OH BOY, TROULE IS BREWING. thanks for the long chapter btw. i wonder if she got the cold or something more serious? now i have no inkling of what'll happen. bad madison! you making me confused. he said only touching eh? well he did. at least now we can see that he actually has some sort of self control. i wonder if kagome's plan will work though. the beast isn't all caveman. he's a caveman seshomaru! lol(that was corny).
anyway, it was great. the change of pace was a long time in coming. and it's always a good sign that seshomaru is now talking with kagome, i think.
stars (Chapter 18) - Mon 22 Feb 2010
please updata
A plan! Yay! but..oh no about the new complication. Now I'm curious about the child and if it's why she's sick, and...what it is. Good chapter. ^.^
It would be horrible if she miscarried and a devastating blow to her after all that she's been through. Also, you have never explained her illness. I've given up trying to guess it.
She and the logical Sesshoumaru did not talk that much. I was hoping it would be more incdepth regarding some of the stuff in a previous review of mine.
mary (Chapter 18) - Sun 21 Feb 2010
i wonder what's wrong with the kid? hhmm... a new twist perhaps? maybe he's oe she's not a hanyou? how could that be possible?
and how insessitive can seshomaru get? grrr! just cause he's "killing perfection", doesn't mean he's got the right to do as he wants with kagome. he's such a beast. makes me want to throttle his "perfect" little neck.
hmmm, I really like it. But I feel that Rin is too shallow [and insipid]. I know she's not much of a character, but will you be jading her to the realities between Kagome and Sesshoumaru? It just frustrates me that she has the observational skills of a blind mouse. Not a flame, just constructive criticism ^^ Keep up the good work
Tsuki (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
This is such a great story :)
Great Job!!!
memeylupht (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
Honestly,i'm sooooo curious from the start when kagome became sick,very sick. Why did that happen? And what's wrong with her child? Is it because her pregnancy she was sick?? I wonder though... How is Sesshomaru will learn to love his mate? If he'll love her,that is.
i hope you'll update soon. Even then this story took too much time to progress,but it's worth it 'n this is so make sense anyway. No rush,but not too slowly either so i really love,it.
but sometimes i just can't wait to know.. What will happen .. Update soon,kay!! And please keep this up ^.~
REDWOLF (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
ARGH...I have waited for you to update and now, I am worried. I think the little plan will back fire on Kagome and gold-eye Sesshoumaru. I hope you can update soon, this is so nerve racking. Great story, but phew , I don't like not knowing. I guess you spoiled us.! ;)
What is going on with Kagome's pregnancy? Each chapter brings lots of new questions but very few answers. Is the baby not hanyou? Please update again soon! :)
Aki (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
keep it up and update soon
UNKNOWN (Chapter 17) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
geart chapter. i like how the beast is being gentle & more caring. plz hurry & update the next chapter. i cant wait 2 see what happens next! ^,^
WishingStar (Chapter 17) - Thu 18 Feb 2010
great chapter. hey i was wondering if u could make kagomes baby turn out 2 be a youkai & surprise everyone. this was someone elses idea & i like it. i would be really happy if u could make the baby a youkai. pretty plz with a cherry on top! ^_^ =)
WishingStar (Chapter 17) - Thu 18 Feb 2010
great chapter. hey i was wondering if kagomes baby would turn out 2 be a full youkai then surprise everyone. this was someone eles reqest and i liked it. i would be super happy if the baby turned out 2 be a youkai. plz update soon. good job! =)
palmira (Chapter 17) - Thu 18 Feb 2010
Hi
First of all congratulations for the work that you are doing, not all have the imagination and the will to write a story like yours, very complex, but I have to say that as a woman I am very disgusted and disappointed with the passivity of kagome, also as a fan of her and Seshomaru, her caracter is nothing like her and rape is dishonorable as much a Seshomaru hates humans is even worse, so he can not accept it like oohh is the best problem, but well that is my opinion, congratulations again for your work, is not a easy one.
MidnightMermaid (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Feb 2010
i luv ur story so far. i feel srry 4 kagome, poor thing. anyways great job & keep writing. :)
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