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Fallen0x (Chapter 8) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

what? well, I guess Kagome tried.. but she just went to sleep? I figured she'd try a little harder... anyway. i HAVE to read more now! poor Sesshoumaru! :( 


Fallen0x (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

well that was surprising!! aw poor Kagome! I have a feeling things will get better! :)


Fallen0x (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

ah i was just waiting for that to happen! :D haha Inuyasha was so confused! XD


Fallen0x (Chapter 5) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

woah, that was unexpected! o.o and interesting! :D hm i gota read more now! :)


Fallen0x (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

:) i liked this chapter a lot!


Fallen0x (Chapter 3) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

hm this is interesting! :D i must read more! i find enjoyment in your story! :)


1CarinoInu (Chapter 26) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

Welcome back!  I was so glad to see an update that I had to re-read the other chapters first!  

Now, what is Sesshomaru up to?  It must be really killing Kagome, especially since there has been some distance between them.  She must be feeling really insecure.  Poor girl, and Sesshomaru is so good at communicating his intent....NOT!


Fallen0x (Chapter 2) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

hm i like this story so far! :) i definitely need to read more! :)


Fallen0x (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

hm ppl have done the Rin is sick thing, however, no one has given it a time limit and i feel your story is unique! i can't wait to read more and find out what happens next! :)


snowbird (Chapter 26) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

Why is Kagome wearing such modern clothing as shorts?  She's looked at strangely for her short skirt and even thought to be a whore for such revealing clothes.  So why is Sesshoumaru not protesting when she continues to show so much of herself in an era where virtuous women don't reveal so much of themselves?  I know that she believes and says her clothes are decent.  For her time yes, but not for the past.  The tachi has always been a form of protection and barrier, letting her wear whatever she wanted and cushioning disapproval and remarks from outsiders.  Also, as his mate and Lady of the West, she will have to dress appropriately.

I hope she eventually grows up in her mind and realizes that she can't keep stalling against Sesshoumaru's desire to mate her.  He's not going to 'date' her for years before they 'wed' like some couples from her time.  Maybe she needs to talk with Miroku, too, and get the picture from the youkai viewpoint.  Miroku is more wise than he lets on.  If she plans to be 'married' to a youkai, she needs to make the effort to learn more about their culture like Sesshoumaru is about hers.


moussou (Chapter 14) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

Okay. While I admire your style of writing I just cant stand how Kagome abuses her power over Inuyasha. Sitting him 10 times in a row is plain cruel and probably deadly. She's supposed to be kind, ne?

Lets face it. She's far from alpha. Inuyasha is the leader, kagome keeps the tachi together with her loving personality not her strenght.And to be an alpha one needs battle strenght, be a tactitian and be able to defend the pack. Kagome lacks those.

 

But as I've said I love your style and perfect grammar. The story is enjoyable too.

Just some things are off IMHO.

 

 


Ashes (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

Thanks for not abandoning the fic. I've really enjoyed it. Good luck with college, hopefully your experience is better than mine was.


Paige (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

This is the first time I have read this story and so far I really like it.

I cannot wait to see what happens next: Will they marry/mate? Or part ways forever? :P

I'll be waiting for the next chapter update!

 


KAggie (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

It's been quite a while since I've seen this story being at the top of my list of favorite stories! And I'm really happy to see it there. After rereading this story, I've fallen in love with the plot and its characters. With that in mind, I hope Kagome makes up her mind with Sesshoumaru. I'm glad she had her dream. Hopefully, it'll kick her butt into action!

I can't wait to read more of your upcoming chapters. Thanks for writing this story again!


moussou (Chapter 11) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

You got Rin wrong. She would never bellow back to Sess lol

Never ever! How old id she anyway? 9?

 


moussou (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

I cant help but feel like Kagome is using Sesshomaru to forget inuyasha. And while I'm not an Inuyasha fan I dont like the idea that she just went with Sess without any explanation. Its just not like her. And Sess got smitten with her real fast, in 5 days. hehe for someone who hated humans for x centuries that felt kind of OOC.
Otherwise I think this is a well written story. Good grammar too.


Kanna37 (Chapter 26) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

Okay let's try this again.  Yay for the update, and hope to see the next one soon, as you said.

Amber


Raven (Chapter 25) - Wed 05 Jan 2011

I really loved your stpry and i cant wait for you to finish it. this is the reason why i wanted to start making my own sesshomaru fanfic. in a way your story really did inspire me. i love how you brought out Sesshomaru-sama's quality's and never once made him ooc. it is really good work and i really hope you finish it. i'm looking forward it. by far through out all the fanfics i have read since i was in the third grade and am now in the tenth this is the most amazing well written and excuted one of all. i dont mind waiting on such skilled writting. it would be such a waste to have you hurry.

best regards

Raven Fallen Blackstone


SinlessDreamArson (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Jan 2011

I like your fanfic alot! But that "lemon", I loved it and hated it at the same time. I mean  I love lemons in general(and that was a great one you wrote, without completly taking Kagome's virginity) but Sesshomaru's dominance is so- annoying! Even if those are demon customs..It being Kagome, I would've expected her to fight back more...But this chapter was great! Update whenevre you can!

JA NE!


knifethrower (Chapter 16) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

"Don't open that door!"  "Don't go into that alley!"

Add to that:  "Don't go into the woods wearing those high-heeled shoes!"  "Don't look in the mirror and start picking on your face!" and especially:  "Don't go in the basement!"

How many times have I got into trouble because I start shouting things like that when I'm with someone else, who is trying to enjoy a movie!


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