Hmmmm... Rin Rin Rin... she's a poor lost child with a daddy complex. But one little life payed for it. I don't know if she can be forgiven for that. Inuyasha will probably be enraged with grief when he learns about it.
How Inupapa can confuse her for Kagome? He must have lost a good part of his sense of smell. This is going to be complicated if he tries to mate Rin and then discovers it's not Kagome... lol
What I don't really 'understand' is how such a sweet child could become like this? Did something happen that we're not aware of? Is somebody manipulating her from the shadows?
Hmmm... I'm intrigued. I love it XD
I KNEW it!!! I knew as soon as Inutaisho perked up thinking he'd caught Kagome's scent that it was actually Rin. Quite the interesting twist, as most people make a solid point to say Kikyo and Kagome smelled different, so they infer Rin (in this case) would, too. But then, when Inuyasha first met Kagome he had briefly mistaken their scents, although he later recanted this, noticing the subtle differences. Anyway, I ramble. As sympathetic as I've been to Rin throughout this entire mess, her "poor-me" blinders and resultant train-wreck decision making skills are really starting to piss me off. There is only so much repressed-issue related stupidness I can rationalize before it becomes down right cruel and absurd.
When (I'm not thinking if) Inutaisho finds her, will he catch on to her manipulation? Will she fall prey to his? Will their sharpened serpent tongues bite each other in the ass and cancel each other out, creating some sort of pan-dimensional time/space megalomaniac vortex that will suck all the evil out of the air and leave every other character content to let bygones be bygones, join hands and sing, The Brady Bunch's "Sunshine Day"? Ooooo, that's "Kagome, Kagome, Kagome!!" full-circle, beetches! Snap!
And I know, I know! I should be writing instead of reading, but dammit, I need a break every once in awhile from packing to fly home for Christmas tomorrow! And your story is updated so damn fast, I cave to temptation!
O_O i really hope inutaishoul doesnt get Kagome, the real one! and that SAngo finds rin and renders her nonliving. that would be grand. i hope Sess can protect his mate! omg i love this story!! - r0o
ooh... what a smoothed-tongue charmer he is. He told the blatant truth but made it sound as if he was flattering her. DEATH TO THE INUTAISHOU!! lol (in this story at least)
b0o0o0o inutaishou's an ass! and i hope that Sess guts him! ::grumbles r0o::
Okay, first off, I UTTERLY ADORE your descriptive turn of phrase. Each word is a turn-key in a dead bolt, opening my mind to images so vivid I forget I'm reading. I can't do justice to how effective your detail is without plugging my head into a television. So anyway, I could read your imagery for hours, even if it never had a point.
Ah, but it DOES have a point, and after catching up on these last few chapters, I'm starting to get an inkling of what Inu no Taisho is eternally looking for. Seems he has more in common with Naraku than I first thought, especially considering his allusion to Inuyasha instinctively doing what he meticulously orchestrated, which would be surrounding himself with women connected to the Shikon. Granted, I'm not completely firm in my decision that it's the Shikon itself Inupapa wanted, but more the power necessary to create it. I don't know, was there a Shikon before Midoriko? And would Izayoi really have had anything to do with it? I do vaguely remember one anime episode featuring a bull-hanyou-priest-impostor guy who said Shikon's could be manufactured. So...is Inupapa basically trying to built Shikon factories in these women? Am I reading way too much into this??
I would naturally assume the nekked woman on the table is Kagome, considering the blue-black hair, but he's drawing So'ounga, and wasn't that destroyed? I never actually saw the third movie and am going on hearsay. Did it return with him from hell?
I swear, I dissect your story like I do "Lost". Every chapter has me pondering these existential questions, and allows me a wonderful excuse to procrastinate on real life. God bless you and your powers of distraction!!!!
I hate Inutashio even more now! It's disgusting when men leave their women, the woman that they tell they will give everything for, and find another woman and say the exact thing to them. My friend's dad did this to her mom, and it creates such bitterness that the wife and children who have been left become bitter and mistrustful forever. I can see this in Sesshoumaru, and Ai seems to be developing this as well.
As always, your writing is of great quality! Can't wait to read more!
hmmm... I think I missed something. Ai, Sesshomaru's mother, is said to be a human witch? But Sesshomaru is not Hanyo, so it must be a misconception... I think I missed something important there... I'll have to re-read... *insert false sad sigh here*
Very good, as usual. Ah, Inu no Taisho is really a youkai after all... all power-mongers, aren't they? XD
Dewa mata
oooh... interesting... more please!!
Anamika (Chapter 39) - Sun 21 Dec 2008
Jakotsu??? You mean Inu- loving Jakotsu???? ITs a good addition. And a nicely done chapter too,...
Hmmm... I see. I understand some things better now. But Inu is not the 'all powerful' Kami he thinks he is. He's in for a little surprise. After all, Kagome is mated to his eldest, Inuyasha is not where he's supposed to be, and Miroku is still alive...
I always enjoy each and every one of your updates XD
Dewa mata
taixi (Chapter 40) - Sat 20 Dec 2008
Gaa!!! What a bastard you've made Inu no Taisho. Makes one so happy that his plans to have Kagome have been thwarted before he even puts the plan into action. Won't he be disappointed when he finds out she's already bonded to Sesshomaru. I guess we all know where Inuyasha got his playboy ways from now.
Also interesting explanation re: the resurrection of Sango. So basically the idea is that Inu no Taisho inherently has the ability to bring ppl. back from the dead? Obviously it doesn't work exactly the same as his fang, since Sango's body was back at the village for Miroku to find. Where did Sango get her current body from then?
OMG is he going to try and take Kagome as a mate too? Sess is gunna flip a wigg all these asses out to take his onna! this is crazy and i'd like more please! - r0o
Drianax (Chapter 40) - Sat 20 Dec 2008
Wow. And again, wow. What a great fic! I love the symmetry you are developing between everyone here. . .brilliant! And Inutaisho! Who knew he was more than just a pretty face ! What will he do once he sees that Sess has mated Kagome? You must MUST MUST update soon!!!!
Ohhh so nice. You make me want more!
Cindy (Chapter 39) - Sat 20 Dec 2008
LOL! Now Kags will have someone to have "girl" talk with. :-o
Marvelous! Simply and enjoyably wonderful!
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