Ohh I like Sage and I thought this chapter was terrific. This gives a whole new twist to the story! I love watching Kagome become more powerful and Independent. I don't want her to forgive Sesshoumaru to fast or to easily! He needs to work to regain her trust and her newly formed independence will go along way toward helping her.
This story was refered to me by a friend from FF.net. She was looking for a good smutty story and found yours. When she started describing it to me, I had to come and read it and I've been in a world of dizzying passion since.
This had be captivated from the very beginning. I loved the S&M play between them, the creativity of all your torture. I makes me envious that you could think of such imaginative things. I, like Kagome, was desperate to have Sesshoumaru take her completely. Not to mention the fact that you didn't rush it! Even after all their play, you still took your time and described everything in wonderful detail. Thank you!
I loved how you described certain things. The first that comes to mind was how she felt killing the rabbit. The differences between killing somone with an arrow and a knife. Very nicely put. The way you described the wielding of magic as Seyerna helped teach her. Oh, how well you described Seyerna when you first introduced her. I'm sure there were many more things you wrote along the way, but there were simply too much for me to recall.
I do so hope that you finish this story. It feels close to the end, and I would love find out how it turns out.
Oh my goodnessbiskits! I love this story and I can't wait untill you update again!!!!! PLEASE BE SOON!!!!!!!!
Sprinks (Chapter 23) - Thu 15 Dec 2011
I have been following this story since the very very start. I spent months and months looking up your page to find if you had any more chapters. For a time I thought you had stopped. I was so shattered because I loved where the story was heading. And Then You started updating again! I am so happy you have continued with this story because it's an awesome story.
I love it all, and I hope that Kagome doesn't have too much more pain to go through :( Thank you so much for your amazing writing, Can't wait to read the next chapter and the one's that will follow.
Lots of Love Sprinks.
I think you've done a great job so far! As far as fetishes you haven't used, a hood and knifeplay could work fantastically together!
Inudq88 (Chapter 21) - Tue 13 Dec 2011
You're kinda making me hate Sesshoumaru. He doesn't seem to respect her at all...
Anonymous (Chapter 21) - Tue 13 Dec 2011
hmmmmm I think one idea for a fetish is using pulsors (i think thats how you spell it lol) I read it somewhere and its using sparks or electricity or sesshoumarus youki conducted into small metal disks wrapped around Kagomes womans parts and sesshoumaru can control it or something like that lol just an idea i hope it helps :)
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