Amazing as always!! I can't wait to find out what happens and even the back story of the rest of the crew
Interesting. I always loved Sci-fi, Isaac Asimov being one of my very favorites. Never really thought about putting the Inuyasha characters in one, though. Closest I've come is one AU Called AI, short for Artificial Intelligence, and a play on the fact that the meaning of those two characters in Japanese means love. Haven't worked on it for a while, though. Got too many others needing to be finished. Anyway, good job so far - I'm intrigued.
Hope to see more on this story...
Amber
I enjoy every single word!
I can't offer enough encouragement for you! This is -the- story I look forward to reading. If this were to be made into a comic/movie, it would not do your writing justice. Keep up the great work! Us fans will always be here :)
This was a good chapter. I like how you are bringing in each character's back story a little bit at a time. This chapter with Ayame and Kouga was a little insightful. The plot is amazing, you have a fantastic imagination and so detailed. I love scifi and romantic adventures stories especially the ones with some mystery mixed in. Ths story seems to have it all. Keep up the wonderful work.
Don't give up. Write for yourself if anything to bring out the execellent writer you are becoming and are. Looking forward to more of this story.
I think your doing a fine job with this story. I like the original use of these characters.
Your story has become my obsession lately, even though I rarely read sci-fi. And you're so nice for replying to the reviews!! Thank you for taking time to write this story!!
You shouldn't be lacking confidence, because your fic is amazing!
I can't wait to read what's in store everybody! <3
Great work!!!
It's been a while since i've read fanfiction here on Dokuga, and finding new stories to enjoy can be difficult. I'd like to thank you for taking the time out of your everyday life to bring this story to the rest of us here. I've very much enjoyed this story, and am looking forward to reading more in the future from you. I do however want to point out that there are a handful of formating errors and perhaps a few sentences where words may have been omitted.
Thank you again for sharing your story. It most definitely has the makings of a scifi novel and I am quite curious about the Baasratu species you've created/brough to life. I hope to learn more about them as the story progresses.
Also I feel you have aptly nailed the disgust to be felt for Naraku, and I both dread yet look forward to seeing where his despicible being goes from here.
Thanks,
~Nika
Just adding a gushing review to your collection of them. I read all 11 chapters in one night and the story is now subscribed!
Samara (Chapter 11) - Sun 03 Jul 2016
I love this concept. It has a ring of enders game, simply because of the backstory of aliens and fighting teams that are trained from childhood. From there you went in a totally new direction. A direction I am loving. I am also glad you said this will not be a tragedy. I look forward to your next intallment and of course for their face to face meeting...
Loveyaa (Chapter 11) - Sun 03 Jul 2016
What a concept. I like the idea of Kagome getting into Sesshoumaru's head first, literally. They are asking for a lot all of a sudden. I wonder how that will work out. You keep things so intersting with so many pieces overlapping and intertwining. I can't wait to see what happens next and how it all fits together :)
Who would want you to rush through your story!! It is beyond interesting at the rate its going. I hope that you finish it :3
The sci-fi plot of this fic is so refreshingly original and well executed! I'm really excited to read what happens next!
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