Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

Page 7 of 17
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Next > End >>
naqaashi (Chapter 40) - Thu 12 Apr 2012

ASDFDGJHKIUSHILAHIUHSDKJFHLHALDSLJSLKJHDIUEHWIFHEKDJAHSNJDLKSNALJNCLKEIWUYHKFESBD VCKJNBDKHEWAJKJDKJSAJLSJDLASAFDFADSADSADDFGF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS TORTURE HAS TO BE ILLEGAL! ::puts a petition for faster, longer update next time::

 

 


Deana (Chapter 40) - Mon 09 Apr 2012

Good update! Can't wait for next one but please don't take too long. 


Kristen (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Apr 2012

This sounds like it's going to be amazing :D I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome talks to him about...Whatever it is she's going to talk to him about o.O


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 40) - Sun 08 Apr 2012

omfg you make me so 0o0o00o0o0o for more!!! so... in the underworld kagome is kikyo?


Loveyaa (Chapter 39) - Sat 17 Mar 2012

Hmm...a lot of things have been set up and I'm excited to see where they all go. I think I worry the most for Meta (where could she possibly be). Poor everybody right now. The emotion behind everything is great though and draws you in. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


naqaashi (Chapter 39) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

::makes you a To-Do list and tacks it to your fridge with a magnet::

 

1. Get Meta back into Kagome.

2. Let Tohru move on and be happy.

3. Tell us what the heck happened to Yusha...and for heaven's sake just kill him already. He's getting on my LAST nerve.

4. Lots and lots and lots and lots of cuddle time for Kagome and Sesshoumaru! ::squishes you::

 


jhiz (Chapter 29) - Thu 01 Mar 2012

Oh... the hair cutting thing was an awesome idea... and so sad because it is one of his most prominent features... you make me ache for your Sesshi... this is a wonderful story and I am loving each gut-wrenching turn.  Thank you so much for sharing your vision.


Wanda (Chapter 38) - Tue 28 Feb 2012
Yikes! Yea! I hope this isn't the last of this. I was so absorbed in reading it that I didn't realize it was the last chapter.

Sala (Chapter 38) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

...and then we were left hanging.  I hope the next chapter comes quickly.


Deana (Chapter 38) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

That was excellent but I need more. What a cliff hanger! I hope you update soon.


Loveyaa (Chapter 38) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

Quite the battle. ILois quiteenjoy the buildup and the fact that people did get hurt (even if they were powerful). But ding dong naraku is dead. I wonder what this means for everybody. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


MissKatt (Chapter 38) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

Ohhh noes D: What happened to Meta? And Yay! Go Kagome!! :3

I meant to comment on this as soon as I beta-ed it, but I had a lotta stuff going on ^^;;

-MissKatt

 


regular reader (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

The most exciting chapter ever! Perfect pace! Beautiful description

of the battle! Brilliant! Keep up the good work and hope the next

chapter arrives soon!


naqaashi (Chapter 38) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

Shoot the head! Cried Meta desperately, You must hit the head hurry!

Kagome quickly took her arrow and started to infuse her power into it, “But Meta, you could be hurt!”


Really, Kagome? Really? Right in the middle of a battle where not acting fast might kill your mate, his mother AND his uncle - and you're worried about hurting a millenia-old beast who will recover even if she gets hit? And you didn't consider that she KNEW she would get hit (how could she not know, being the battle veteran she is, plus being right in the line of fire?), and she probably didn't care about getting hurt. She just just wanted to take the ONE chance you all had in several years to destroy Naraku, because if you didn't take that chance, who knows when you would get another?

All that and she still hesitated to act like a naive teenager? ::sighs:: I don't know if this is just typical of Kagome or what, but she's lucky that her hesitation didn't get them all killed.

Good job on the tension and tautness in this chappie, though - I was on the edge of my seat the whole time - except when Kgaome acted like a fool. That just made me go "Okay, now they're dead. Unless Meta manages a miracle."


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 38) - Sun 26 Feb 2012

O_O

 

 

 

O___________O

 

 

 

 

O__________________________O

 

 

 

 

 

O______________________________________________O

 

 

 

 

What?

 

 

 

*twitches* FIXIT! MORE! *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you!


Lady Nefertiti (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Feb 2012

lol....love the last sentence and your fic starting from chapter 1. I'll be reviewing your fic. 

--Lady Nefertiti. 


naqaashi (Chapter 37) - Thu 23 Feb 2012

O__O

 

So much time and you give us a cliffie? ::sobs::


REDWOLF (Chapter 37) - Wed 22 Feb 2012

Woe!!! This was so good :)


MissKatt (Chapter 37) - Tue 21 Feb 2012

Loveee! As always! ahhhhh, go Meta! I can't wait to see what happens!

-MissK


a twitchy r0o (Chapter 37) - Tue 21 Feb 2012

see makes me crazy in a good way! more pelase!


Page 7 of 17
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.