t look like he would like to share.

About other options, hmm…

In my opinion Kagome does love Inuyasha, but she’s a teenager, and as a person grows up emotionally and mentally, he or she can and would change his/her perception of things. Besides she knew nothing about Sesshoumaru before, and who knows what she would feel for him if she would know his true self and not “Inuyasha, die!” self.

Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are brothers, so Sesshy has many qualities that Kags loves in Inuyasha (but she doesn’t know about it), for example, loyalty (well, maybe he more loyal than Yasha, he doesn’t have Kikyo), strength (he’s obviously stronger), good heart (but he hides that very well, but Rin knows better), fierce temper (I’m sure Kags loves hot guys with short fuse, but it’s only my opinion, lol). Plus Sessshy is mature, has manners, more attentive than Inuyasha and more intelligent. Responsible and educated Kagome can find such things very appealing.

I just don’t like when Kagome can only look at gorgeous Sesshy (whom we all love), only when Inuyasha rejected her or he died. Surely Sesshoumaru can win a girl’s heart.

Anyway, whatever choice you’ll make, I’m sure it will be still interesting to read.


anna gordon (Chapter 10) - Mon 07 Nov 2011

Hi again. another interesting chapter. Oh and I think option C bringing back Kikyo would be interesting. While I dislike Inu/Kag stories doesn't mean I would want Inuyasha dead. Plus I could see Inuyasha having trouble choosing between the two girls which could lead to kagome giving Sesshomaru a shot. Maybe Inuyasha and Kikyo could end up together with Inuyasha as a human like they planned to be before Naraku?  Anyway I'm sure I'll like whatever you come up with. Also I get that Kagome isn't going to fall for Sesshomaru right away, He needs to deal with his emotional issues first maybe.


anna gordon (Chapter 9) - Thu 03 Nov 2011

okay um I do like this and how you write sesshoumaru is amazing but all the inu/kag part make it seem like this is a inu/kag story instead of a sess/kag story. Will kagome ever end up liking sesshomaru? while I enjoyed all your info about mating and demon law I'm not sure how long I'll keep reading this. Nothing against Inu/kag stories they just arn't my cup of tea.


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 9) - Tue 18 Oct 2011

OHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!! What a twist! i love it so far its great! u need to update i am excited to read more i have been a fan of this fic for quite a while (mostly on AFF) and I'm glad u added another chapter it was great just like the previous chapters to this story... this fic gets better and better with each chapter and i love that it always stays interesting i also love ur prospects on courting and such very unique ideas i havent read n/e thing like 'em b4 :) keep up the great work and please please PLEASE update soon hopefully b4 thursday lol cuz i wont have internet from thursday night to monday after noon lol :) and i would like to read atleast one more amazing chapter of this story before than neh? lol well keep up the great work u rock!


REDWOLF (Chapter 9) - Mon 17 Oct 2011

Sesshoumaru is so in love he doesn't see it!


hitnrun (Chapter 8) - Mon 17 Oct 2011
Wow, demon laws states to kill hanyou? Hm. It sure makes lots of sense that their dad would give his life for a child thats doomed since its conception. Just like it makes complete sense that there's more hanyou around that look fine, Jinenji, Shiori, not to mention the whole island of horai reserved for the hanyou offspring of human and youkai couples from the movie 4.

Alexandra (Chapter 9) - Mon 17 Oct 2011

Poor Kagome! She's so conflicted between the two brothers. Her heart belongs to Inuyasha and her body belongs to Sesshoumaru. I wonder if Inuyasha really did come to her room or if she just imagined it. What does Sesshoumaru plan to do to Inuyasha? If he plans on killing him it will just break Kagome, and her Feudal Family. It's so tragic, I love it! Can't wait for the next update!!


Duchess Of Darkness (Chapter 9) - Mon 17 Oct 2011

an absolutely smutastic chapter miss lady, simply smutastic. I cant wait for the next update, though my heart went a tickerin' when i read that you had 25 chapters written out so *sighs* i guess i have to wait for you to type and upload those gems. -_- no matter how much it pains me to wait...Love this and have favorited it just so you know.

D.O.D


White Luna (Chapter 8) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

YAAAAAY wonderfully amazing fic. Wonderful portrayal of Sessh. Absolutely almost cannon. adore it.


RubyJeweler (Chapter 8) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

Yup. I'm half way in love with this story. Definitely waiting for the next update. Haha. Thanks Rinku.


nykita (Chapter 1) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

Okay I'm a little confused here. Is this the same story thats on AFF? With the InuxKagxSess triangle?

If so I will skip. I'm just not into stuff like that and I cant see Sess or even Inu share a mate.

So please clarify :)


Alexandra (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Oct 2011

The angst!!! I love it!!! XD I wonder if Sesshoumaru will change his tactic on how to attract Kagome...

Poor Inuyasha. I hope there is a solution.

Can't wait for the next update!

 


Airy (Chapter 8) - Sun 09 Oct 2011

Great chapter! Keep going and in-depth is the best!


Ceysna (Chapter 8) - Sun 09 Oct 2011

YES!!! You go Sesshy!! *victory dance* Now if only Sesshy would stop being a control freak and start actually explaining things to her so Kags can understand the courting and things can get moving!*lays head on desk* Sesshy... you can hear the girl's thoughts... and you still fail at romancing a "human". The "lower" status species. *sighs* Oh well.

Great update! Thanks so much! I can't wait for the next one! I feel kinda bad for Ship, watching out for Inu. I wonder if he could hook up with a hanyou as well....

Keep up the great work!


Smortz (Chapter 8) - Sun 09 Oct 2011

>:3 The hole Kagome is in deepens. Ha! I love it. 

~Smo


Angela (Chapter 7) - Sat 08 Oct 2011

OMG. This story is so good so far, you nailed Sesshomaru on the head. please update soon.


Ceysna (Chapter 7) - Fri 07 Oct 2011

*drops popcorn bucket* what?!?! WHAT!!!?!!! You can't stop it THERE!!!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!! *shakes comp screen* I have to find out what happens next!!!! Kags!! Kags!!!! X^o Noooo!!!!!! *turns, points to Smexy* You!! Go save your mate-to-be!!!

Omg, PLEASE update soon!!! Cliffies are evil!!!! Evilly I tell you! Keep up the great work!


RubyJeweler (Chapter 7) - Thu 06 Oct 2011

Amazing story! ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter.


REDWOLF (Chapter 7) - Thu 06 Oct 2011

Oh My! She got Hit??? Sesshoumaru better be fast this time!


Kam (Chapter 7) - Thu 06 Oct 2011

I am truly enjoying this fic. It's true to character and is writen beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter.


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