This is some awesome writing :) I love the plot and It's very well written :) Keep up the awesome work!!!!
Can we throttle Inuyasha? I mean, I really feel that he must need to be knocked unconscious so that we can continue drooling over the sexiness that is Kagome and Sesshomaru ...
But, in all seriousness, you write so well that I find myself a bit jealous of you from time to time. All of your scenes are easily transferred as images, and I never have a problem understanding what you want to say.
This chapter was pure deliciousness (I'm fairly positive that 'deliciousness' isn't a word, but still ...). I absolutely adore how Kagome was completely paranoid about when Sesshomaru was going to show up. I laughed when she said something about the oil ruining his clothes; I could just imagine his facial expression before he goes back to what he was doing.
Speaking of what he was doing ... Do you think it would be too much to ask that I get to have a sex god leaning over my back? I mean, honestly, I've been a good girl and I should get a reward at some point, right? LOL Kagome's one lucky girl.
Anyway, I loved this chapter, and I can tell that things are going to heat up pretty soon ... As soon as someone maims Inuyasha, that is. ^_^
Great work, and I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter!
~Aubrey
Lavender_Breeze (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
Woah woah!!! :P
This chapter was awesome just like the rest of the story, but the bite on her butt was amazing! I'm loving this!!
That was just...scandulous!! *shivers* More please!!
Banana (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
I am 100% on Sessh's side.Inu does have horrible timing.
I would have been a pile of goo if I were Kagome. omgoodness.
Kara (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
Wonderful timing 'Yasha! Hahah poor girl must be mortified. You have a definate flare for torturing characters, that you do :3 I most heartilly approve!
Damn Inuyasha. He just had to ruin the moment. And yes, we all would die with a smile. Loved tha last two chapters and really can't wait for more. Hmm...more smexy sesshoumaru.
Diane (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
I really like this & can hardly wait to see what happens next. Just as an FYI at this part near the bottom of the chapter it should be gait instead of gate; beginning an unhurried gate toward the edge of the clearing.
Gate is like a gate in a fence & gait is; A particular way or manner of moving on foot: a person who ran with a clumsy, hobbling gait.
Sessygurl (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
And I thought the last one was good, wow!!!! I cant help but wonder what was going through his mind, I mean she was in perfect recieving position...lol
Oh. My. God. D8
What a dirty, dirty, dirty dog! lol, I love it! :3 I would die a thousand deaths if that ever happened to me.
Whoa!?! O_O Looks like someone enjoy that a little bit too much!! :D Sesshy thought he was going to get a snack from Kagz!? lol Dirty old dog got to wait for the next fruity favor like we do! ^____^ Now Kagz got something else to think about when he comes and sniff her out again!! I'm surprise Kagz has not learn her lesson yet after 5 time to stop wearing good smelling fruity stuff around that perv of a demon dog. xD Well can't wait for the next favor and hopes it gets more delicious!!! :P
Love the story!! Shesshy is so cute when he's a curious puppy!! Please update as soon as you have the time!! Thanks and keep up the awesome work! :D
Hmmm.... Whata way to make good on a promise. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Lexie (Chapter 5) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
OHMYGOD!!! so totes right i would keel over but not die - you wanna enjoy it no? so why not keel over n enjoy hehe. if i was Kagomes place the big inu wouldn't know what hit him *evil grin showing glinting teeth*
please to be UPDATING!!!!
hi i love this story i can not wait please up date soon
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