Page 8 of 14
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Next > End >>
snowbird (Chapter 26) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

Why is Kagome wearing such modern clothing as shorts?  She's looked at strangely for her short skirt and even thought to be a whore for such revealing clothes.  So why is Sesshoumaru not protesting when she continues to show so much of herself in an era where virtuous women don't reveal so much of themselves?  I know that she believes and says her clothes are decent.  For her time yes, but not for the past.  The tachi has always been a form of protection and barrier, letting her wear whatever she wanted and cushioning disapproval and remarks from outsiders.  Also, as his mate and Lady of the West, she will have to dress appropriately.

I hope she eventually grows up in her mind and realizes that she can't keep stalling against Sesshoumaru's desire to mate her.  He's not going to 'date' her for years before they 'wed' like some couples from her time.  Maybe she needs to talk with Miroku, too, and get the picture from the youkai viewpoint.  Miroku is more wise than he lets on.  If she plans to be 'married' to a youkai, she needs to make the effort to learn more about their culture like Sesshoumaru is about hers.


moussou (Chapter 14) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

Okay. While I admire your style of writing I just cant stand how Kagome abuses her power over Inuyasha. Sitting him 10 times in a row is plain cruel and probably deadly. She's supposed to be kind, ne?

Lets face it. She's far from alpha. Inuyasha is the leader, kagome keeps the tachi together with her loving personality not her strenght.And to be an alpha one needs battle strenght, be a tactitian and be able to defend the pack. Kagome lacks those.

 

But as I've said I love your style and perfect grammar. The story is enjoyable too.

Just some things are off IMHO.

 

 


Ashes (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

Thanks for not abandoning the fic. I've really enjoyed it. Good luck with college, hopefully your experience is better than mine was.


Paige (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

This is the first time I have read this story and so far I really like it.

I cannot wait to see what happens next: Will they marry/mate? Or part ways forever? :P

I'll be waiting for the next chapter update!

 


KAggie (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

It's been quite a while since I've seen this story being at the top of my list of favorite stories! And I'm really happy to see it there. After rereading this story, I've fallen in love with the plot and its characters. With that in mind, I hope Kagome makes up her mind with Sesshoumaru. I'm glad she had her dream. Hopefully, it'll kick her butt into action!

I can't wait to read more of your upcoming chapters. Thanks for writing this story again!


moussou (Chapter 11) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

You got Rin wrong. She would never bellow back to Sess lol

Never ever! How old id she anyway? 9?

 


moussou (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

I cant help but feel like Kagome is using Sesshomaru to forget inuyasha. And while I'm not an Inuyasha fan I dont like the idea that she just went with Sess without any explanation. Its just not like her. And Sess got smitten with her real fast, in 5 days. hehe for someone who hated humans for x centuries that felt kind of OOC.
Otherwise I think this is a well written story. Good grammar too.


Kanna37 (Chapter 26) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

Okay let's try this again.  Yay for the update, and hope to see the next one soon, as you said.

Amber


Raven (Chapter 25) - Wed 05 Jan 2011

I really loved your stpry and i cant wait for you to finish it. this is the reason why i wanted to start making my own sesshomaru fanfic. in a way your story really did inspire me. i love how you brought out Sesshomaru-sama's quality's and never once made him ooc. it is really good work and i really hope you finish it. i'm looking forward it. by far through out all the fanfics i have read since i was in the third grade and am now in the tenth this is the most amazing well written and excuted one of all. i dont mind waiting on such skilled writting. it would be such a waste to have you hurry.

best regards

Raven Fallen Blackstone


SinlessDreamArson (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Jan 2011

I like your fanfic alot! But that "lemon", I loved it and hated it at the same time. I mean  I love lemons in general(and that was a great one you wrote, without completly taking Kagome's virginity) but Sesshomaru's dominance is so- annoying! Even if those are demon customs..It being Kagome, I would've expected her to fight back more...But this chapter was great! Update whenevre you can!

JA NE!


knifethrower (Chapter 16) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

"Don't open that door!"  "Don't go into that alley!"

Add to that:  "Don't go into the woods wearing those high-heeled shoes!"  "Don't look in the mirror and start picking on your face!" and especially:  "Don't go in the basement!"

How many times have I got into trouble because I start shouting things like that when I'm with someone else, who is trying to enjoy a movie!


knifethrower (Chapter 8) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

Chapter 8:  the perfectly reasoned response to those who ask why Sesshomaru is so bitter toward his father and his half-brother.  Poor Sesshy, especially now that he feels as if he has been betrayed by Kagome as well as his own father and mother!


knifethrower (Chapter 6) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

Hehe, Chapters 5 & 6 are when it starts really getting good.  Sesshomaru is getting all soft and mushy-like...  And, yeah, InuYasha.  You're always taking off with KAGOME's enemy.  So why shouldn't she take off with yours?  Love it!


knifethrower (Chapter 2) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

This story is one of the really good ones!  I have read it several times, and enjoyed it every time.  I'm glad to see it posted here on Dokuga!


Revas (Chapter 25) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

Is Sesshomaru planning something? If he hurts Kagome, I'm gonna kill him. lol I love your story, and the fact that Sesshomaru is acting completely in character. I just hope that they get through these differences and frickin' fall in love already. :) To me,  that's always the good part. Anywho, I love your story and all the twists and turns in your plot. I hope you update soon!! :3


maddie50 (Chapter 25) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

I just love Miroku. Nice touch giving advice to Sesshoumaru.


Kanna37 (Chapter 25) - Sun 02 Jan 2011

Desperately hoping I truly don't have to wait another year for the next chapter - I am so hoping for more relatively soon!

Amber


sfp (Chapter 24) - Tue 13 Apr 2010

I absolutely love your writing style; please don’t ever think to change it. Your story is wonderful. I just love the character interaction you have seamlessly woven into your work. As for your reviewer with the problem, that is just it - it is their problem not yours. As any good artist knows, great art takes time to develop. Moreover, Let me assure you; your art is great. As for your time in updating, well like I said before, great art takes time. Any one with common sense will know fan fiction is most likely not the first priority in your life; and that is all right. If you were to live in your imagination on a constant bases, you would probably not be able to write fan fiction at all, for surly you would be in a padded cell instead. LOL.

Just my thoughts on your work and your authors note.

SFP


maddie50 (Chapter 24) - Tue 12 Jan 2010

Sesshoumaru seemed to be taking his time wooing Kagome until Kouga and Inuyasha were thrown into the "claim" mix. The scene at the onsen moved from seductive to action rather quickly. How could anyone deny Sesshoumaru? Ah well, virginal Kagome needs to make up her mind, and soon. I am interested in reading what her decision will be.


snowbird (Chapter 24) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

I was very disappointed with Kagome in this chapter.  If she was not ready to be his mate, then she should not have encouraged him with her interest in him.  You can't have a youkai like him as a mere boyfriend like from her time.  It's either all or nothing and you can't have any doubts going into the relationship.  He's being surprisingly very patient with her but she's put a strain and tension that wasn't there before. 


Page 8 of 14
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.