I'm still a little confused as to what just happened, but YEAH! Go TEAM!!!

i understand, school could suck it, i'v got two projects and a research paper due next week when i get off spring break ): i gotta update my own story. but great chapter, i do love how Kagome was so understanding for everyones need of shippou, even if he was in a little danger. maybe inuyasha and kikyou will get their happily ever after soon, no? maybe.. update soon!

Ooo, good update.  So the "battle" begins.  I hope that no one followed Mikaru and Sato to Kikyo's location.  It would be awful if Sesshoumaru and Shippo were lured away.....and Sato not know about it.

Ok I think I am long overdue for giving a review. When I first start reading this story which was a couple of days ago i was so enamored by it that I just had to keep reading. I have to say that I am not really fond of story that are set in the future but this and a few other stories have completely changed my mind about that. This story is so well written and when I read it its kinda like i'm sitting in a movie experiencing every single detail, and I LOVE it! So far I have predicted many things that were gonna happen but the twists and turns you slip into the plot really have me going for a loop. I love the way the supense keeps me on edge, its such a thrill. Well thought I should live my review. Going to keep reading.

I bow to Tana_san and give credit where credits due.  I forgot that in some of her early reviews, she expressed doubts about Sango being the instigator of the letter writing and switching.  She was way ahead of me on this.  Thank you Tana_san for jogging my memory.

You GO SHIPPOU!!!!

Is there something more to Sesshoumaru not wanting to punish Mikaru? Mikaru seemed to think he was in for some damage when he told Sesshoumaru everything. Maybe Sesshoumaru going through his own personal hell being separated from Kagome has something to do with his understanding?

I am also a little confused about something else. How did the director expect Mikaru to turn Sesshoumaru over when no one but Miroku was to know about where this place was located? Miroku told Sato that he needed to be sure to tell no one because only Miroku, himself, knew of this place so Kikyou would safe. How did the director think Mikaru could show up there when Kikyou knew only Miroku would have that imformation and therefore she would know something was corrupt when a youkai she didn't know showed up. Something isn't right. Was Miroku drugged into revealing the location and that Sesshoumaru was there to see Kagome? Hmmm....

I am also very impressed with Sato's strategic, military type knowledge. I wonder if anyone but Miroku knew this about him? He and Sesshoumaru will make an excellent team and since InuYasha and Mikaru were working with Sessh to keep the area they lived in safe, this guy has no idea just who he's up against... and then Shippou being their illusionist...that director won't know what hit him!!!

I'm getting sooo anxious to see how you put this all together.  JEN

Go Shippou!  That little guy is just proving to be the savior for all :)  I'm definitely looking forward to the search and rescue, there's a lot that's going on within that department and I'm sure it'll be an interesting affair to read.

Wonderful work, as per usual!  I look forward to the next chapter.

aaaah, so they do have it under control. kinda... please please please please please please nobody die! this ritard that wants take over the world better not kill anyone! well nobody important... okay the least amount of deaths possible. i still love this story, update soon!

Poor Mikaru.  At least Sesshoumaru understood the delimma that Mikaru was caught in. 

I've not read the reviews for the last couple of days, so I don't know if anyone else has thought of what occurred to me earlier today while thinking about the previous chapter.  I wonder if Sango has someone close to her that's being held hostage and that she was forced to switch letters.

It would seem that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha have themselves a couple of firery female defenders.    So sweet!

LMAO!!!!  Oh man, what a way to be interrupted!  *snort*  Oh geeze, that was priceless. 

Yay!!!  Kagome and Sesshoumaru are mated XD  Huzzah!  What a good little kit Shippou is.  I enjoyed this chapter very much, you're doing a fabulous job :)

gasp. why is Sato being so disruptive! what could he possibly have to say or do that is that important, huh? i am so confused on this whole evil villain thing. so Miroku is kidnapped, this mikuru guy was forced to help because the 'villain' has also kidnapped his girlfriend, and Sato is also in on this because he wants to free Miroku? and he had to interrupt the Kikyou and Inuyasha fluff while he was at it... 

Aw sato has to come in and be a jerk! I hope kikyo tells him that inu is most certianly not defiling her :) girl just needs some love

Shame on Sato.  Poor Inuyasha and Kikyou.  Just when they both had made an important decision to take the next step.  At least Sesshoumaru and Kagome are mated now.  Whew!  What images!  Now they all have to stop that mad, maniac supervisor.

Things are really getting intense!  I sure hope that Sesshoumaru comes fully into his power and is able to protect everyone.  And, how the heck is Sato supposed to rescue Miroku if that bastard supervisor has a bead on him?  You are making things very complex and scary.  Well done!

I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are mated now and hope that it helps them more than it hurts.  I don't know if I could handle it if those bastards got their hands on Sesshoumaru by threatening his pack.  He needs to have a 'no mercy' policy toward the bad guys and kill them all!  Yeah!  Muahahahahah.  Kill them all!

Oooh, I don't like what Sato said to Inuyasha.  He sounds bad, and needs the shit kicked out of him.  Grrrr.

Anyway, you have me on pins and needles!  ^_^

LMFAO!!!!!!

I SSOOOOOOO LOVE SHIPPO!!!!!

Such a smart one that one is. love the new development :-)

SOMEBODY SWIITCHED THE LETTER!!!!!!  D:

Oh no, poor Miroku!  That guy just can't catch a break.

On the plus side, a potential mating is DEFINITELY something to look forward to ;)  You've got some very interesting plot going on here and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

I knew that Mikaru would be the one to be used as the traitor but having Sato already know what was going on was genius. I honestly don't think that Sato will have much trouble convincing Sesshoumaru or Kagome into helping. Miroku being held captive will make that decision easy.

I like how you made the idea of the cave for the mating Shippou's idea but included Kikyou and InuYasha, too. I had to laugh when InuYasha blurted out how the female shishi practically accosted Sesshoumaru in the parking lot and it had everyone in stitches. It's bad enough that Kagome heard it but I'm sure having Kikyou and Shippou hear that put Sesshoumaru's temper in overdrive. What an absolutely perfect way to give Sesshoumaru the "fuel" he needs to get his power and aura to burn strong enough to prove the theory. They'll need that mating if Sesshoumaru has to help fight and still know that Kagome and their pups are safe.   JEN 

Absolutely love ending of this chapter:)

And, of course, love whole story of yours. Thank you for writing it. I likle how you develop each of the characters from chapter to chapter, opening different sites of each person.