You have a knack for writing 'classic Kagome' when something happens. Her strong will to overcome the attack on her person, the way she ponders over her new life and her cute and endearing reaction to that dream. Which by the way....HOTTTTTT! Why can't I have dreams like that?! That's rhetorical of course =p
While she was talking to the young demoness, it felt like a conversation she would have with Rin. Even though they are of similar 'age' in actions. It was still suiting because Kagome was telling the tale of her story. She would seem more mature and experienced at life.
Poor poor Kenichirou. He's got no clue as to what to do. I'm thinkin something either embarrassing will happen or shock worthy will happen. I'm going with embarrasing. lol
And kudos to Sesshomaru, lightening up some. I've always liked his interactions with his friend. He seems a bit more relaxed. It's a good fit.
I do hope she opens up to him about how she's feeling in the future. Finally, like it hit him, it's starting to hit her. I'm hoping to see some of that dream become reality if you really wanted my opinion >> heh
And Kimiko, was that a smile on her face? I read it. Can't unread it. She's always full of surprises. Glad she's finding Kagome more endearing by the day.
Anonymous (Chapter 29) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
...is this gonna turn into a threesome? If so, I'd like some warning so I can stop reading now.
Woohoo! Finally Kagome, you get a clue! lol I'm so happy. At first I was wondering where the whole threesome dream was going. At first I thought perhaps it was just a comedic interlude to lighten things up. I'm so glad that you did so much more with it. The dream finally helped Kagome see that Sesshoumaru could be more than just a friend. For her to see him in a new light like this makes me so happy. This whole process has been so well done, and my heart was just aching for Sesshoumaru because his love was so painfully one-sided. It's nice that she's realizing that there's more there. That she's seeing him as a man, not as just a friend. He deserves it and she deserves to let it in.
Yay, I'm so happy ^_^ Thank you for the update. I hope Kagome gives Sesshoumaru some sweet, sweet love soon, hehe. Keep up the good work!
Kamiki (Chapter 29) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
Poor Kagome! How embarrassing for her to have to look Kenichirou in the face right after that dream >.< (And, WHEW!, what a dream!) I'm interested to see what happens with the Shikon Jewel. Will she resume her search after she gives birth? Has she given up for good? And if she does, will Naraku let her? I can't imagine him being ok with her settling down & having a normal, stress-free life. He's too evil for that. Thanks for the story, I loved the update :)
Again, I love this story! You're an amazing author! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Have a great week!
~~Mizuko~~
Loveyaa (Chapter 29) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
poor Kagome. You kinda forget how young she is with everything that she has been through. This chapter def reminded me that she is still pretty young (her reaction to the baby hormones making her have sex dreams bout her best friend), even if she has been to the past, fought demons, has gotten married, and now is with child. I can't remember what is the final connection they need in order to be rid of the chain. It seems like Sesshoumaru has all three down, but Kagome is still working on that last one...love/heart maybe. Anyway, with a child on the way things are about to change big time. I can't wait to see what happens :)
Vicky (Chapter 29) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
LOL...poor Kagome :) ...I would have a hard time looking at Kenichirou too if I was her. I wonder what Sessh & Ken would do if they found out. I would blame it on the pregnancy hormones but that seems to be too simple. Please update soon.
koneji (Chapter 29) - Fri 01 Jul 2011
I find it slightly amusing that she'd have problems facing Kenichirou because of a dream, but I still feel terrible for her. Any chance that it was due to the attack? 'Cause I can't seem to stop thinking that. Another lovely chapter!
She still hadn't apologized for saying that she hated him. I know it still has to be affecting him somewhat and she will eventually catch on that he is still being somwhat guarded with her. As for Ken....that was hilarious! I would have a hard time looking at him as well. Then again, maybe not.
*snickers* Ohhhhh...things are getting deep! Poor Kagome, having such a lecherous conscience! I wonde what she's going to do about Kenichirou? And how would Sesshoumaru act if he found out? Somehow I imagine they both will. Great chapter- As frickin' always! You did a good job! Update soon!
JA NE!
i would love to blame hormones for it, but some how, it feels like another test from motherinlaw. i dunno. either way an awesome update!
Loveyaa (Chapter 28) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
This def changes quite a few things...
I feel bad for Sesshoumaru. To love and not have the love returned. He loves her so much and has realized what he has put her through so he will not tell her and just add more onto her plate. I wonder if Kagome's feeling will ever change. I have a feeling that eventually they will. Now the question is just how long will it take, esp with a child on the way. Tensions are high in a multitude of ways in a multitude of people. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
That demon did get what he deserved. >:( Trying to hurt Kagome like that.
Sessh better stop being horribly stubborn and tell her he loves her. She deserves to know. :P
Autumn (Chapter 28) - Fri 24 Jun 2011
Poor Kagome and Sesshomaru.
Update soon!
Pebbles (Chapter 28) - Fri 10 Jun 2011
Congratulations on all of your well deserved wins!!! I'm not even sure if I've left a review for this story yet, but I've been reading it for a while now and I do enjoy it immensely!
Kagome is most certainly at a fragile state of mind. One that she may need all of the support she can possibly get from Sesshomaru right now. The support she will definitely receive from him. I'd believe that he would have a strong case of guilt and suppresed anger because of what happened. In which, he would most definitely blame himself for; for not protecting her. Although I like how it strengthened his resolve in keeping her safe and at his side, I don't know how I feel about him vowing to never tell her how he feels. That could only lead to some serious issues later on. However, it makes sense to not devulge that to her, because she would super guilty. I could see her even feeling like she led him on, just cause that's her nature. I really hope that he will tell her when the time is right.
And I really hope that she discovers that the growing attraction to him is actually more than physical. From everything that's happened between them, she's got to know or at least have an idea by now that there is something. Granted everything how she originally wanted will not come to fruition. Yet even in her sacrifice, she's gained a lot. I would think now that she's carrying his pup, there might be a slight change in her overall perspective of both Sesshomaru and her new life. I'm eager to see that. It almost felt like there was a slight lead to that towards the end as you slyly placed her tonation of sincerity of her feeling of being back 'where she belonged'.
And Kimiko is (as usual) calculating, demanding and quick to anger. I love it. She's the perfect character that sort of 'gets the ball rolling' and changes are made when she's around. It can go either here or there when she arrives. She's great. As much as you don't see her, when she is in the story, there's a slight change in pace or direction. I'm glad she had motherly concern for both of them when they returned to the Palace. I seriously liked how you wrote her change in emotion in Sesshomaru's room. Something about that struck me. She is ruler of that land, she is dangerous, she is a mother. Sensing what happened to Kagome and cooly expressing the disdain was pretty good. At that moment, something made me feel like the mother in her would've been more dangerous than any ruler ever would've been. I enjoyed that.
Now all I have left to say is: Please find it in your heart to come back with a chapter soon!! =p ;)
i love Sessmomma in this, seriously, she kinda seems like she would set someone on fire >:3 i feel so bad for Sess, he loves her and kagome's still getting over the lose of everything that is her, so awe!
Carmen (Chapter 28) - Thu 09 Jun 2011
OHHH!, It's just a beautiful story, to bad that kagome is so blind and don't realize that Sesshoumaru is in love!!!!, I just wanna see her face when she realize that he love her, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!...
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