Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

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visitor (Chapter 32) - Wed 14 Dec 2011

I look forward eagerly to the next installment. Such a brilliant story. Exquisite writing.


naqaashi (Chapter 33) - Wed 14 Dec 2011

Damn it, where's Sess?! ::frets frets frets:: I actually want MammaSess to win against Naraku....show how badass she is!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 33) - Tue 13 Dec 2011

yanno what, you always make me so very hyper crazy with this fic, i feel teased but satified at the same time @_@ how do you do that i demand more :3 ♥ ps i REALLY hope that kagome takes her soul back from kikyo, even if she doesnt need it,, if only to make ti so that naraku doesnt have her!


Killa (Chapter 32) - Wed 16 Nov 2011

K one i'm loveing yoiur story and two keep miroku/sango please and thank you those two are the best match for each other 


yume (Chapter 32) - Sun 13 Nov 2011

Well may be Kuranosuke is a good match for sango..   :O  i wonder how will sesshoumaru react if kagome choose another mate :O.. update soon!!


Loveyaa (Chapter 32) - Sun 13 Nov 2011

It seems like everybody is struggling. Though trying to make it work. I like the changing interactions between Sesshoumaru and Kagome and that we are privy to both their innerworkings and thoughts. I think that Sango should end up with Miroku though. It would be a nice reunion to have him see her with his child and both reunited and in love to start their happy family. No offense to the other guy. I can't wait to see what happens next though :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 32) - Sun 13 Nov 2011

Sango/miroku as a pairing is awesome but at the same time, i get tired of it b/c i see it so much, sango could feel after all this that she needed stability. AND for some odd wonky reason i LOVE the idea of Miroku with an of age Shiori! i alwasy think she'll jsut barrier him up and take him home when he's naughty.

Sango/miro's first child should be female!

I also hope that Naraku challenges Kagome and she uses's rock sock miko powers to disentigrate him. or that jiji ends up saying he can fight but not with the shikon. and there be far too many full youkai to win against even with the shikon. I always feel liek D: MORE!!! demandy when you update this fic!


Lillian (Chapter 31) - Fri 11 Nov 2011

Sib. I just spent an hour and a half reading this. It is AMAZING. No, honestly. It is EPIC.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 31) - Sat 05 Nov 2011

D: so much drama! more please!


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 31) - Sat 05 Nov 2011

I love your story the characters are so rich. The story is lush with details that form a wonderful world. I love Sesshomaru"s stubbornness. The attention you paid to the customs of the different character’s background is great, it adds a great dimension to the story. I look forward to reading more of your amazing story.


Lily Noir (Chapter 31) - Fri 04 Nov 2011

Love it.... I can't find more to say..... or better yet, I'm speechless. They are both portrayed wonderfully and the story is AWESOME. Absolutely can't wait for more (and for Kag to prove there is more to her than he thinks). =))))

~lily


Loveyaa (Chapter 31) - Fri 04 Nov 2011

its all building up pretty quickly, I wonder when it will pop(!). Sesshoumaru seems very alone in this and I love his determination and stance behind his morals. I wonder when Kagome and Meta will get to bond though. Hopefully the confusion clears up for all of us. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 31) - Thu 03 Nov 2011

Answer: Ask Her. Give her the option and Ask Her.

It's a start, anyway.

Thanks for writing!


Cent (Chapter 30) - Sun 23 Oct 2011

I love the story!!!!! looking forward to the next chapter ^^


Ceysna (Chapter 30) - Sat 22 Oct 2011

OMG!!!! so much is happening!! I cried when I read that Sesshy cut his hair.... I hope Kags gets revenge for everything that has happened for Smexy-Sesshy... I really do. And now Rin is a miko?!? AWESOME!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!!

Great story, I am REALLY looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the great work!


shlane (Chapter 30) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

Nuinzilien (Chapter 30) - Fri 30 Sep 2011

Loveyaa (Chapter 30) - Fri 30 Sep 2011

everything is building up and I can't wait to see where everything is going. I love that we get a look at all the stories going on right now and I can't wait til they bottle neck and meet up again. Sesshoumaru seems to be in a pickle. I wonder if there is a way that he can get his beast back. It was very interesting to see Meta as the dominant persona for once and actually talking and showing her personality with Sesshoumaru. I also can't wait to see Miroku's reaction when he realizes that Sango is pregnant. Aww...so many good things to come and I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Mayra (Chapter 30) - Fri 30 Sep 2011

I just started reading your story yesterday, and I'm captivated by it! There's always a new twist, character, or problem happening to keep me wanting more. Primero is a brilliant story and quite an interesting read. To be honest I started reading this story thinking I would probably read another unfinished story, but it makes me happy to see you updating it! Thank you for that and keep up the great work!

-Mayra 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 30) - Fri 30 Sep 2011

oh wow! this is an interesting turn of events!


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