I loved this chapter bringing Sango back. As for Kohaku I think he may deserve a second chance at life but for Rin, she has died to many times and needs to rest. She may not appreciate being brought back; but then again who knows maybe she might, so she can be the daughter that Sessho really misses and gets a another chance being the father he should have been to her.
Great chapter. Loved the way you handled bringing Sango back not having Kagome go unconscience again. And I am also glad to know that she will be growing in power as each seal is broken.
Looking forward to the next adventure.
nicole (Chapter 24) - Mon 22 Aug 2016
You should add a twist near the end of the story and bring rin and kohaku together as a couple
A very insightful chapter giving us a look into the demented monk Riku's mindset. He his very demented and uses fear to get people to follow him. He doesn't have the kind of power to put his plan in motion without Kagome. What he did to that poor girl just proved to some of followers that they may have made a mistake in following him but fear him now. He has dark magic in his reiki and he used it to coat the arrow that he shot at Kagome wounding her. I think that was what he was using to track her like he said but using that young miko girl, I think he infused her reiki with some of his and had her shot it hitting Kagome in the chest so now Kagome has been infused with some his dark reiki. He knew that it wasn't going to hurt her but now he can use it to try to control her and still track her. I think he is going to try and lure Kagome away from the group some kind of way. These are my opinions.
Another great chapter and story I love well written by you. Looking for more chapters ahead. Great job.
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