Also just wanted to say, that I agree with a previous reviewer. The summary does not do this story justice But it's also a pleasant surprise when you keep on going.
Nooooooo, why'd this have to be the latest chapter!?!?!?! Gahly, I don't know what to make of Sesshoumaru's morbid fascination with commiting suicide at school. Thsee POV's are really enlightening and heartrenching at the same time. Her dad is terrible, and the momma smh. I don't even know what to say about the mom, I understand abuse causes psychological damage but daggonit Anna shoulda been better. Kudos to Souta for trying his damndest to save his sister. Just sucks the baby was sacrificed in all this cruelty. He/she was trying so hard to protect their mom.
ja ne and can't wait till next chappie
Update soon!!!!
Omg!!! Can't wait for you to finish this story!!!
Omg please update soon. This is now my favorite. I've read a lot but this has everything.
Gee (Chapter 18) - Sat 13 Oct 2018
Thanks for the update!
Huhu poor sess... hopefully things get better for them. :(
Koree (Chapter 18) - Sat 13 Oct 2018
Ah I knew the guilt would get to Sesshomaru & terribly so . :( great chap
Lorena (Chapter 18) - Sat 13 Oct 2018
!!! Thank you so much for Sesshomaru's POV...I feel so greedy now, I want more Seshomaru's pov~ It sounded like there was only one casket, did only Kagome "die" or in his grief did he only see Kagome?
And so it begins. I loved this short so much. I love how we actually get to know Sesshoumaru's internal struggle. How he is so desperate to hold on to her. Will he ever find out what really happened?
I really enjoy every chapter. Looking forward to your next one.
Natalia (Chapter 18) - Fri 12 Oct 2018
So sad and heartbreaking .....
This was heartbreakingly beautiful..I hope this makes him have more trust in her... I really hope his resolve to be openly affectionate with her will remain even after she gets her memory back...too many feelings to put into words T_T....can't wait to read the next chapters :-)
When you think the story will go one way, and then in the most unexpected pleasant ways goes another. Rereading this fic just emphasis that fact for me. You did well Author-san.
The ending for their first story might have gone well, a tragedy really, but heres to hoping that their second or numberous chances goes better.
- My heart weeps for this tragic characters.-
Koree (Chapter 17) - Tue 11 Sep 2018
When I’m telling you I am crying puddles:( I really cannot believe Sesshomaru did not believe her , I also can’t believe her mom went along with it yes she tried to help but it was clearly way to late . i thought the last chap was dad this was... wow I literally shook & at a lost for words amazing chap but terribly sad
R (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Sep 2018
Oh...my good gracious. Are you trying to kill me? ... cuz, OMG - ANGST! ;) In all seriousness though, kudos to you on this great piece of writing! It's so refreshing to read a complex, well-written story with such a unique plot. Like everyone else, that last chapter was simply heartbreaking. You could feel your heart breaking for her and your heart also breaking for him, knowing his current state of desperation. I had a couple of thoughts - (please disregard if I somehow missed this information in my excitement to read!) but I was kind of shocked in trying to reconcile how purely evil Kagome's father truly was. Although his character development shows his hatred / disdain for peace with demons (and Sessh), I don't know that I really felt how conniving he was because in the 100+ years that Kagome and Sessh fell into friendship and then into love, he never once tried to railroad the connection - why? Was he fearful that curbing their connection wold reflect poorly on his outward image as a representative of peace? Was he blinded by his narcissim (e.g. his egoic obsession with the power of his lineage and its infallibility) so that he never believed that the two would fall in love? I guess I was left wondering why they were given such time to develop together, only to have her father freakout (almost as if surprised) when they consumated their very obvious connection. At any rate, your story is wonderful and it's obvious you've taken such time and care. That I've sat down to write this review tells you how connected I felt to it! Thanks for all your hard work and I am really looking forward to the updates.
Nazma (Chapter 17) - Mon 03 Sep 2018
I just binge-read this. And I’m lyinng in bed, sobbing uncontrollably. You just shattered my heart and I wanna keep reading so I can just cry more. This is so amazing. Not at all what I thought it was gonna be from the summary. Ugh, I just love this story so much. please post another chapter soon!
Jamie (Chapter 17) - Mon 20 Aug 2018
Omg... how absolutely heart shattering!!
I have to ask, because I'm that impatient: does she ever remember their shared past?
Pep (Chapter 17) - Mon 20 Aug 2018
You just killed my soul.... I can't stop crying... Kyoshiro....I will forever hate that man... I can't... ... I can't wait for the next chapter... Q_Q
I am glad your were sensible enough to note the flavor would not be for everyone but judgment MUST BE reserved. The ball, as they say, is firmly in your section of the court.
milady
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Skylar (Chapter 17) - Sun 19 Aug 2018
My heart hurts for them!
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