Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Tana_san (Chapter 64) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

Don't you just hate it when you have an arguement and in the heat of it all, you say something that can potentially end the relationship? I know exactly how Kagome felt. I also know how she felt when she stayed outside waiting and praying that he'd come back, but being scared to bits when you two are finally in front of each other.

I'm happy they were able to make things right but I honestly think that sometimes jumping each other until you both are exhausted says more than all the words ever can. But since they promised no rutting, leave it to InuYasha to give them alternate ways to accomplish their desire to reaffirm said love.

Best lines..." If you can't use the proper tool for the job, use a tool that will still get the job done.... As long as tab A does not go near slot B, you're good." Leave it to InuYasha. At least he wasn't overly crude with his analogies.

I also liked the scene with InuYasha and Kikyou. I think it would be great if InuYasha was her first lover. She seems so reserved and nervous around him, like she's afraid she's not someone he would want to be with. She may have dated before but just couldn't do it until it felt right and with InuYasha, she knows he's the right one. I like how he stepped up and told her he thought she was attractive and any guy that thought otherwise was either blind or just plain gay. I also found his stammering for the right words so he didn't cuss was cute. It shows what she thinks is important to him.

All in all, another wonderful chapter.  JEN


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

ah, so glad that's over with, but how long will Sesshoumaru stay?


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

aaaah... i have a feeling something bad is about to happen...


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Rainyaviel (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

*emerges from the shadows where all good ninja readers lurk* Just wanted to let you know that I'm still with you and reading!

The last few chapters have been very captivating... just as they all have... and I can't seem to get enough. I find myself finishing a chapter only to be thoroughly dissapointed that the next one hasn't magically appeared and have to remind myself that all authors take time, even the great ones. With that being said, you are doing a wonderful job with content, length and updating. I look forward to the upcoming chapters and I can't wait to see what will happen next.

However... I had this highly amusing thought... what if Kagome is carrying a male and female pup... and the male scent is just overwhelming the boys so they can't tell? XDD Probably not likely but could you imagine the shock on their faces when a female pup comes out and they were expecting another boy?! XDD *rolls across the floor of the classroom laughing* ... oh... shoot... that's right I'm supposed to be doing the test, not reading fanfics... oops ^.^'


ceres (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

Actually. I don´t think that Kagome was in the wrong. Sesshoumaru was always hurtful to her before the one night they spent together and he told her again and again what he thought of humans. Inuyasha wasn´t helping either when he told her how Sesshoumaru treated him for many years or that he probably won´t accept his hanyou children. Why are they acting as if Kagome was the monster? Sure, she should have believed that he wouldn´t harm his own children but how could she when all both the males did and say was the opposite? I don´t blame her and she is the mother, she has to think of her children firstly. The males act more irrational than her and she is the one with hormonal problems. What mess.


Sprinks (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh awesome!

i'm so glad they worked it out... and found a way to get around the no rutting :P thanks to inuyasha!

YAY! kikyo and yasha finally get together!!! :D woooooooooooooo
you've made my day!

update soon! :D


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!“As long as tab A does not go near slot B, you’re good.” LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

That... I must say... was freaking brilliant!!!!!!!!!

ZGlad you added Kags POV. I can say it was what i thought hehe

Great chappies!!!! Impatiently waiting for more seeing how i'm practically checking my email every hr....

 

sigh....

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

Huzzah!  They're together again, even if just for a while :D  It is definitely frustrating to read how much words can be misconstrued at times, I guess it doesn't matter what one says, it's what the other hears.

Wonderful chapter!


Eve (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

OMG!!!!  I LOVE this story!!!!  You are updating faster than I have a chance to read !   I Love being able to read a chapter to find another waiting!!!!!

 

More Please!!!!!

 

Thanks!!!!

Kiri >^.^<


kagomesirene (Chapter 64) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

well...sometimes word are overrated *lol*

seems this is one of the situations >.<

but honestly, i'm happy the misunderstanding is (more or less) resolved, kagome knows that he won't hurt the pups, and that he feels something for her, even though he still needs to tell her that he still wants her for a mate....and now we have a little bit of progress between inuyasha and kikyou too :)

can't wait to read more soon


Tana_san (Chapter 63) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

Having Kagome's point of view was a valid question but I honestly didn't think to say anything as I figured you would have it already covered in this chapter.

I can see that the training Sesshoumaru has being going through has done a world of good for his tolerance levels, that and knowing that Kagome wasn't going to just invite him in for tea to discuss the matter calmly. No, he knew she has a fiery temper and isn't afraid to confront any matter with that fire and spirit that drew her to him in the first place.

I must admit that I, too, was surprised by her thought that he may bring harm to the pups. Even if she was given false information, the way he was getting her to submit to him and relax enough to actually hear and feel what he was doing, I thought those gestures of reacquinting himself with her body and scent, lovingly putting small nips and licks along her neck and softly touching the swell of her abdoman would have been enough to tell her that he wasn't there to harm her or their pups. She just wasn't thinking. Sad, yes, but hopefully he'll be able to just forgive her for her being misinformed and then whack his brother upside his head for being the one to fill her mind with such a thought.

I was impressed that Kikyou thought to go to Shippou and prevent him from interferring in a matter that,he as a child, has no right to get into, even if he thought he was protecting that which he thought of as his mother. My own mother would get angry and sometimes slap our face for things we would say when she and dad fought. She always said that what is said between them was none of our business and that he was a good provider and father that loved his girls the only way he knew how and we needed to understand that no one is perfect and things said in the heat of anger are not always truly meant when things are given a chance to calm done. My mother was a very wise woman and we learned to keep out of their arguments, mainly for her sake. We were mostly Mama's girls at that point in life.

I do believe that the cave that was mentioned would be a good place for dicussing and "disgussing" what is needed to bring them to where no doubt will ever hurt them again. I had liked that idea alot and maybe their powers wouldn't be able to cut through so much rock. I think they both really need to reconfirm what they mean to each other.

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next.  JEN


Sprinks (Chapter 63) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
i am so excited!

poor sesshomaru and kagome. :(

update ASAP! i wanna know what happens next!

=D

i'm in love with this story!


snowbird (Chapter 63) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

I can understand Kagome being angry but she carried it way too far.  Before she exploded on him, she should have asked for an explanation as to why he was there.  Also, he should have spoken up in the beginning the truth about the letter.  And shame on her for thinking he would harm the pups.  That was cruel.  I'm feeling more sorry for him than I am her right now.  He was so nervous and excited to see her, only to have this happen.  She has a lot of crawling to do when he returns.  They really need the use of Shippo's cave for more than mating.  They need to get their emotions straightened out and have a long talk first with no interruptions.


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 63) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

Yikes, that chapter made me cringe.  Lots of hurt feelings, lots of bad words spoken.  I wonder if Kagome's foot tastes good?  XP

Not much to say, I'm a bit overwhelmed with this!  Poor Sesshoumaru...

Great chapter Miss O!


toranushi23 (Chapter 63) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

I have been thoroughly enthralled with this story thanks to you!! and I love it!! Keep it up! I can't wait to see how it ends!


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 63) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

ack! it was going happy too!


Snowfall (Chapter 63) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

Holy crap!  Poor Sesshoumaru.  I feel so bad for him now.  I hope that use of his power doesn't do anything to the set off any alarms.  *wrings hands*  I can't wait for him to come back.  *whine*  Your description of Kagome's submission was too cool.  You did a great job on the chapter.  Thanks for giving us her POV.


Tana_san (Chapter 62) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

Alright, now things are starting to make themselves known. I had figured that there may be some plan like this in the works and that they knew Sesshoumaru would make an excellent leader. Yeah, I agree with Sato, they have no idea how loyal the beings Miroku has worked with are loyal to him and no other.

I liked the little mix up in the parking lot with Sessh and Aiya. I agree to that Sato would have a field day with that. I did however feel sorry for Aiya. I honestly could feel Sesshoumaru's anger and disgust what this strange woman was doing. Sato told him those close got the honeys all sexcited.

Now this wasn't exactly the reunion I was expecting. I mean, it was up to the point of the slap but that was a nice touch. It spoke volumes without her needing to say one word. I can imagine how the rest will go but I think I'll just go to sleep for now and wait for your version. It is your story after all. Great chapter, Lady O.  JEN


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