enought to take over the World....Bwhahahaha..their pinky and the brain....oh sorry about that....so there is going to be more story telling hmm? If its at least half as good as what you have already written it'll be worth reading twice...XD if not more....Looking forward to updates....and the progression of this shikon tale...XD.....Nyuka
I have to say I do like this story.I don't get the virginity thing.The way its seen,in this story,as once a person has sex their smell's altered forever.It seems odd that if he has sex with a female & cums inside her,it changes her scent but,if he has anal sex,as he did with Kags & came in her a--,wouldn't it have the same affect?Why would cuming in the front be different then cuming in her back or her mouth?...all 3 holes would send the cum into her body & should affect her scent the same.As long as the story sticks to the logic that once you lose your virginty via sex thats it. Which means Kagome & Sessh will never have sex & their relationship won't change or grow.Kags wants to have sex with Sessh & is wondering why he doesn't seem to want to have sex with her, imagine her reaction to the fact that he never plans to have sex with her. That to him shes just a toy & if he wants to have sex he'll have sex with someone else. As I personally enjoy a Sessh/Kag where they've a real relationship.I don't care for the idea that Sessh can have sex with numerous beings..I'd prefer Sessh/Kag only with a loophole like that Kags being such a powerful Miko that once she has sex her immense purification power makes it so she always retains the scent of only herself as if she's still a virgin.
I like the demoness Seyerna that knew Midoriko & had part of her soul taken to be put into the jewel.But when Seyerna said to Kagome let me tell you, having your soul torn is not a pleasant feeling, you’ve known no such pain until you’ve had your soul torn apart.” I could only wonder that as Seyerna was already aware of Kags & who/what she was & wanted & could actually read minds & know so much ,then she should know- That Kagome Does know the pain of having HER SOUL torn apart & HAS had her SOUL torn apart .
The way Seyerna approached & acted towards Kagome gave the impression she felt drawn to her. It seemed from the moment they arrived & Seyerna started speaking, it was like she was just talking to Kagome.When it was mentioned she was blind & deaf,& she came to Kagome it seemed she was saying although she's deaf-she could hear thoughts & if thats so,then it'd seem reasonable that although she's blind..perhaps she can see auras or power & if so,she may see Kagome's enormous power & her enormous purity,she may be aware that Kagome (is a powerful or the most powerful priestess ever) was never taught to hate anyone regardless of whether they are youkai,human,hanyou,royalty or peasant. As Kagome seems to see all beings as equal but is unable to accept those who abuse power,condone rape or understand beings who are cruel or evil.
It seems the story of the jewel in this story is different but its not been explained,I also don't understand if Naraku is still alive & I didn't quite understand what meeting Seyerna & when she gave Kags the jewel was it just a shard or the entire jewel & why did she give it to kags & what was seeing her about or why Sessh brought them to Seyerna & if Sessh was aware that Inu,Miroku,Sango & Shippo were going to be there.
Interesting. Please update soon.
Please update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next. I think Kagome and Sesshoumaru are in love and that they just have not figured it out for themselves. Anyways I absolutly love this story. Thanks and please update soon.
oh interseting! but kagome has felt her soul being ripped from her body when kikyo was brought back to life! again OMG you updated! i'm so freaking happy for that! i cant wait to see more!
one suggestion if at all possibly, in the future can you put a devider of some kidna between the POV changes, while it's not hard to get it after a second or so, it'd be nice not to be confused for a line or so when the "I" changes from Sesshomaru to Kagome, etc...
Wonderful work, I love it. I praise you on the plot and the details are absolutely ravishing! I have to admit this story has had me drawn in from the beginning and I love it! You've given me quite a few thoughts that I'd like to "try out" with my boyfriend hehe :) lol and your story is so kinky and well thought out its amazing I wish I could write like you do! You're a talented writer and you should keep up the fabulous work I'm absolutely obsessed with this fanfiction! Please if you don't mind me saying this age old line but... Update soon I can not wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work you ROCK!
Lexy217 (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
I must admit. I was not expecting you to update that fast, but I am very glad that you did. Love the new twist beginning in your story!
maelew (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
Every now and then I look into this story and see if you've updated and when I opened up my email and I saw this brand new chapter I was so excited.Please continue I really and I mean really like this story.Good job!
amy (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
Thank you, I am so glad that this will have a wonderful adventure and ending. Thank you for continuing this fic, andb"MOre Updates Please" YOU made my day!
Lexy217 (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
I'm so glad that after 3 years you have decided to return to finish your story. Most authors never return and leave them unfinished. Hope your next update does not take quite as long :)
i had all but given up that you were ever come back and finish this fic. seriously.
that being said this was totally hot. i do wonder if they'll ever compeltely have sex and if he'll claim her at that point. i hope we see more! and thank you for coming back!
amy (Chapter 8) - Mon 09 May 2011
When will you finish this fan fic? When did Inuyasha finally turn up? what was his reaction to kagome being his elder brother's?
Amy (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 May 2010
I LOVE THIS STORY.MORE UPDATES!
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