I'm thrilled to be reading a new story by you!! You've quickly become one of my favorite authors!! I can't wait to read more.
First off I am sorry for my last review it was meant to be for chapter 2. This review is for chapter 3.
I believe this is the turning point in Kagome's life and eventially for Sesshomaru. I like your style of writing, you make your stories interesting and engrossing. I think that when Kagome finds out that these group of so called "holy people" are the ones that want to start the elimination of all demons and Kagome will have to seek out Sessho's help, therefore, bringing them back together again soon. When Kagome finally meets Sessho's son she will be surprised how he raised his son with a bit of her personality traits. This story is getting more intriguing. I look forward to future updates soon.
Ashatan (Chapter 2) - Mon 25 Apr 2016
Just your summary captured my attention.
I look forward to seeing what you have in store for us with Seshoumaru and Kagome.
Rhonda (Chapter 2) - Mon 25 Apr 2016
Really enjoying this. Looking forward to our favourite couple meeting again and hope happiness is found soon.
Children do help with dealing with what life hands you, but nothing helps emotional and physical health like having an understanding and loving partner...
Looking forward to more...
Well this was a sad chapter. But it gave a little more insight into Sessho's mating. But I don't want to like his mate. Sounds mean of me but that's just the way I feel. I still like this story and it is very well written like your other stories. Update soon.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Shisaa (Chapter 2) - Sun 24 Apr 2016
I really like this new story ! Can't wait to read more :)
Mona (Chapter 2) - Sun 24 Apr 2016
Looking forward to reading more and I was wondering if Kagome challenged Sesshoumaru's mate or defeated her in battle, wouldnt that keep their honor intact.
Halcali (Chapter 2) - Sun 24 Apr 2016
Oh, so it was a forced mating. I feel sad for Sesshoumaru. His mom is a bitch for blackmailing him.
Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm excited to read about Sesshoumaru's son. I am also excited to see how Sesshoumaru and Kagome's reunion would play out.
Thank you for updating! :D
Halcali (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Apr 2016
Great job on the first chapter. Looks like this is going to be pretty angst-filled -- right up my alley. So Sesshoumaru's mate isn't gonna be an antagonist? I'm intrigued. I usually end up hating the other woman in stories like these, lol.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
Amazing story!!!! Can't wait for the next ch! though i don't like how sesshoumaru has a mate but as you said she is not evil and Kagome and sesshoumaru would still end up together so i would hold on to that! :D
You know I was thinking along the lines of the reviewer named Mona about Sess/Kags and then I thought about a rewind where Inuyasha and Kagome finds out a lot sooner about their relationship and separate and go their own way. I know this is so cliche' but after Inuyasha leaves, Kagome has some kind of dream or the kamis or fates get involve and things begin to change back to where Kagome has already been back for a year and everyone is still alive. Sessho and Kags begin their romance. Because of Kags immortality she can only have youkai children. Like I said it is very cliche' but you can add your own twists and plots to make it more interesting. I know I am a nut case, but I love Sess/Kags pairings first and foremost with a happy ending :) lol
I think this story may be interesting in its own way I guess (crys cause Sess is mated and has a child already).
Mona (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Apr 2016
Interesting start, although I hate reading Sess/Kag fanfics wheret Sesshoumaru is the only one to experience intimacy and have a child before he ends up with Kagome. While Kagome lives her life a virgin and loveless in the mean time, he gets all the experience and fun, while she has nothing.
I am still looking forward to reading what will happen next, especially how Sango, Miroku and Rin will come back, perhaps reincarnation.
Lammy (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Apr 2016
The angst! I am loving it. I am looking forward to the rest of the story!
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