well that was hot! and i loved it, not that they've had a three some, and fantastic job writing that and believably too, I'm going to PM you my idea, after typing it out, i feel like a naughty r0o :p check your private messages.

lmao YUS! I like that she has a friend, and that she's protective of her, i dont know about being concubine, and i feel bad for the other virgins at this point. though its a very different story then what we normally see of our sess i rather like it. I kinda feel bad for Naomi b/c when he finds out she's no longer a virgin well i just dont think that'll end well. One also has to wonder with his virgin sniff loving self what his plans for Rin really are. anyway I loved her power spike, that was fantastic.

I do want Sess to decide he wants no other, but i want them to be together too. i know i'm askin a lot, perhaps he can take her as mate and it'll change her or give her full demonic pups. either way i loved this and i cant wait for more. - r0o

i am loving this dont stop

I'm going to agree with Inulovely383, no concubineness, and having him take her in front of Inuyasha, would be FANTASTIC!! but why stop there, it should be in front of everyone but the kids. her whole pack, the monk and the slayer. hell even Kouga, that way his claim to her would have no one disput it b/c she'd be crying out his name, wanting him and nothing else mattered. it'd be great though if he does put her with the 'other virgins' of the castle so that he could tease her, showing her maybe she's not that special only to have it backfire on him a bit and make her angry, and withdrawn from him.

If she could practice indifference, regaurdless of her bodies waton ways itd be even more interesting!!! - r0o

well i love this, and i want more! i cant wait to see what you haved planned next, i think that he should eventually take her as mate, and learn to love her, or get to the point where he can't be without her. either way love this more please! 0o0o0o and maybe he could use hie mokomoko/pelt/tail to torture her, without breakign her innocence. love this! - r0o

I love the story...you have taken kink and torture the the next level with them.  You can still have romance with a kinky twist. I mean they both love it, why not let them continue.  He is obviously falling in love with her, let him.  Let him decided to keep her and he can torture her with his decision...naturally she will cry and love the things he does to her body, including the humiliation. Please mo concubine...you could let him suggest it to gauge her reaction and she could withdraw from his attention.  I mean these are merely suggestions...and with that said...I have another, Inuyasha loves to degrade her to the point of tears, constantly comparing her with Kikyo.  Kagome could already be in love with Sesshomaru and he with her when Inuyasha finally shows to rescue her. The decision being made, the final punishment and torture could be for Inuyasha as well as Kagome...Sesshomaru could take her completely and make her his mate right in front of Inuyasha.  Of course, it is a tremendous turn on for Kagome and Sesshomaru...Vouyerism at it's finest.  Ah...confessions of love as they torture each other for sex.  I love it when a story is so great that it makes me think...thank you oh amazing one.  Continue your story, I know It will be great...just please let him take her as a mate in the end.

This is really a great fic you have been working on. I enjoy the way you have Sesshoumaru and Kagome interact ;D Especially the bath tub part. Umm but I want them to fall in loveee! And I want him to actually take her virginity. I hope you update soon!

lol i knew it wasnt a oneshot!!! and omg i'm s0o0o0o blushing i'm a brown woman and you made me blush like mad!~ my cheeks are hot and just wow! i kinda wonder why she's not using her miko powewrs but i have to say this is so visually stunning to read and paint in my minds eye. I also wonder what's going to happen now, if the small act of defiance was taken to such exstreams, then struggling and fighting will be worse. and what are his plans for her, sex toy, sex slave, or just have her until she's used up and nothing left? will she be mate? lover? concubine? whore? pup machine? i dunno but i can't wait to find out. And when will the sexual pleasure not be enough, when will kagome snap and use the powers she has available to her. after all if this is still someone canon then its got to be true that Kagome's powers relate to her emotions, she's probably very emotional now, and i think it'd be rather great for him to get a nice good reminder that he's not dealing with just a human woman but a miko, a powerful one at that, trained or not.

On a side note, i think you've be a great author to write a story where Sess breaks Kags via sexual stuff. In a sence that she's always going to be difiant to the end, and his means of torture to break her is sex rather then pain. i'd love to see that if your up to it. this was again AMAZING!!!! more pleas. - r0o

lol i knew it wasnt a oneshot!!! and omg i'm s0o0o0o blushing i'm a brown woman and you made me blush like mad!~ my cheeks are hot and just wow! i kinda wonder why she's not using her miko powewrs but i have to say this is so visually stunning to read and paint in my minds eye. I also wonder what's going to happen now, if the small act of defiance was taken to such exstreams, then struggling and fighting will be worse. and what are his plans for her, sex toy, sex slave, or just have her until she's used up and nothing left? will she be mate? lover? concubine? whore? pup machine? i dunno but i can't wait to find out. And when will the sexual pleasure not be enough, when will kagome snap and use the powers she has available to her. after all if this is still someone canon then its got to be true that Kagome's powers relate to her emotions, she's probably very emotional now, and i think it'd be rather great for him to get a nice good reminder that he's not dealing with just a human woman but a miko, a powerful one at that, trained or not.

On a side note, i think you've be a great author to write a story where Sess breaks Kags via sexual stuff. In a sence that she's always going to be difiant to the end, and his means of torture to break her is sex rather then pain. i'd love to see that if your up to it. this was again AMAZING!!!! more pleas. - r0o

Wow...I like this one. I actually had put up a challenge for basically this sort of fanfic. ^.^ I 'm glad to see one up.

Wow... you've got a knack for the kink... bring it on... I want more.