So very glad to see this chapter. I have to admit, I was glad to see some more reaction from Sesshomaru. The fact that his pride was severly hurt finally surfaced. The inner turmoil finally broke free!! Love that he took control of the situation, because it's getting out of hand with him not reacting. Although I appreciate the lime (rawr =3), it was overdue for them to connect on some next level. There's much he doesn't say, but much he expresses with his actions. It's starting to dawn on her with that thick skull of hers. Poor thing. lol
I want to see more action-reaction between these two. I have a feeling this is what you may have in store. I'm not exactly sure of what 'decision' he has made. Other then taking her from the camp? I assumed he made that decision some time to go in order TO get her away from Inuyasha. Either way, I think this will open the story to more close interactions and additional close encounters (again, rawr). Also, possibly running into a crazed hanyou again......? *whistles*
Ani (Chapter 1) - Tue 11 Dec 2012
I love this story so much. Its refreshing to have such an intriguing and well written story. I look forward to the next installment (which will hopefully be soon).
Miki (Chapter 18) - Mon 03 Dec 2012
I have blown through your fanfiction! a day is all it took for me to complete it. Sadly I am one of those readers who fall in love and just can't stop reading unless the sky is falling when it comes to amazing fanfiction.
I have to say this fanfiction is the best I have ever read and I am not just poofing you up. ;) You've deserved all the awards you have gotton for this story. However...
I WANT MORE!!! :D <3 More I say More! I want the lemon-goodness there is to be had! I want Kagome to asmit she wants him! I mean...well who wouldn't right? >:D Either way I love your story so far. I have put it into my favorites and will check it all the time.
Love it!
-Miki
I am a big fan of this! It's been awhile since I've read somthing this interesting. I'll be waiting for your next update.
EweLamb Lover (Chapter 18) - Thu 22 Nov 2012
Oh my gosh, another amazingtasticlly delicious chapter!! (Not that it surprises me) I'm still feeling the blush in my cheeks after reading the chapter! A few grammar and spelling errors but (shrug) which story/book doesn't? It's still amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
With sincere love and appereciation
~EweLamb Lover
Oh Wow. I have been breathless through out this entire ride! You have captured Sesshomaru so wonderfully, as well as the other characters. Each reaction, the inner dialouges, everything is wonderful. I cannot wait to see what you come up with next. More please! :D
I know that there is still a lot of confusion between them two, but I'm glad that they're finally making progress! I know it's diffiult for them, but I think as Kagome's reservations slowly fall away, Sesshoumaru will get to see what she's really like, without her being distracted by the whole forced mating thing, and he'll get a better idea of who she really is, just as I'm sure Kagome will begin to understand more about Sesshoumaru as she sees him interact with Jaken, Ah-Un, and especially Rin. Though I do feel like Kagome will always have problems seeing things from his perspective if he continues to hide himself from her. He's obviously very tender at times, and as his future mate, he should be expressing stuff like what Sango saw when she's awake, even if it is only when they are alone. I'm not saying be lovey-dovey, but a gentle caress like the kiss at the end would be nice. I look forward to see what kind of perspective Rin will give Kagome regarding Sesshoumaru.
Anna (Chapter 18) - Sun 04 Nov 2012
Kagome is so frustrating :( , at this point she's soooo unlikable. She's not even making an effort, and her stupidity is just actually really appalling! Sesshoumaru was right when he called her childish. Although it was understandable in the beginning, her hestation, it's really annoying at this point. I'm surprised that Sess isn't just like "F*** this" Please, please mighty author, redeem Kagome and her almighty obtuseness!
In other news, please update!
Tasha (Chapter 18) - Tue 30 Oct 2012
Am loving this story so far!! Hope to read more soon. :)
I really loveeee this, Rinku! I told you I would get aroun to reading it and here I am :) can't wait for the next update!
-MissKatt
I hope Sesshomaru beats the tar out of him and then puts him 50 feat under, bucause anything other than that would be an insult!!!
~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess
SeradynAngel (Chapter 18) - Sat 15 Sep 2012
Hi Rinku, I have been reading this story nonstop today. This is by far one of my favorites! You clearly have a gift for writing. Keep up the great work! :)
Andie (Chapter 18) - Fri 14 Sep 2012
I love it. I completely compelled by the storyline that sometimes I don't want to leave my very own dorm room. I can't wait for all the dramatics between her and Sesshy. Ugh, so jealous wish I was Kagome.
Pricila (Chapter 18) - Tue 11 Sep 2012
All the chapters up to know have been awesome! You did great in this chapter, I like how you are slowly making Sessh wake up to his feelings for Kags. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Nelly (Chapter 18) - Tue 11 Sep 2012
Yay! Amazing!!!
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