i love that you have jak warming up to Kags even in the slightest, its crazy what kohaku did, and OMG i cant wait for more! you make this r0o so very hyper!!!
i said throttle kohaku, not kagome!! well... what's going to happen now?
Woahwoahwoah. Bad kid. Don't rape the Kags! It's not cool!
Seriously though, your updates continue to spoil me. :D
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::jumps up and down like a mad woman!!!!!!!!:: this! you! amazing!! more!!! its not FAR too often that i get like this but OMFG i LOVE IT!!!
Mr. Badman has heard! I'm sure of it!
Poor Sessy. His dad is evil and his mom is good. No wonder he's so confused.
yanno your very lucky i dont know where you are b/c if i did i would pounce you inf a fit of joyious happiness and a lust for this story!!!! you've got this r0o all hyped up and r0o wants more!! i really feel like i'm readign a soap! like its that friday show all the time and omg i just want so much to see what's going to happen now, and he'll turn up! its selfish and beautiful and amazing! i cant gush enough! love it truly you have bewitched us. - r0o
I love Sango even more now. She is quite the cunning lady, yes?
Ah... that's good. Women helping each other.
I wonder... the weight of pigeons' eggs for one's lobes could prove to be detrimental for the shape of said lobes, couldn't they? (sorry, I just had a bout of silliness... it happens...)
Dewa mata
*throttles Kohaku* stay away from her!! *turns to Sesshomaru and throttles him* get back to your mate, Lord Jackass!!
Now, please update soon. I am enthralled with this story and am craving more.
OMG! CRAZY! i love it. No i think that your style is addictive, and that you leave everyone wanting more! i think perhaps if you have more reviews like my others asking what's going on or why we have so many chapters for the story it would be best to explane that its to be read as though it were in fact a feudal era soap opera, this is just amazing. though knowing soap opera's all you need it Naraku to come back from the dead too, and on the side of g0od at that. maybe as Kagewage? even. and for Sango no less :p either way i love this story and all its amazing twists and turns leaving me wanting more every time. i adore it so. and i have the feeling come the next awards you'll find your name there as well. i just hope in the end everything ends up okay for our beloved couple. already so much has happened to them! love this!!!!
omg i wonder whats going to happen! and yanno after you explained to me the thinking behind the story and plot of it, yanno with the young and the restless i cant help but think OMG your doing such a fantastic job. i really adore this story and i cant tell you how great i feel knoinw you updated. Its an amazing story though i do hafta say you're leaving me hanging wanting more like its the friday show and they're going to torture you over the weened wanting more! either way this is fantasitc and i wonder where its all going to lead in the end. how's the story going to play out i wonder? and now that InuT's on Rin's train off by a few miles will he see his son, InuY. and what of Sess and Rin, and Kagome? omg i cant wait to see what happens!!! - r0o
I'm glad Mr. Sessy gave Rin some tough daddy love. She needs to make her own way in the world. Once again, he proves to be a wise man.
Interesting that Toga is the hellspawn enemy. I had my suspicions. I'm happy to see that Jakotsu is becoming close with Kagome. Usually, someone would put in a female demon servant of Sesshoumaru's into that spot. It is very pleasing to see a canon character being placed in that spot instead of an OC. Nicely done, and brilliantly executed.
emmaren (Chapter 47) - Fri 26 Dec 2008
I have been reading this fic from the beginning and I don't think I have left you a review yet. First let me say, shame on me for not encouraging your in your pursuit of an awesome fic. Second let me commend you on your ability to write such compelling characters in so few words. I feel for their strife and while there are the characters that I want to hate, I can because you put them in such a human light that I can understand why they are making the choices that they are. I come to the end of your chapters always wanting more. Please keep up the excellent work and I will do my best to no longer be a silent reader.
Bell (Chapter 47) - Fri 26 Dec 2008
You know I feel really bad for kagome right now! I really hope that things turn out better for her. I sounds like her and Jak might becoming good girlfriends! Every girl needs someone like that. Good job
hmm... frisky kohaku isn't always that good... more please!
right on, sesshomaru!! but... how's he gonna deal with himself after he finds Kagome in the state she's in? Hmmm... i must know!!
Yup, Rin has a lot of work to do, but knowing Kagome, she still can be forgiven, at least by her. Sesshomaru'd better make it up to her too, she looked quite exhausted in the last chapter -_-
But... where oh where is the Inu no Taisho? -evil grin-
Dewa mata
Urrrrmmmn... hullo? Sessy? She's a human for Pete's sake!!! Ugh. Men. They either assume we're ok with something absolutely ridiculous or treat us like we're about to break at any second. :P
Can't wait for the next one!
Man...he's not turning out to be that much better of a mate. Damn...leaving her stranded in the cold like that! That sucks!
man a live i really hope that whatever is out there dies a painful miserable death for Sess to leave her like that, miles with only a top coat kimono, tired, barefoot, and fertile, as well as bl0odied by her own vilolation. yeah i hope it dies a painful death! beyond that, i kinda hope that Sess starts treating Kags better, i love this story dearly but i hafta say we're ar 40+ chapters and barely at the meat of the story it seems. I wonder when its going to start coming together, not that i'm complaining but i want to see where their twined stories are going to be meeting each other soon.
i mean we have Miroku+Rin who seems to be a reincarnation or possessed of some sorts? and Crazy Inuyasha who is now armless? then Shippo/Jak/Kohaku/Sess+/Kags? not to mention Kirara/Ai/InuT/Sagno? I feel like InuT's the bad guy but i'm not sure, he certainly isnt the g0od guy. and when he realizes that Kagome's taken by his son i wonder what he'll do. He so easily tossed out his love Ai, for another b/c she wasnt what he was looking for, and soon did the same for his eldest, tossing him to the winds of fate as well, i cant see him respected the bond that Kagome and Sess have now.
I wonder what side Sango will play in all this, and if Sango and Ai will be friends b/c of the odd bond they have for InuT and Kirara. I also wonder what Inuyasha will do when he realizes that Rin has killed his unborn pup. I wonder What Rin's going to do, she seems to be falling into the roll of a younger Kikyo. and her un-natural hatred/jealousy of Kagome is well startling, though i have to say i truly love that. Far too many write her as such a sweet little girl and well truly i think she'd be a spoiled brat at this age. either way it goes i'm glad you updated and i cannot wait to see more of this wonderful fic!
- r0o
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