Reviews for Primero by JeniNeji

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ponpiri (Chapter 24) - Tue 13 Jun 2017

This story is interesting, but you have a lot of original characters with little depth and almost no description of what they look like besides their hair color. I actually kind of like your writing style, but even that isn't consistent it depends on your beta. I know this story is mad old and you probably won't see this, but just in case you're still lurking around or whatever. 


ponpiri (Chapter 14) - Mon 12 Jun 2017

You do a really great job of portraying Sesshoumaru's thoughts without making him seem like a neurotic, "human" mess. Everybody's in character too so far 


ponpiri (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Jun 2017

Yo... Kagome needs to get a grip. She wouldn't like it if Sesshoumaru attempted to dictate how to raise Shippou. She's very indignant in this story. It's bordering on irritating. 


ponpiri (Chapter 3) - Mon 12 Jun 2017

Wow. Inuyasha is a punk for sending Kagome out to do his dirty work. And Kagome's a doormat for agreeing. smh


snow (Chapter 29) - Mon 14 Mar 2016

omg that just pissed me off and made me wanna cry at the same time how dare they i love sesshoumarus hair!!!! but it does go with how things was in the past long hair was shown as part of status *sigh* still T_T....


Cheryl (Chapter 62) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

awesome story you got here, very interesting concept of transfering the beast as one mates or gives birth. :)


sandra (Chapter 62) - Thu 23 Oct 2014

I LOVE IT!! Me super encanto!!

toda esta semana entre levantarme y leer unos cuantos capitulos, luego en mi lunch y en mi break....estuve todos estos dias pegada a mi cel leyendo y disfrutando de este hermoso fan fic!

mil gracias por compartirlo!

you are really amaizing!

desde mty n.l. te mando un fuerte abrazo!!


ponygirl (Chapter 62) - Sun 14 Jul 2013

Great story and very well done. Thanks!


Starfyre (Chapter 62) - Sat 13 Jul 2013

It was a great story beginning to end and I'm gonna miss it now that it's over.

You did an excellent job the whole way through!

I will reread it in the future I'm sure.

I look forward to more of your work!

~Starfyre


Loveyaa (Chapter 62) - Tue 09 Jul 2013

Wow!! I can't believe it is over. It was quite the ride, but they all make it through (with the power of love <3) I like that you had them all grow as characters throughout the story and yet still stay true to themselves. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)


Ankita (Chapter 62) - Tue 09 Jul 2013

Lovely fic .... lovely ending ...

thank you author for writing this beautiful storyyy...

loved it and gonna miss it :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 62) - Mon 08 Jul 2013

This story was amazing and awesome, and I enjoyed it!


Kae (Chapter 62) - Mon 08 Jul 2013

That was a good story, I'm glad I stayed for the whole thing. :)


elizabeth (Chapter 60) - Mon 08 Jul 2013

esta historia me agrado mucho tienes mucho talento y muchas  grasias por escribirla 


jazogirl (Chapter 59) - Fri 05 Jul 2013

LOL IVE PROBABLY READ THIS STORY A HUNDRED TIMES BUT MY FAVORITE PART IS WHEN THE PUP IS COMING!!!!:)

love this story! i tilt my hat to u! please update soon:)


Ankita (Chapter 61) - Fri 14 Jun 2013

thank god both of them are alive...

I almost had a heart attack ..."happy tears"


NicoRavenPen (Chapter 61) - Wed 12 Jun 2013

~~Phew! Dodged a heartbreaking moment there! XD More!


Loveyaa (Chapter 61) - Wed 12 Jun 2013

Aww...I love it when things come together. Him getting two beasts, for this moment! It all works out. Congrats on your end. I wonder how you are going to wrap this up. I can't wait to see what happens next and the baby (!) but I almost don't want it to end :)


lular (Chapter 61) - Tue 11 Jun 2013

Great chapter.  I did not forsee Sesshoumaru having two beasts...but who is Kogane? Lol


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 61) - Tue 11 Jun 2013

Great chapter, keep it coming.


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