Alright so I missed my chance to review the last chapter, so I'll go ahead and give you a little run down of that one before I move on to this one ... 
The way that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha interacted in the last installment was absolutely perfect. I could clearly see each expression that must have passed over their faces, and the result of your hard work is definitely paying off. I enjoyed the interaction between Sesshomaru and Kagome as well, and I have to say that you're keeping everyone in character very well. 
Now, for this chapter ... 
Sesshomaru's actions were a shock to me as well, and I'm sure my mother  would've asked me if I was alright if she'd come in and seen me staring  at the computer screen with my mouth wide open. You do a very good job  of portraying emotions and reactions through words, and I have to say  that I've never really seen anyone handle an odd acting Sesshomaru as  well as you do. 
I absolutely adore the "parallel universe" thought that Kagome has, about Sango groping Miroku instead of the other way around. That was hilarious, and I have to commend you for that one - you made me laugh ^_^ 
All in all, this was a very nice chapter, and I'll be eagerly waiting for the next! 
~Aubrey 
      
Diane (Chapter 3) - Thu 19 Aug 2010 
Snort! ROTFLMAO I can hardly wait for the next one to see what she puts on next & what Sess does about it. 
      
getbackban (Chapter 3) - Thu 19 Aug 2010 
i loved this!cant wait to read more. 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Aug 2010 
Also, someone said it was make do instead of Make Due, but they're wrong. Make Do is two verbs in a row, and therefore wrong. 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Aug 2010 
Super cute! I can't wait til you write another chapter. Maybe about something Sesshomaru doesn't recognize? Like Sandalwood or something exotic. Or maybe just something he knows is super rare.  
      
KitKat (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Aug 2010 
Woooooooot! 
Keep it coming! Next time get Sesshomaru to do something even more weird! 
And it looks like a certain hanyou *coughs* Inuyasha *coughs* is jealousssssss :D 
      
SEB (Chapter 2) -  Wed 18 Aug 2010 
Charming story! 
      
*^_^*  I really like this!!  It's too bad Sesshoumaru was curious enough to see if her mouth also tasted like mint. >:3 
I love this idea, please continue soon!!! 
      
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