AHHHHH!!! She made it! Thank god!!! I was so happy to read this because I think that Kagome deserves some happiness for herself and some time to move forward from her 'rape' experience and mistreatment. Its been a long suffering period for Kagome and family is what she needs. Although I cant help but question, Who was that guy that delivered the package? And what was in said package? Also is this the last time that Kagome will see Sesshoumaru? If not, then has he really changed? So many questions to few answers! Thank you for this new chapter and I just want to say PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!! Thanks!!!
I read all of the chapters in one sitting. My eyes are really tired now but I want to leave a message before I sleep :D This story is so good, every chapter made me look forward to the next one, and so I couldn't stop reading until the end. I'm happy that Kagome managed to escape the beast and finally got back to her own time..but I'm feeling a little bit scared for her 'coz I know eventually she'll meet Sesshoumaru again and I'm expecting that his beast will want to punish Kagome for running away. I'm hoping that his beast will not rape her again (it's depressing to read scenes of force and abuse over and over, I just felt so much sadness for Kagome), and that Kagome will be a stronger person now physically (maybe make her gain stronger miko powers so she can defend herself??haha) and emotionally.
Most of all, I'm just excited about how they will meet, and what changes will there be in the future Sesshoumaru's character (the real Sesshoumaru,not his beast). The Sesshoumaru in the feudal period wasn't really attraced to Kagome in a romantic sense. And the only reason why he helped her trick the beast was because he also didn't want to be stuck to her forever. I'm looking forward to how their relationship would develop.
I'll be honest to you and say that I really didn't want Kagome to become pregnant YET. Don't hate me! I really do like this story >.< maybe it's because I've read too many Sess-Kag fanfics with the 'Kagome gets knocked-up and has a baby, Sesshoumaru feels responsibility and begins to care, then they fall in love' storyline.... But since Sesshoumaru has still shown feelings of disgust despite her pregnancy, I figure that your story will be different and I'll wait and see what happens :)
That's all for now! More power to you and thank you for writing this story!
-p.s. I read your profile and was surprised that English is not your first language and that you've only learned the language three years ago, I didn't notice any major mistakes in your writing :) I'm also 20 and English is not my first language as well. I've learned it since I was a kid, but I don't think I can write a story in English this long.haha. I love reading literature but I really don't have the talent for creative writing @_@ Please do keep on writing!
Lexie (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Mar 2010
wow. that is a definate upgrade from what porr Kags was experiencing, im glad that for the moment she is out of his claws.
please update!
NAO-chan33 (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Mar 2010
This story is very interesting. :) I like the idea. Keep up the great work! Can't wait until the next one!
--nao-chan
Now I gotta know if that really was him! >.< This will definately prove interesting. Will she get to stay in her time or will she hve to go back? and the whole mark thing.... he there isn't he. ? gah. well can't wait to see what happens.
oh and happy early birthday!
~Lune
One of the main reasons I love reading your story, is that you update frequently, so thank you!
I'm so glad Kagome made it back to her own time!
Might I also shout out a thanks to the fact you posted even though your birthday is coming up! Happy Birthday!!!
I deeply look forward to the next installment of your story!
JuJu:3 (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
OMG!!! YES YES YES!!! this is one AWESOME STORY! cohesive...gripping plot and I LOVE THE WAY YOU PORTRAY SEHSSHOUMARU!! i love how you portray kagome as well, quite realistic. TOP NOTCH and congrats for winning :D i couldn't stop reading and i was hooked from the first chapter! thank you! thank you!! and keep 'em coming!!
Wow! You made me cry. Good job! I'm so, so glad Kagome is home...but it looks like Sesshoumaru is still around. I sure hope he has his beast under control now.
stars (Chapter 23) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
please updata
ivy (Chapter 23) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
Ohh, how thrilling.
I can't wait for the next chapter. >__> It'd be nice if I could go into the future a little while from now. I'm sure I'd see new chapters.
I like your style of writing, it's very emotional.
Vicky (Chapter 23) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
I'm so happy Kagome was finally able to go home....she needs a break from Sesshoumaru. I hope 500 years have made Sesshoumaru (the beast) realized what he did wrong. Hope he has changed for the better.
pauly (Chapter 23) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
What a relief, I thought she was not going to make it. Please update soon, I am dying to know the beast´s reaction. ;)
kim123 (Chapter 23) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
i would love to see how sesshy's beast is taken all of this.
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