That was some...that was some...oh, be still my beating heart. I cannot wait the for next chapter! And yay for a sequel! :3
I did enjoy Sesshoumaru's musings on how best to claim his prize. I like the way you have written his clear calm thought processes, you have kept him marvellously in character.
"....now all he had to do was wait for the idiot to come to him..."
So well put. Sesshoumaru knows that with so little effort the foolish InuYasha will present himself and end up wishing he hadn't. I am glad that you did not kill InuYasha because that would have definitely put a kink in the plan because Kagome would have been mightily upset.
I do think that InuYasha is going to have the grandaddy of all heachaches when he awakens!!
I like this chapter just as much as the previous ones and I look forward to more.
Chante (Chapter 6) - Sat 28 Aug 2010
I love it! *Drool*
Please update soon, but be careful. There were a few mistakes in the last couple of chapters. Nothing that would take too much attention away from the actual story... But I guess I'm a stickler for grammar. *shrugs* Sue me.
O.R. (Chapter 6) - Sat 28 Aug 2010
Oh my! How deliciously erotic that coconut chapter was! Simply sinful!
Do not listen to anyone who tells you it was offensive!
I've had much more sinful thoughts on scents and driving sesshoumaru crazy....it would be inappropriate for me to mention my idea for her next scent and it's strategic placement. *evil smile*
Please keep writing and don't change anything to make others happy- they are not being forced to read it. The story has been a fun, amusing and I am enjoying it immensely.
I absolutely adore this story I do so love a wicked Sesshoumaru! I found nothing offensive in any chapter that you've written thus far. I find this story full of good humor and naughtiness what more could one ask for! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 6) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
NOOOOOOO ! I love this story !
Im IN LOVE with this story!!! I totally cracks me up!!!!
Cant wait to read more!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 :D
Kara (Chapter 6) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
I thought the eariler *nip* was adorable! Also now at least we're sure he's out for... more than just sampling and sniffing 8D I hope your computer doesn't bite the dust, if only because I've had two computers bite the dust before and it sucks to loose EVERYTHING you had on them. Good luck!
Kanna37 (Chapter 6) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
After all the things I've seen on this and other sites, I can't believe ppl would bark at you over that little nip to the rear in that last chapter. I have to agree with you - he could do that to me anytime with no complaints. I certainly found nothing wrong with it, and I imagine that most didn't, so poo on those who did. As for this chapter - it's a teaser, and I can't wait to see the rest!
Your Fan,
Amber
Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
AHH!!! You trease..however it was most enjoyable to see what the Taiyoukai thinks about this whole situation, he must have melted when he saw her in the bikini...
Well, I had to go back and reread coconut to try and figure out what you said had offended people... personally, I couldn't find anything offensive about the nip on the rear. Dogs DO do that, and quite frankly so do some amorous human men. I thought it was sensual, not gross or offensive or demeaning or anything. But whatever - to each is own, but personally I saw it as fitting for the story and found nothing wrong with it. I was also grateful for the interlude: 1) I needed my Reverie fix (been missing Sangria) and 2) I though that it lent well to the "plot" of the story... which I get that its kinda a PWP, but even a good PWP has a little something going on... like in this case its the chase and the tension between the two. I'm still anxiously waiting to find out if there is more to this "flavor" thing than meets the eye... I think there is a little Kagome Flavor there that is what is REALLY driving our lovable lord so looney. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
HA!! xD Inuyasha had that coming!!! :D Thats what he gets for coming in at the wrong time from last chappie!!! ^____^ Now for Sesshy prize ....
This chapter made me giggle. Not sure why... but at any rate,
YOU HAVE DISTRACTED ME FROM MY HOMEWORK THAT IS DUE IN AN HOUR!!!...
Good job. XP (I dun wanna do it, I wanna read dis again... *pouts*)
Lexie (Chapter 6) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
love, love, love heres your review ^.^
its going awesomely great - you might want to double check for spelling errors though - keep up the great work!
please to be updating!!!
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