Wow... deep stuff.
I enjoy your character portrayals. I always knew Rin had a brat hiding inside herself. Interesting. Miroku cannot help his infidelity and Inuyasha just can't help looking for Kikyo.
Very very interesting. And Kagome's married, you say? Oh dear, dear. I wonder what will happen when Sesshoumaru finds out! Kill Inuyasha! Do it!
Okay you don't have to do it. But make them suffer a lot. Kay? I hate stories of infidelity.
Oh Kohaku <3
fortunesque (Chapter 5) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
I've never read anything like this before. Just when I'd thought that EVERY plot had been done, I came across this story. I'm completely stunned. This is absolutely brilliant.
| I can I say wow Rin a slut!!! Oh I want to know what sesshoumaru comes in and finds out about his sweet little Rin is a slut. Oh that going to be good! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!!!
Bellaniece (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
| You know I actaully hate Rin and Inuyasha! I cant believe shes preo! I hope that Sesshoumaru guts him and Sango finds some way to off her, WTF!! You have got me on the edge of my seat, I cant wait for the next chapter....
It's like I do nothing but wait for updates of your fic, like the proverbial girl by the phone. What is this, the 3rd review I've left in two days? Ah well, it's worth it, as Miroku would say. Holy HELL...literally...Onigumo's cave?!?!?!!?!? W. T. F!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really have no idea how Inuyasha thinks he's going to get away with this, but regardless of Miroku's observation, maybe that's it, Inu's NOT thinking. Holy crap. This is a cluster fuck, that's for sure. Again, literally, in Rin's case. Really...really??!?! Knocked up?!?!? Girl, and BOY, what the HELL are you thinking??!?! Wow...this is turning into feudal Jerry Springer. So yes, I'm still loving it, but I swear I have real life things to do tonight that may impede me from reviewing for another 24 hours. Although I really don't know how you're able to update so damn fast. You write like Sesshoumaru flies in his lightning ball thingie...I really don't know how you churn out such amazing stuff every 5 seconds! But I'm really not complaining!!!
Inulovely383 (Chapter 5) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
I love your story. I'm not too keen on the Kohaku/Kagome angle, so I hope there is a method to your madness. I am patiently waiting for the Sess/Kag to begin or at least for Sesshomaru to show and totally destroy Inuyasha for getting Rin pregnant. Sesshomaru will know that Inuyasha is the father, he will smell him on Rin. I have but one question, now that Inuyasha has impregnated Rin, will Sesshomaru, out of honor, be bound to care for Kagome, considering his brother and his ward, basically his daughter, have dishonored not only the family name, but the bond of mating between Inuyasha and Kagome? I can not wait for what your next update. This is truly an amazing story, please update soon.
Couldntbekeener (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
| i love this story. I love stories were rin is a ho. lol and i love ur fast updates!!! ps Make Inuyasha pay big time like make rin unbearable!! lol again love this fic!!!
Wow... your character development is amazingly complex. I actually like the twist with Rin and Inuyasha, because while it's certainly not pleasant, it's believable and shows great insight into the maturity of these people. I'm severely intrigued by the Kohaku/Kagome angle. I've actually read a few Kohaku/Kagome fics, and of course they were all terribly angsty, but it's always an interesting concept to ponder. When done right, it can leave you shell-shocked. Anyway, I digress, this is a SessKag fic! I have no idea how you're going to introduce Sess, other than Kohaku's association with him. What will he think of Kohaku "courting" Kagome, if anything? And do I need to start calling Kohaku Ashton Kutcher?
I'm scared for Sango. Blood in the stool...cancer, much? Not good. And Miroku's disconnection with his family is heartbreaking. All in all, the dissolution of these lives is hard to handle, but again, it's realistic and compelling.
Morganna (Chapter 3) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
| Liking this fic so far.
Not liking Rin in it though...you made her such a homewreacking whore...what would Sesshomaru think if he saw her like this, I wonder...
sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Dec 2008
| poor kagome, yeah, it soo like that, upon the reunion three years later, not much was revealed on inu/kag life afterwards, however, during the years spent hunting for naraku, although inuyasha does exhibit some sort of infatuation towards kagome, i still believe the supposed pairing of inukag was only emphasize by rumiko-sama (the owner of inuyasha)though, many time over the manga and anime we'll see that inuyasha has truly loved kikyo, and kagome has become some sort of 'consolation', perhaps due to the facts that she is his one true friend, whom had accepted him just as he is... and that is why i prefered the pairing of sesskag, i'm not very fond for kouga/kag, he is too brash... though very sweet and too attentive, about the manga vol 556 - 558, where inu has willingly go after kag when she was cut by meidou zangetsouha, i would do that too, if i could, if i can save my ONLY friend... THE ONLY TRUE FRIEND... could he, Inuyasha, did truly love kag? or just a reminiscence of old flame ... tears of blood, where inu bled for kikyou.... after all the time spent with kag....
anyway, log your idea, and really love to have more of it...
Yay! A canon-fic! I'm thrilled. I'm wondering... Inuyasha seems to be drawn to 15 years old women... is it because he is unable to grow up? After all, he ages differently than a human, so he might be stuck as a 'teenager' in his head for longer than Kagome, thus being unable to love as a mature woman would need? (Am I thinking too much? lol)
Anyway, I'm looking forward to see where this is going XD
Dewa mata
You have a fascinating writing style. It's not exceptionally verbose, but is still very atmospheric. It leads me down one path only to trip me up with a sentence I wasn't expecting, turning the moment on its head. I'm really enjoying the discoveries. The way you've tackled weighty, realistic subjects makes me feel I'm peeking at these characters from behind a bush. It's very intimate, which normally seems hard to do with this fandom as most authors go down the epic path (myself included). I really hope you continue this. With your fresh voice, I'm eager to see where you take the story.
Bellaniece (Chapter 1) - Wed 03 Dec 2008
| I'm very sad for how things have turned out in your story line so far for the inu tachi! I cant wait to see what happens with kagome, hopefully sesshoumaru does right by her. Oh I hope maybe sango finds someone as well, I dispise cheaters! Good job...
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