Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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RubyJeweler (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

Yup! Kagome is sooo going to fall for Sesshomaru and give in to him by the time the month's over. She's already hot for him. Lol. I feel sorry for Inuyasha, because of his hanyou state. He was doomed from the very begining. TT.TT SAD! Thanks, Rinku, for this fabulous update. You might lose some fans, but I'm sure you'll gain some more. ^^


Tori (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

I'm back! Please forgive this faithful reader for her long absence. However I've had much reading to catch up on. You should know that every time you add a new chapter I read the story from the beginning to get a grasp upon the story and I swear I always experience this personal devotion to the ever growing grasp of how you handle a plot and the growth of the characters. The integrity and presence of Sessy is ever growing and its like these layers of an orange we peel we see a bit more every time truly awe inspiring. And Kagome grows each time as well and as these two grows closer and the tension only gets hotter. I like that, normally when it comes to smut, and yes I said smut it has to have a certain level of gratification to it to satisfy me, and not just a hit and quit it, no the steaming hot "I'm going to do you till you can't walk for a week so nap as best as you can" kind of deal. When I read the inner thoughts of kagome I feel as though I'm being introduced to essence of the person, the intimate detail of Sessy before the foreplay. And it sends shivers down my spine. Ok enough of my smutness. As a writer I respect the development you place in the Inuyasha universe, the demon laws you have spun and the very concept of it allows for more growth. You have not broken any of your self made laws and instead performed plots to exist with them. Inuyasha's blood problem is however I feel is coming to a head, killing him seems like a mercy and I know that I might of said something along the lines in my last review. However it seems to me now that there's an opportunity to maybe invent something to help with his blood control or even turn him into a full demon. Maybe a legendary fang or a jewel, or even maybe Kagome can create something akin to the Jewel of four souls, there are so many ideas and I can't wait to see what you do. Hehe. Ahh my musings have run away with me I feel that I can talk to you about anything, simply for the fact I enjoy how you write, the detail is awe inspiring. However I am looking forward to the next chapter, please don't hesitate to ask for feeback, continue as you are doing and see you in the next chapter.

 

 

Your faithful reader,

Tori

 

P.S If you need ideas you can contact me at my email sadebrown21@yahoo.com

 


Venita (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

I'm glad Kagome is started to fall for Sesshomaru, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!


Alexandra (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

OMG! You updated!!! I love this story. I can't believe the progress Sesshoumaru has made with Kagome. You write Sesshoumaru's character very well. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter! since Sango and Miroku will be awake and I'm eager to hear about the baby!!! XD

Poor Inuyasha. I really hope that he doesn't have a sad ending.

 

Can't wait for the next update!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

This was a nice chapter. At least Kagome is starting to have feelings for Sesshomaru. But they still have to find a way to keep Inuyasha alive. I'm sorry, but I'm not for turning him human and having Kikyou brought back again (the past should stay in the past, regardless of how much history the two of them have). He's completely defenseless that way. If anything, he should be made a daiyoukai and have another youkai female paired up with him. Already looking forward to the fireworks when the rest of the pack wake up.


janjan (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

AWESOME!!! just read it now for the first time! Amazing story! stayed up until the early hours reading it! 

cant wait for next chapter!

 


Airy (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

I love the new chapter. Keep up the great work. In all this time you never lost this reader :)


Kuro-chan (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012
I love your story. It's really different from others I have read. The "all honyou go stark raving mad" part is interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter and the drama that unfolds.

ArisaChan (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

:) I look forward to the next chapter!


Manatee (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

"Scenting, holding, foreplay... " Oh, god, yes please!


Pebbles (Chapter 13) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

For the past couple of days, I've been reading this almost non-stop.  I am really enjoying your story.  Judging from earlier chapters, your writting style improved noticeably.  And what I'm liking about your characters, they are constant in action.  There isn't something out of character for your vision of them.  Sometimes you'll see writters get sort of 'backed into a corner' and try to change something and steer away from what their orignal intent.  It's going at a great pace.  Your Sesshomaru and Kagome moments read like ying and yang.  And they can turn so quickly, so effortlessly.  It's great!  I'm so glad that key points where touched on here that you hinted at from earlier chapters.  The fact that there is much ado about the current Inutaichi situation, Kagome's realization of there may being more to Sesshomaru's motive and Sesshomaru himself realizing the  more undetected and penetrating effect she has on him.

It's a nice touch that he pulls her from Inuyasha.  Sort of the visual turning point to the reader what has inevitably transpired.  She is Inutaichi no more.  Well, from his point of view that is.  heh

I am curious to see what happens when they all wake up though.  It's going to be an emotional 'reunion'!!!!

 


The Four Tailed Fox (Chapter 13) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Lovely as always! I'll be looking foward to the next installment! Hope you had a great holiday.


blackrose (Chapter 13) - Tue 27 Dec 2011

This story is absolutely amazing. The characters are so complex and your plotline is really unique. I really like how you explained all the reasons behind the "curse" of hanyou. Wow seriously this story just blew me away. Please update soon I cannot wait to read the rest of this story! I really is amazing.


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 13) - Mon 26 Dec 2011

*Is all caught up with the story* And... what a wonderful story it is, Rinku. I stayed up all night reading it - literally. It's AMAZING!! There are no other words to describe it. I loved every moment and I can't wait to read more. I'm... at a loss for words to describe how much I enjoyed it. Really truly! Keep up the awesome job and I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!


JeniNeji (Chapter 13) - Sun 25 Dec 2011

This was a great chapter! Kagome finally is getting closer to this Sesshomaru who was merciful enough to revive her friends... but then...he had to turn back to the normal Sesshomaru and say she was just a tool to his end... sighs.... bad bad Sesshomaru


randomfan17 (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 Dec 2011

9, only because Kagome's still whiny about the situation in the beginning and it was getting annoying and now that he's trying to convince himself that he only needs her to satisfy some criteria in his life makes him a teensy bit less desirable than before. Over all it was an awesome chapter.


Duchess Of Darkness (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 Dec 2011

*grabs you by the collar and yanked you close to glare angrily in your face*

That was....to my utter dismay....a very very good chapter. So good in fact that I will forgive your past crimes against me. However *pulls you closer with red glowing eyes*  Me and my counterpart Ikaru are still seeking your demise.

*releases you with a grin* Expect it soon.

D.O.D


Venita (Chapter 13) - Fri 23 Dec 2011
This  chapter was great and sad, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

REDWOLF (Chapter 13) - Fri 23 Dec 2011

I really enjoyed this chapter...I am just wondering what you are going to do with Inuyasha? He's dangerous to everything.  And, Why didn't Sesshoumaru  pull this a yr ago like Kagome said....why now? There has to be a reason, if I missed it, just let me know and i'll go back and reread that chapter that explains why.

Another great chapter :)


Alexandra (Chapter 13) - Fri 23 Dec 2011

Amazing Chapter!!! OMG! The emotion and turmoil in Kagome when her friends died was very detailed and strong.

I was crying when I read that part. It was beautifully written.

Now that the angst is out of the way for now, I can't wait for some fluff!!! <3

I can see that Sesshoumaru is developing into a caring creature, even though he denies it. ^__^

If Sango is alive, does that mean the baby she carries is still alive as well? I hope so. XD

This was an awesome Christmas gift. Thanks!!!

Have a Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!


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