Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

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naqaashi (Chapter 30) - Thu 29 Sep 2011

"Feeling greedy and safe, he took Kagome’s touch as invitation and brought her closer to him." ---- I love how well this line exposes Sesshoumaru's feelings in general, about this whole debacle. He's losing everything, and he feels unsafe, almost stripped naked. And he'd do anything for a bit of security. And I love how he can only find it with Kagome. 

But Meta's still being bratty. >_> And Todo is an ASS. >.< 


Cent (Chapter 29) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

Amazing story!!! Im enjoying reading it and looking forward to reading the next chapter


MLMonty (Chapter 29) - Mon 12 Sep 2011

You repeated urself here "A wife, concubine or female consort cannot have ..."

 

A wife and female consort are the same thing.

 

I'm gald ur contiuing the story. It's interesting.


naqaashi (Chapter 29) - Mon 12 Sep 2011

I HATE Massagu. Bastard. And I loathe Inuyasha too, for starting this mess, the selfish idiot. ::cries for poor Sess and Kag:: 

Oh, I noticed an error in your description of clothing. Hakama are the pants and Gi is the jacket. You've written them the other way around. XD And I do wish things would start looking up for these two, but I have the feeling they're gonna get worse first. And I REALLY want Kagome to murder Inuyasha. Or at lease maim him. 


Fanfictioner (Chapter 28) - Sat 10 Sep 2011

So is Hatori both Kaome and Sesshomaru's grandfather??


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 29) - Fri 09 Sep 2011

D: okay for someone that LOVES to hack his hair off in art, i'm REALLY sad about this in fanfiction! Kagome shoulw grow hair out!!!


Giannix (Chapter 29) - Fri 09 Sep 2011

OMG!!!! Sessh cut his hair!!! x___x...... update soon :D


Nilee1 (Chapter 29) - Fri 09 Sep 2011

So sad...I hate to see Sesshoumaru like this.


Lexy217 (Chapter 29) - Fri 09 Sep 2011

How could you cut his hair!!!! I feel so bad for him! It's not fair!!!


Cent (Chapter 28) - Wed 24 Aug 2011

OMG lol I love how the last chapter ended! I love reading this story and looking forward to the next chapter ^^ Im glad your not stopping this one ^^


REDWOLF (Chapter 28) - Sat 13 Aug 2011

Woe..what a fantastic chapter.


naqaashi (Chapter 28) - Sat 13 Aug 2011

Jeee-niiiiiiiiiiiiii! ::gets teary-eyed::

 

If that ungrateful beast of Sess's makes Kags fall in lust with his uncle...I'll never, ever, ever forgive her! >.<


Kinkyfairy33 (Chapter 28) - Sat 13 Aug 2011

LOVE this story!! i can't believe meta is in love with todo!! and that's kagome's grandfather in the future?? WHAT!!!?? Update soon!


emerald skye (Chapter 7) - Sun 31 Jul 2011

OMG. That just made shivers run down my back! Gah, Sesshoumaru and his way of doing things....


blu_luna07 (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jul 2011

ah ur gonna shorten it thats mean lol jk its whatever u decide ne lol cant wait for the next 1in


naqaashi (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jul 2011

D: You can't finish it so soon! I mean, I wanna know the end, BADLY, but not all rushed and such! And trust me, if it seems that interest seems to be declining it's only cuz of the long wait between updates - I've had that happen to my fics too! So just keep on updating! D: 

 

Coming to the chapter itself...sess was mean >.< but....damn him, honourable. XD Fix em both up? ::puppy eyes:: and you CAN'T have Kagome die before sess, right? D:


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jul 2011

you and luna, are out to make r0o nuts @_@ -wobbly nods-


AccidentalGoddess (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jul 2011

I love the twist. I can't wait to see what will happen with this addition. (Just hoping that somehow it will mean that he's not actually Kagome's grandfather...because that would mean icky things for her and Sesshomaru. ;P) Hope to see more soon!!!


1CarinoInu (Chapter 27) - Thu 28 Jul 2011

Aww, and I really like this fic too!  But I know how hard it is to write when you see the reads decline chapter after chapter.  

I had a review send me a great quote.  'Quoted from Cyril Connelly on a rerun of "Criminal Minds" the other night. "It is better to write for yourself and have no public than to write for the public and have no self.'

I liked it so I pass it on to you. 


Jazmine (Chapter 27) - Thu 28 Jul 2011

Aah!! I like the little twist of him being her grandpa :) Keep it up! Still lovin the story :D


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