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Raven (Chapter 25) - Wed 05 Jan 2011

I really loved your stpry and i cant wait for you to finish it. this is the reason why i wanted to start making my own sesshomaru fanfic. in a way your story really did inspire me. i love how you brought out Sesshomaru-sama's quality's and never once made him ooc. it is really good work and i really hope you finish it. i'm looking forward it. by far through out all the fanfics i have read since i was in the third grade and am now in the tenth this is the most amazing well written and excuted one of all. i dont mind waiting on such skilled writting. it would be such a waste to have you hurry.

best regards

Raven Fallen Blackstone

SinlessDreamArson (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Jan 2011

I like your fanfic alot! But that "lemon", I loved it and hated it at the same time. I mean  I love lemons in general(and that was a great one you wrote, without completly taking Kagome's virginity) but Sesshomaru's dominance is so- annoying! Even if those are demon customs..It being Kagome, I would've expected her to fight back more...But this chapter was great! Update whenevre you can!


knifethrower (Chapter 16) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

"Don't open that door!"  "Don't go into that alley!"

Add to that:  "Don't go into the woods wearing those high-heeled shoes!"  "Don't look in the mirror and start picking on your face!" and especially:  "Don't go in the basement!"

How many times have I got into trouble because I start shouting things like that when I'm with someone else, who is trying to enjoy a movie!

knifethrower (Chapter 8) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

Chapter 8:  the perfectly reasoned response to those who ask why Sesshomaru is so bitter toward his father and his half-brother.  Poor Sesshy, especially now that he feels as if he has been betrayed by Kagome as well as his own father and mother!

knifethrower (Chapter 6) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

Hehe, Chapters 5 & 6 are when it starts really getting good.  Sesshomaru is getting all soft and mushy-like...  And, yeah, InuYasha.  You're always taking off with KAGOME's enemy.  So why shouldn't she take off with yours?  Love it!

knifethrower (Chapter 2) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

This story is one of the really good ones!  I have read it several times, and enjoyed it every time.  I'm glad to see it posted here on Dokuga!

Revas (Chapter 25) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

Is Sesshomaru planning something? If he hurts Kagome, I'm gonna kill him. lol I love your story, and the fact that Sesshomaru is acting completely in character. I just hope that they get through these differences and frickin' fall in love already. :) To me,  that's always the good part. Anywho, I love your story and all the twists and turns in your plot. I hope you update soon!! :3

maddie50 (Chapter 25) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

I just love Miroku. Nice touch giving advice to Sesshoumaru.

Kanna37 (Chapter 25) - Sun 02 Jan 2011

Desperately hoping I truly don't have to wait another year for the next chapter - I am so hoping for more relatively soon!


sfp (Chapter 24) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I absolutely love your writing style; please don’t ever think to change it. Your story is wonderful. I just love the character interaction you have seamlessly woven into your work. As for your reviewer with the problem, that is just it - it is their problem not yours. As any good artist knows, great art takes time to develop. Moreover, Let me assure you; your art is great. As for your time in updating, well like I said before, great art takes time. Any one with common sense will know fan fiction is most likely not the first priority in your life; and that is all right. If you were to live in your imagination on a constant bases, you would probably not be able to write fan fiction at all, for surly you would be in a padded cell instead. LOL.

Just my thoughts on your work and your authors note.


maddie50 (Chapter 24) - Tue 12 Jan 2010

Sesshoumaru seemed to be taking his time wooing Kagome until Kouga and Inuyasha were thrown into the "claim" mix. The scene at the onsen moved from seductive to action rather quickly. How could anyone deny Sesshoumaru? Ah well, virginal Kagome needs to make up her mind, and soon. I am interested in reading what her decision will be.

snowbird (Chapter 24) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

I was very disappointed with Kagome in this chapter.  If she was not ready to be his mate, then she should not have encouraged him with her interest in him.  You can't have a youkai like him as a mere boyfriend like from her time.  It's either all or nothing and you can't have any doubts going into the relationship.  He's being surprisingly very patient with her but she's put a strain and tension that wasn't there before. 

Crystalserenity87 (Chapter 24) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

I must say wow I have been reading chapter by chapter now for the past 4 hours and I can't wait until you update. I'm in suspense I can't wait until they are fully together and mated such a thrilling story can't get enough of it.

Lexie (Chapter 22) - Sun 27 Dec 2009

ok now i like sesshou's dominance just as much as any other sess lover but that sent chills down my spine. o_O he was practically forcing kagome and the ending where she just accepted it had me kind of affronted. he just forced that on you and accept it? i mean i know she's tired n all but still you'd be kind of, uh, a bit traumatized right? no matter how much you're attracted to them. if you just allow someone possession of your body like sess did to kags well you gotta be odd no? i mean i dont get the feeling that kagome would normally DO that.

but asides from that it's a really good story that i have spent the past 8 hours reading.

Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 25) - Sun 27 Dec 2009

An update at last! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for the next chapter... and what a chapter it was! In fact, it's been so long I read through the entire story again and I still love every word of it. But, yes, new chapter. Amazing. No other word to describe it. Definitely worth the wait. I just hope the next chapter won't take quite so long? lol. You have my support.

Starlyte (Chapter 25) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

I've just read chapters 1 - 25 and i absolutely love it!!! Its a very well written story, its not rushed but its not taking its time to get to all the good stuff! With the last couple of chapters i read your A/N regarding some not so nice reviews and i must say i completely disagree with everything they said. The way you have written the characters are as true as i think anyone can get with writting fanfiction, example 'Chapter 22: His' the ending part of that i felt suited Sesshomaru's personality perfectly, yes he was a bit forcefull but that is his dominating nature, and i don't think its classified as rape, and if Kagome really didn't want him to do it she would have simply used her powers. So i personally think that the way you write that particular piece for example was very nicely done, you kept the characters real and it was done very tastefully!!

I can't stress how much i enjoy reading this story, your a very talented writter who goes out of their way to write something that you share selflessly with the rest of us and i for one truly appreciate it, Thank You! Constructive criticism is always good, but i disagree with some of them, and even with someone who would complain about delayed updates, im just glad that there IS an update lol!

Once again thank you so much for a wonderful story i truly am enjoying it and eagerly will wait for an update!!

daapatemysoul (Chapter 25) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

I'm so pleased to see an update! This chapter was very well written. I've missed your writing- you have a fabulous style that I find lacking in many fics I'm seeing right now. I'm so sorry to hear a reviewer was so mean to you! Life happens- you can not control that any more than the rest of us. I'm just glad your still doing well. Good luck with school and I look forward to seeing more in the future.

1CarinoInu (Chapter 25) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

Great update.  And I understand that real life gets in the way of's pretty consistent amongst the writers of and Dokuga, I have found.

None the less, I wait patiently for these tidbits from all of my favorite writers!

I am glad to see the Sesshoumaru is giving Kagome time, albeit, mating her if she is ready or not....I think she'll get there.

Best wishes for a Happy New Year.  Update as soon as you can!

autumngold (Chapter 25) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

I don't blame Kagome for being scared.  I just hope that she realizes that Sesshoumaru is not only trying to protect her from Naraku, but Inuyasha and Kouga as well.  Thank you so much for the update!  I'm so glad that you have added another chapter to this very interesting story.  I like how have shown Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship.  Please post more soon!

Alpine (Chapter 25) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

Wonderful... I have been following this story for awhile, and I was so very pleased to see another update to it. I read your author's note and I personally believe that ANYONE who leaves reviews such as those, should not be allowed too. I understand that it is important to let the author know how you feel, but you can tell when the reader is not an auther themself. You should not start reading most stories if you are not prepared to wait for updates. It's just the way things go. So... I think that both of these chapters were great and you have kept to Sess/Kag and how they both really are. It's great.

Thanks again and I look forward to another update.  Whenever your pretty little head can get one out.

Hugs ^_^

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