Holy crap!!!!!!!!  That was an insane chapter I loved it!!  I felt so horrible for Inuyasha though.  That last part with him looking at her dieing was just so heartfelt!   I felt said that his last moments were moments of emotional pain, but what can one do.  Thanks so much for that chapter I am glad that damned braclet it finally gone.  I wonder now since he killed the witch if he can have another made.  I hope not and that braclet gone seems the start to a healthier more equaled relationship.  Thanks again PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!  this is a killer cliffy!

OH MY FRIGGIN GOD! WHA HAPPENED!?!?! OMG OMG OMG UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Oh rotten cliffhanger!  So, does she end up going to the future, or is she stuck in the past?  Only our great writer knows!

Pleaseohplease update soon :)

the beast is bound to be upset... cant wait for the next chapter... keep up the great work!

Great Chapter :) I'm so glad Kagome might be able to go home.

And Inuyasha caused his death with his stupidity, it made me kinda sad tho :P

Ahh! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D :D :D

I hope something good comes from all her work.....like Sesshoumaru growing a heart. I think I understand where you are going with this, I believe the first of this chapter had many clues written between the lines. However, I could be wrong!

yay! Rin times. :D I nearly laughed at the chocolate moment.

Good chapter :D

omg when will sesshy show some care i could glomp him upside the head! ^__^

So wonderful!!! I love reading the chapters. Sorry I haven't been a faithful reviewer. ::much groveling:: I have alot to do, and I'm glad that I got caught up!! This story is going really well. I am glad to see the direction you are taking it. Well I can't wait to see what is going to happen next! Good luck!

This is chapter 20 and Kagome still hates them (Sesh & his beast), cant stand there touch, and she's not really progressing in her feelings. Is there ever going to be something more for the pair because frankly this is getting rather long with nothing happening to soften her attitude towards them.

Yes she's going to pretend to get along but then what? This is not a flame but from a Reader's standpoint as well as an author's it needs to get going, u know lets move on from the nightly rapes, sickness, and 'I hate u so much, dont get near me' chapters. The grammar could use some work as well as Rin's character.

Perhaps u might also want to introduce some other characters, as Sesshy's beast doesnt count! *Just some constructive criticism*

Though, I will be following your fic to see what happens next. It has a good story line and has great potential.  

great chapter

Yes! Yes! Yes!

Get him, Kagome! Make him pay! Make him cry

O_O well it's better than his disappearing altogether. and yay she going to try and fix it...but *_* how? Though I have a idea. Next chapter looks like it'll be interesting. Really liked the rain scene and here memories behind it.

Fantastic Chapter :D

uh-oh kagome, you have to be extra careful now. don't slip up girl! you have to go home sometime. you just have to! tell madison to let you go. you can do it! i'm rooting for you. 

and seshomaru? (the "intelligent" one i mean) why aren't you falling for kagome? she's what you need you fool. you have to see her. not just as a human, but kagome!!!grrr! when will you listen you baka!

and beast, you are such as ass. i hate all the beings with penises in your time(even this time). they're all pricks. they think with their favorite phallus. all idiots the lot.

The gold eye Sesshoumaru is in some deep sh*t now! Kagome is in trouble. Doesn't look like she will love him ever.

i can't wait till she amkes her escape. the child should come out full demon and surprise everyone. ^___6

you've really kicked it up a notch and im really happy Sesshoumaru's beast is no longer acting so harshly towards Kagome, the storyline has progressed amazingly from what it began as. but i do worry for Kagome and her unborn child.

please update