XD i dont care what other say i love this story and its crazy angstiness, its romanic in a very odd yet in character way, b/c i like you think Sess would be all about his way of doing things, and by far there are much worse things he could do to her, though i do wonder if and when Kags is going to get fed up with it, when he'll push her over her limit and she goes into flight or fight mode. B/c lets face it, she may not know it but she kinda is a super miko, i think if he pushes her TOO hard or fast he'll end up with a miko-nuclear explosion to deal with. And while i might not mind it, i hope he backs off to just private torture of the little miko and no more public displays.b/c while i can understand she loved it, she's obviously heavily conflicted and upset that she does like it. I imagine for her its like finding out she likes to kill people. but like i said i love this story i just hope Sess realizes what he has before he breaks her. Kagome strikes me as the type that might end her own life to escape it if its too mcuh, MIGHT* dont get upset but i think she could do it. i've always thought it. anyway, lovely addition and you've got me longing for more. - r0o
joyouki (Chapter 7) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| FIRST OF ALL I SOOOO AGREE WITH YOU ON PEOPLE FLAMING! AND ABOUT BEING A VIRGIN WITH OR WITHOUT A HYMEN. I DIDN'T HAVE ONE THAT I KNOW OF. MY FIRST TIME YEA HURT LIKE HELL BUT "NO BLOOD" I WAS VERY ACTIVE IN GYMNASTICS, FEEL ON THE BEAM A FEW TIMES SO WHO KNOWS.
IN THIS DAY IN AGE I AM SURPRISED BY PEOPLE'S AUDACITY....OH WELL ANY WAY THIS CHAPTER ROCKS.
I WAS HEART BROKEN WHEN SHE CRIED AND HE JUST LEFT HERE AND SENT THE OTHER GIRL IN INSTEAD OF HIM.
I DON'T AGREE WITH HIM HITTING HER, BUT IT WAS SORTA HOT..I FEEL GUILTY FOR THAT!
AND THE VERY LAST SENTENCE.."WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME" HE IS FALLING SO FAST FOR HER. OH PLEASE STOP THE HUMILIATION. THEY CAN DO IT BEHIND CLOSED DOORS. WOULD YOU WANT OTHER MEN OR DEMONS TO DO STUFF TO YOUR WOMAN AND WATCH??EWH!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE. I WAS PLEASANTLY SURPRISED BEFORE BED WHEN I SAW THIS UPDATE!! A MEN FOR A GREAT BED TIME STORY. I WILL DREAM OF FLUFFY LEMONY ROMANTIC STUFF! ....HOPEFULLY!
cora (Chapter 7) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| I love the story. The writing is amazing and it is one of the best first person stories I have read from Sesshoumaru's point of view. I can't wait for the update.
| I've absolutely fallen in love with this story! It's so different and... wow, I can't even find the words for it. I look everyday for another chapter and you never disappoint! This is what I look forward to when I have a hard day. Another wonderful chapter, thanks!
Bella (Chapter 7) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| I didn't find anything bad about this chapter...I was quite good actually...I loved the way you conveyed how he felt when she cried and how it got to him. And how he wanted her near him at all times. So he hit her...she was hysterical, brought on by the anger she felt at being humliated in such a degrading way. Either way...he is slowly but surly falling in love with her...now she has to do the same with him. I look foward to your next update...great update...please update soon.
guilty pleasures (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| Hmmm ... how is it that Kagome is still a virgin? Is this some weird definition whereby a woman is a virgin until she's had a man's penis inside her? Because, the number of things she's had pushed inside of her, it defies belief that her hymen hasn't been completely torn away by now.
This is a great story i think its going well and every thing..by what about inuyasha? is he going to come after her? and will rin ever find out if kagome is there?
joyouki (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| HEY I THOUGHT GOLDEN SHOWERS WERE IN THE SHOWER! LOL BOY THIS IS SOME KINKY STUFF, AND I AM THROUGHLY ENJOYING EVERY SECOND OF IT! I'M JUST SADENED THAT THE STORY IS DONE (OR STOPPED AT CHAPTER 6) CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
joyouki (Chapter 5) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| OH MY GOD THAT WAS FREAKISHLY WANTONISH HOT! I JUST WANT SESS AND KAGS TO BE TOGETHER. I DID ENJOY THE 3 WAY, BUT I JUST WANT A THEM TO BE A COUPLE "HIS" AND "HERS"
joyouki (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| BY SESSHOMARU IS A PERV! I AM GLAD TO SEE HIM START TO HAVE FEELINGS, I HOPE SOON THAT HE'LL REVEAL THAT TO KAGOME!
joyouki (Chapter 3) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| OH KAMI! LOL! I WOULD REALLY REALLY LIKE TO SEE THEM AS A COUPLE. I WISH FOR SESSHOMARU TO START CARING FOR HER. I WANT ROMANCE TOO! FLUFFY JUICY STUFF. HOPEFULLY HE REALIZES HE IS JUST ENCOURAGING THE OTHER MALES TO WANT HIS "MATE". I HOPE HE MARKS HER!
joyouki (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| HELLO! THAT WAS EXCITING! YOU ARE A LIFE SAVER ON A SATURDAY NIGHT! I FEEL BAD FOR KAGS BUT THEN I FEEL LIKE "DAMN WHAT AM I MISSING" LOL
joyouki (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| HOLY SH*T! SIGN ME UP! THIS SOUNDS AMAZING AND WANTONISH! THIS IS THE JUICE! I CANT EVEN TELL YOU HOW MUCH I AM ENJOYING THIS.
tifany (Chapter 6) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
poor kags................. owww when will she break poor kagss...... make seshh suffer poor kags.....
Megan (Chapter 6) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| Well written lady. I liked the development between Sesshoumaru and Kagome in this chapter. I waaaaant him to take her. I sort of wished they had more one and one smexiness together!
I as you might guess, I am very happy that Naomi wasn't involved too much. I still feel like she is getting in the way of the couples development. Their relationship is beyond friendship, and while I enjoy pairings like that, not in Sesshoumaru and Kagome fan fics. I was totally cheering when Sesshoumaru told her to leave!
Thank you for updating to regularly and quickly! I love it when Authors do that. Its great to see and update when I check the site all the time. ;D I hope your next update comes soon!
Megan (Chapter 5) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| The last chapter was very good. But I will admit that I don't really like Naomi and her place in the story. I feel like she is in the way completely. While I feel bad for her, I would simply like her to go away! She should have her own happy ending, not one with Sesshoumaru and Kagome. To this point I loved all the smutty yummy chapters but this last one was less enjoyable because of her role in it. If I had a say, she would be out the door.
I was also sort of disappointed that Kagome's emotions on Sesshoumaru letting those other man touch her just disappeared when she saw the two other girls on him. I was hoping for an angry confrontation that would end smuttily.
Good job though. I am interested in where this story is going.
Niiiiice... this just keeps getting better and better.
| OMFG!!!!! This story is sooooooo good!!!!! i can't wait to see what happens next. i say he decides to take her as mate but the mating has to be in front of the higher nobility and of course their entire pack in order to make it official, and it's at that point that he finally takes her virginity. Love it can't wait to read more.
queenie (Chapter 5) - Fri 05 Dec 2008
| Great story but I hope that Naomi was a one time thing. I dont like Kagome to share. I think maybe the Kagome can become a concubine and work herself up to being Sesshomaru's mate. That way you can play around with the story but you still get the sess/kag ending.
I wish I could help more but I dont have many ideas that would help this story. Please update soon.
Bella (Chapter 5) - Fri 05 Dec 2008
Firs off...GREAT UPDATE...Please update soon. Second, the thing with Sess/Kag & Naomi was great...but...I hope it's just a one time thing. I understand that Kagome loved it, but I'm like your previous reviewer...I want Sess to only want Kagome and no one else...not even in a threesome and the same for Kagome. I would think Caim is dead considering that Lord Raidon wanted Naomi so badly, Sess could already know, Kags could offer herself to Sess permanently in order to give Naomi her freedome to find Caim, that is when he tells her about what happened to him., that is when he gets the idea to give Naomi to Inuyasha, in exchange for Kagome. Inuyasha would have a fit or Sess could knock Inuyasha out and give him to Naomi to torture until he all but forgot about Kagome, then Sess and Kag could sit back in get some sadistic joy and pleasure out of watching the two...it could be a turn on for them...not being involved of course...just watching. Naomi needs someone else to pleasure instead of Kagome and Sesshomaru...Inuyasha would be perfect. I can see the expression on Miroku's face if he saw this...he's a perv to begin with...this would be right up his ally...and secretly Sango's too. She's a dominatrix waiting to happen. GREAT JOB.
Page 6 of 8
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | 