As a long time world of Warcraft player and now ESO player also, this story is awesome! There are so many friends i have made from these games over the years thst it is a great way for her to find her friends again! You are doing a wonderful job on their personalities, and I would love to hear how the wolves came to be with the others and what happened to inuyasha. Can't wait for more!
WRONG?!?! Nothing is wrong or scenseless with your story or the way you are thinking about scent and things... At least I find your logic completely and absolutely logical... we tend to forget things... everybody does.. Or does everyone remember the smell of cinnamon... or applepie?? I do not.. but I am sure i would once I start smeling it somewhere, like "OH, I know this smell.. ¡cinammon rolls! YUMII!"
Not because every story make it seem as if scent is ingrained in memory forever it really is going to be like that in reality!!! I mean we are talking about demons!, youkai!! there is nothing real about them so nobody can say something is this way or that way...
Soooo, just keep doing YOUR thing, YOUR plot, with YOUR style and YOUR ideas!! and dont forget to keep them coming!! I love your updates!
PS: Why do I feel that Kagome is so not going to read that message?
I love this! can't wait to find out her reaction to Sesh message ^_^ keep up the wonderful work you do.
donna (Chapter 9) - Tue 19 Sep 2017
I am really interested in this story I hope you update soon I really want to know what happens you are a great writer don't listen to any negative feedback it is your story and what you want of it is all that matters there are always people who like to be mean to other. don't let it faze you your store is awesome I wait eagerly for your update
ponpiri (Chapter 9) - Mon 18 Sep 2017
Leave it to Sesshou to get to the bottom of the matter.
ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Mon 18 Sep 2017
Interesting and fun. What's an NPC?
Bambi (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017
WAAA!!! Why'd you end there???
Great job, keep up the hard work. :)
Nice! I wonder how Kagome will react! I'm so excited XD
Grandpa why!? Lol Well I can definitely see the issue here XD!
I just love how confused Sesshomaru is XD. Oh gosh Shippo has so explaing to do!
This is so very interesting! Very unique! I've never read a story like this before. I'm really enjoying it!
Tearing up over here... great chapter, I cant wait for her to see that message!
Kagome (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017
So, I rarely ever right reviews but this story really has captivated my interest! I love what's you've done here and how the characters aren't OCC! This story is a true gem! ;) Can't wait for more updates!
Fantastic new chapter! I loved that Sesshomaru broke down and actually made a character. So funny to imagine him playing a MMORPG. I cannot wait for more chapters, to find out what Kagome does upon finding the address and what happens next between Sesshomaru/Shippo confronting Ayame/Koga about their inability to do a task. Please let the muse out so we can enjoy the ongoing story you are creating.
I so can't wait to see her reaction when she reads that message from sesshomaru!
Great story don't worry about those that thing YOUR story should go THEIR WHY. If they want a story let them write it themselves. Yours is find the way it is.
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