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donna (Chapter 9) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

I am really interested in this story I hope you update soon I really want to know what happens you are a great writer don't listen to any negative feedback it is your story and what you want of it is all that matters there are always people who like to be mean to other. don't let it faze you your store is awesome I wait eagerly for your update 


ponpiri (Chapter 9) - Mon 18 Sep 2017

Leave it to Sesshou to get to the bottom of the matter. 


ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Mon 18 Sep 2017

Interesting and fun. What's an NPC?


Bambi (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

WAAA!!! Why'd you end there??? 


stephanie (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

Great job, keep up the hard work. :)


Leahchan13 (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

Nice! I wonder how Kagome will react! I'm so excited XD


Leahchan13 (Chapter 7) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

Grandpa why!? Lol Well I can definitely see the issue here XD!


Leahchan13 (Chapter 5) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

I just love how confused Sesshomaru is XD. Oh gosh Shippo has so explaing to do!


Leahchan13 (Chapter 3) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

This is so very interesting! Very unique! I've never read a story like this before. I'm really enjoying it!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

Tearing up over here... great chapter, I cant wait for her to see that message!


Kagome (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

So, I rarely ever right reviews but this story really has captivated my interest! I love what's you've done here and how the characters aren't OCC! This story is a true gem! ;) Can't wait for more updates!


Roseanna (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Sep 2017

Fantastic new chapter!  I loved that Sesshomaru broke down and actually made a character.  So funny to imagine him playing a MMORPG.  I cannot wait for more chapters, to find out what Kagome does upon finding the address and what happens next between Sesshomaru/Shippo confronting Ayame/Koga about their inability to do a task.  Please let the muse out so we can enjoy the ongoing story you are creating.


cassandra (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

I so can't wait to see her reaction when she reads that message from sesshomaru! 


roberta. (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

Great story don't worry about those  that thing YOUR story should go THEIR WHY. If they want a story let them write it themselves. Yours is find the way it is.


kathryn (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

I love your story so far it is unique and your own. The way it is coming out is great and not in anyway wrong. It's a story and you are the one who leads us through it so great job and am looking forward to reading it.


GomeMaru (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

This is awsome, i love the this story. It feels little like im reading sword art online. Keep it up!!!. If you wanna add another chapter today i wont object 


ladyhikikomori (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

Even disregarding artistic license, I think the fact that traces of her scent isn't recognizable makes perfect sense - especially with the newest chapter. The shrine has been sold and inhabited by other people, her scent is going to break down over time and become so muddled with all the other smells that even for a yokai it is plausible that after 500 years it would not be enough to trigger anything. Furthermore, Koga and Ayame were concentrated on their own personal issues and so distractions can lead to things getting overlooked. Considering who visited the shrine it makes sense that they wouldn't think to associate the God tree with Kagome's home or with Grandpa's "Demons, begone!" routine as anything other than a senile old man. We as readers have to keep in mind that yokai are accustomed to being distrusted and reviled by most holy people, it seems like it would be a strange thing to occur in modern day but since yokai know the truth that they aren't actually just myth and legends it is plausible that when confronted with a shrine keeper who casts them out that their default response would be to not question why he has called them demons and told them to leave a shrine. 

 

This story is great and I personally don't think there is any plot hole surrounding her scent. I hope you will continue with your story, it's one of my current favourites and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it! 


Natalia (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

Finally! 

And and and the shrine was sold! What a pity! How did they allow it!? The well? Weren't they scared someone can mess with it!?

Agrhh! So sorry for them!

An amazing chapter and hope kagome will read the message sooner than later!

Thanks for updating


inuGoddess (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY AND IN IMPATIENTLY WAITING ON YOUR NEXT UPDATE!! 


cynthia (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

I agree that senting her would b far too easy and it wouldn't have been good had it been the wolves. I am enjoying this story. Keep it up hun, ur doing great


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