Such an endearing story. Though there were moments I wanted to slap the pair, I couldn't put the fic down. Well done.

I began reading this story so many years back. I don't believe the last few chapters had been completed yet. I returned here  during these unprecedented times with everything so uncertain in the world, living in a pandemic, to rediscover what always gave me comfort and excited me to no end. I remembered this tale so fondly and decided to reread. I'm grateful for such a loving tale. Your depictions of these characters are so well thought out.  You have a great resolve to your craft that kept going to complete this story. For that I'm grateful. Love is so uncertain. You gave it life that was incredibly unique.  Thank you so much for this tale

this was a truely amazing story..... even the very irritating parts in the middle when they couldn't pull their heads out of their asses. I truly believe you deserved the nominations and awards that you recieved for this story.

i saw it coming when it was brought up at the begining of the story but it is still heart breaking....

....so when do rin and shippo come back?

........why does she keep resisting change in sesshomaru and her reltionship? he is her husband it is onlynaturalto be close, have sex, bath with, ect your husband. its driving me nuts! what the hell was with her thought process when keni was trying to get her to help him cheer up sess? if she thought about it for even half a second she would have know that he would never suggest such a thing.

i love this story i really do but the whole constant miscommunication thing is getting really annoying. Why hasnt she appologised yet? did she totally forget that she said she hated him? why the fuck aren't they talking urrrg its so frustrating!

so i get the need to build drama and everything, but does kagome have to be so.......naive and ignorant? its just some things are common sense, you are mated, or married, so obviously you are HIS wife (mate). The same goes for the pregnancy, you had unprotect4ed sex and took a fertility potion- so yeah your most likly going to wind up pregnant when you have sex!

I am enjoying it

I LOVE IT

Kagome calm down. Some of us would pay to be leashed to Sesshoumaru. 

Was a 2/10 cause Shippou was mentioned, but then there was a kitsune that wasn't Shippou and I knocked you back down to 1/10

Interesting chapter going to be reading more!  Idk about this matchmaker though. One day of following him and she decided she needs to rely on ancient magic to find him a match? Million Dollar Matchmaker ain't a show yet though I guess so what else is there to do. 

I just wanted to tell you how much I appriate you, your perseverance and your story. Thank you.

This OC is incredibly annoying. His character wasn't needed to prgoress the story.

I started reading this, and while grammatical errors arise I read a few more chapters. I won't say your ideas are stolen, but I wonder if years ago you read Chained To You by Moonchild on A Single Spark and the idea stuck with you. Again, not saying intentionally here, just influenced subcounciously. I went back and read the fix again and found many parallels between them. Again, not plagurism, just an annoyance on my own part. I wondered when I looked over your description and you stated you'd been playing with the ideas for years, if you had read the fic, a goodie ten years ago, nowadays ehhh. So just because it bugs me A LOT if you did happen to take influence, perhaps stating that in your description would not be a bad idea. Moonchild in no way owns the troup, and you've clearly got your own spin to it. It just rubs me the wrong way to think just maybe someone else ideas influenced your own and the received no credit, as I had caught plagiarism on A Single Spark many years ago. That case was blatant plagirsm though. Yours shares similar battle and use of Kagome's powers, the chains abilities, to extend, shrink, grow invisible, Their meeting with that which caused the chain. At least similar in the first few. So again take it where you will. Just conceded the O.G. gets a nod if nessasary. Also as a critique, your misspellings, and wired wording is little to much for me. I'd say get a beta and repost an edited version. Have a nice day, and thanks for taking the time to read this.

Hello,

i recently found Dokuga and the first fanfiction i read here was this one. I allready have read many on fanfiction net ect. but this one took me in. it is the first that i ever reviewed on! 

I read it litteraly in one go, i just couldn't stop! You have a beautyfull writing stile and a talent for capturing the audience...at least you captured me allright^^ 

I will look for morr fiction from you now and just saying: also i love your fanfiction, I think i wouldn't mind reading even an origional of you.

I read manny books in several languages and you are up to par with all thos writers! 

So i hope you won't stop writing and that you will have fun with what ever story will inspre you, I will deffinitivly read it.

Kidan

I absolutely love how you ended this! It was a fantastic story which i very much enjoyed reading. (:

This was absolutely amazing.

Lol I love kagomes sass

I'm so excited to read the rest of this fic!!!!