I hope she leaves for Chicago, even if she regains old happy memories. In the present he is a torturer and not making her happy at all.
This chapter left a bad taste in my mouth so to say. It would be nice to finally get at least some answers as to clear our confusion. We only found out he wanted to kill himself. He is too desperate and crazy for my taste. I keep wondering why. He seems obsessed. I don't mean to be rude but the flow or the plot changed. I get the feeling that this is a totally different fanfic than the one I got the idea from the first chapter. Don't get me wrong I enjoy it but the plot is too confusing and mixed at times. It's like you started with something but changed directions. I don't recognise the plot in the last few chapters but that is just me. Apologies. I get that she has to be confused but to this extent? And as the readers we should know more yet I don't get that impression.
Your writing as always is amazing and full of emotions.
Thx for updating. Will eagerly wait for more.
Toni (Chapter 5) - Thu 18 Jan 2018
looking forward to the next chapter
Lorena (Chapter 5) - Thu 18 Jan 2018
I can't thank you enough for what you wrote before this chapter, I honestly had to read it a bit to remember it, lol. I feel so bad for Sesshomaru! Should I feel bad for Sesshomaru...idk, I guess they're mates but I wonder if the rumors about him were true, but I can't see him cheating of he's already so attached-but then I ask myself why did he keep his distance before the party? I think I'm over thinking things and annoyed by myself >_<
Elisha (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Jan 2018
This story has really captivated me, so much drama and they way you portray the characters flows so well that I have a hard time not reading the chapters over and over. I absolutely love the work you are putting into this! Keep going and post more chapters please!
Omg! You got me on the edge of my seat!! The story is amazing so far!
They were going to get married!!!!! Omg this is getting really good! I want to know how she got her memories switched/replaced. Keep it up the good work!
Natalia (Chapter 5) - Wed 17 Jan 2018
More questions than answers but Gosh so interesting! I am squirming at the edge of my seat! I wonder what really happened. It seems there is more going on than she remembers.
Thx for updating! Are there many more chapters? I am so impatient!
Wow mre drama. I cant wait to read more though. I wonder if Kagome is going to stay with Sesshomaru.
Lorena (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Jan 2018
*I can honestly say I'm confused, lol. Did she lose it between chapters 3 and 4? Why is she so confused about her identity? I'd love to know Sesshomaru's Pov soon, mainly because Kagome is so perplexing I hope he can bring some more information. Like, I think she has some facts jumbled because I can see being angry, but not this vengeful hate. I just want to lay down some facts on Kagome because I think she's going about this the wrong way, but I don't even have them myself
He's clueless, she's clueless. I swear she needs to learn so Inu culture and he needs to learn about human culture. She has a class in it..she must be failing. You would think he would have one on humans too and how to get along in society. Geez... I dang it Sesshou you should have at least smelled the tears. He is so caught up in the moment. Also I have a feelin that there is more to their history than Kagome knows. I thought she had learned to defend herself? She needs to give him a little shock, then again after what she heard from Sango that might not be too wise. Thanks for the update.
Mona (Chapter 4) - Fri 12 Jan 2018
I hope she keeps her promise to herself and not fall into his trap of romance. If it was meant to be then maybe down the line when they are more mature and not in high school.
Loveyaa (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Jan 2018
Hmm...so the change in POV will continue the story not retell it? An interesting idea. I wonder if Kagome will be able to go through with it and deal with it. Only one way to find out. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Natalia (Chapter 3) - Sun 07 Jan 2018
Oh I so hope this will have a happy ending! Please?
I know she was hurt but will still wait for his pov.
Thx for updating!
Love where its going! Keep it up
I wonder why he ran away? I like forward to seeing what happens next.
Kagome has a plan, yes!!! I can’t wait to read more!!
Mona (Chapter 3) - Sat 06 Jan 2018
I hope she follows through with her plan, and not fall under the pressure like in other fanfics. Fingers Crossed.
I love the original story plot to this and I'm excited to see how this all unfolds. please please update asap?!?!
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