UUUUUUUUUUUUUM, 

I just want to say,

THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

I must know more!!!!!

Please do hurry.

I love your story.

I think that one was even cuter than the last. I cant wait to see what next awaits us.

i like the story so far keeps me guess what flavor is next or how he reacts but in a kinda shess fashion to XD cant wait for more

I KNOW OMG I'M POSITIVE I'M AWEFUL FOR THIS:

Here's an idea! Flower scented... douche! For realz! IMAGINE him sniffing around there while everyone is standing around! Omg positively mortifying but funny! GRAND you should totally do it...!

Hehe:) This was another cute one! And I liked Sesshoumaru's comment about not bothering with the likes of Inuyasha. The little voice in my head screamed "DENIED!"

Really liking this story:) Keep 'em comin', m'dear!

~Siki

This is a lovely story! I enjoy how you write Kagome and Sesshoumaru's interactions. <3

Keep up the great work!

- CA

You should do more, it was adorable... and interesting.

I'm getting rather picky about errors the older I get but I didn't see any so you're probably good. Really looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Oh, this is an astonishingly delicious look at things.  Brava!  I am greatly looking forward to subsequent installments.

I really like the way your story is starting. I'm already tired of the rape/betrayal so your story is very refreshing. Please keep it up and I can't wait to read your next chapter! ^.^

I wonder how long it would have been, before either one of us would have caressed his etheral face? Great chap. And I can't wait for Kagome to start thinking like the rest of us. By the way, your flow is superb, its not to fast or slow. Keep it up.

Now go get some sleep.

Chaotic Reverie,

it was cute, I'd like to read more.

Miko Usako

Great start,  I loved when Sesshy started sniffing her lips. And wtf was Inuyasha?

It is a really good start to what I think will be an enjoyable read. You may want to proof read before you post though. Some words are in the wrong place. You meant, 'make do' not make due. ' flicking the access moisture from her toothbrush', I think you meant to say, excess moisture. Other than these minor glitches, good job.

I have one question. How did Kagome keep from kissing him? He was right there. HA HA....  Very good start. I loved the interaction and can't wait to see what else about kagome can grap is curiousity.

Quite an intreging story so far.  Very well written too!  I look forward to your next chapter.

Well, I definitely enjoyed that! I'll be eager to see where this goes and what other scents Kagome can explain - I'm sure all of them won't be that easy!

Your writing is very good - I've read Sangria and reviewed it as well over on FF.net, and your talents definitely haven't faded.

Anyway, I loved this little bit, and good luck!

Much Love,
~Aubrey

HA! Very, very cute:) I will be awaiting your updates eagerly! I don't know exactly where you're going with this  because it's only the first chapter, but it certainly has the potential to be very good! Well-written too, by the way:)

Really enjoyed this. Looking forward to seeing what goes on next.