Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Midnight Cat (Chapter 78) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

Wow!! What a chapter!! This was amazing!! My adrenaline levels where up the roof!! I was reading while picturing everything in my mind and and my hands actually began to sweat! I was so into the story my family keeps making fun of me saying that my eyes were as big as plates and that I began to breath faster and faster! (I didn't even noticed!!)

I guess sometimes I really get into the stories I read!!

But this was amazing! A really great chapter and finally we see retribution made for all the pain that was inflicted upon everyone!!

I am dying to find out what happens next, this story is just one amazing rollercoaster of emotions!! I love it!!

Thank you for updating!

Hugs:

MidCat


TruGemini (Chapter 78) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

This chapter was awesome! I loved it! I could feel the anger and the angst and see the scenes playing out in my head when hunting the man. Great Job!


Tana_san (Chapter 78) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

"Do as you will"....Clap**Clap**Clap....Bravo... Excellent...Perfection!!!  I bow, respectfully, to the authoress. Even InuYasha is coming into himself. Only big brother is allowed to call him names.   JEN


kazenokoi (Chapter 78) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

excellent chapter! Glad to see the foe finally got his JUST DESSERTS!

 

 


Sena (Chapter 78) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

Exciting chapter! So glad the bad guy did not get away, and glad Kagome is becomming chipper again!


katlady (Chapter 78) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

FINALY... th  jerk  paid...he deserved it too

 

::lol; pregnate ladys  and  Pizza...Good  combo no?

 

 

:poke: :poke:

Update


Sandreline Moon (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I would like to take out that it took me FOREVER to read this story!

But WOW am I glad that I did!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon, I am dying here!  Oh jeez, I got so used to being able to click to the next chapter that when I reached this one to find out what happens next, and actual tear came to my eye!

It is un-imaginatively original, and I felt as if I was right there besides the characters watching everything as it happened.  Brava! Well written, I cannot wait for more!  Please update soon!

~Sandreline


loveyaa (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

A great lost has been felt by all and I can't wait for everyone to get absolution from this heinous crime. I can't wait for the final showdown. I feel it will be as stupendous as the describing of everybody's emotions and feelings. I can't wait til next time...


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

Go get 'em boys!  Make him pay!  Another anguishing chapter, but the fierce determination towards the end was very well placed.  Wonderful work!


Tana_san (Chapter 18) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

Oh my, Snowfall, I forgot you asked about Sessh using his dokkasou. In Chapter 18 when he killed Hojo for attacking Kagome... These 2 paragraphs are from that chapter towards the bottom of the chapter.

***It happened so fast that Kagome could swear she had blinked once and missed it. Sesshoumaru’s eyes flashed, his face contorted with rage and a resounding snarl shook the walls, then the demon turned quickly, arm still extended outward slightly. His movements were accompanied by a flash of green and before she knew it, there was spattering of blood and Hojo fell.  

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 

Sesshoumaru stared, eyes wide and chest heaving, at the crimson spreading across the human male’s chest and abdomen and he shook his head slowly in disbelief. Did he just…eviscerate that man? That human man? How? The human was nowhere close enough for him to do something like that.***

So this answers when he first used his dokkasou.   JEN


katlady (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

;.; omg   i'm, still in tears

 

poor Kagome ..but  atleast she  wants  revenge  who knew  but  as they say hell has no fury like a woman scorned

I hope that  bastered  Pays    foe hurtting  out  belived  couple  he'd  deserve it

 

make him suffer XD

 

 

 okay  you know  how  i am  by  now

:poke:

UPATE!!

 


Tana_san (Chapter 62) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

Snowfall... I do believe if you go back to chapter 62, you'll find that the director is indeed human. Oroyukae constantly refers to the director as a man. When he remarked the commitee wouldn't be pleased that Miroku to take such risks with 'something' so crucial..., Miroku got angry and went back with, "Sesshoumaru isn't some 'thing', he is a living,breathing being..." and back further in Chapter 40, the director says to Sato, "The second he uses the inhibitor will mark a true, monumental moment in our efforts to liberate all non-humans from the tyranny they have suffered for so long, my friend. You will bear witness to the key for the eventual freedom of your kind right there upon that monitor, Sato.”

So, if I am not mistaken, the director is human and there is no where that he was referred to as Naraku. Lady O hasn't given him a name yet but... who says he couldn't be Onigumo who was the human who gave himself to become Naraku??? Oh yes, I have given thought to this because I wonder if our dear authoress has delibertly not named him so we who like to second guess her, would have a bit of fun figuring out who he is...or if he is even a character from the anime series at all.   JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I do believe Sato gets way too much enjoyment screwing with InuYasha. I loved Kikyou's suggestion to put a bell on Sato like an ordinary housecat. She put him right in his place! 

It was also sweet of Kikyou to tell Kagome for Sesshoumaru. I bet the talk Miroku had with Sesshoumaru was and will be a great help for both of them. Alot of couples do fall apart and separate when a tragedy like this happens. Kagome has every right to feel how she does about this man that was supposed to be helping free beings from those who wanted to control them. Sesshoumaru did a beautiful job consoling Kagome even though he's not the type to show tears, she felt his grief and love. I thought that part was very touching.

It's time for meds now. My cat is staring me down to open the bedroom door so she can go eat, so, until the next posting...  JEN


Snowfall (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

That was so sad.  I'm glad that Kagome had no compassion for the bad guy.  I wouldn't either.  Though she needs to go to a hospital, I wish she could be there just to purify his ass.  ^_^  Well, if he's human, that isn't possible.  Darn.  Sessh could just drool acid on him for hours while he screamed.  lol  Oooh, I can't remember whether or not he's used his acid yet.  All this time, I've been wondering if he's a hanyou, Naraku, in disguise and Sesshoumaru's abilities just hadn't developed enough for him to realize it.

Nice chapter.  I hope they get their revenge.  ^_^


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 77) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

...tears. i hope this bad guy goes quickly and quietly, no disappearances and reappearances just death... so God can worry over him and he won't ruin PERFECTLY GOOD and HAPPY COUPLES! okay. i'm done. terrific chapter, i could really feel all of the emotions they were feeling when they felt it. i mean it wasn't like i was reaching for the gun but you did a really good job conveying them. update soon!!


1CarinoInu (Chapter 77) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

That was truly wonderful.  A well done effort to communicate such loss between the beings, made me tear up.

Beautiful work.

Now get that b**t**d!


Neva (Chapter 77) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

ooooh god i hope that crazy doesnt know whats up! i hope he is gloating in his victory when the show up to beat the snot out of him!!!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 76) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

This chapter was so devestating, but you did a wonderful job conveying all the sorrow from everyone.  Well done, but I sure can't wait for happier times ^_^

 

Keep up the excellent work!


knifethrower (Chapter 76) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

Oh, no!  One of the pups was killed?  But Kagome doesn't know yet, right?  Poor Sesshomaru!  Poor Kagome!  This is so sad, after all they have been through. 


Tana_san (Chapter 76) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

Aw, Kagome is going to be devastated. She'll have alot of love and support. I had tears in my eyes through the whole chapter. It makes typing a review very hard as I'm a two finger typist. On an amusing note, I gathered Sessh had clothes on since there wasn't any remarks about getting him dressed...oh, and I do remember him transforming and being dressed in the anime but, well, you never know.  JEN


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