I seldom read AU stories featuring the Inuyasha characters because I often end up being disappointed. But I am so glad I decided to read your story.
You are a wonderful storyteller and a brilliant writer. I cannot believe how I became immersed in this science fiction fantasy so quickly. And the most amazing part of the tale is how the characters remain true to their original versions even if the story is not set in the cannon universe. Kudos.
I cannot wait for Sesshomaru and Kagome to meet. (Squealing like a fan girl.)
Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter ...
Yay! Can't wait to read more!
Mia (Chapter 15) - Sat 10 Sep 2016
Hehehehe. I like Keade. Poor Inuyasha, he has no on his side.
First let me say I really love this fic it is so different from all the others Ive read. A great breath of fresh air! But in the begining of this chapter you have Sess and Kouga being scolded by a Lieutenant while they are both Captains. Now I dont know what your invisioned rank structure is but in all the armed forces and law enforcement Captains always out rank Lieutenants. Its not a big deal but being in the military that discrepencey irked me a little lol.
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Sat 10 Sep 2016
This is getting good. Looks like everyone else is going to know what kagome looks like before sesshomaru lol. Keep up the great work.
Loveyaa (Chapter 14) - Wed 07 Sep 2016
Look at them. So good together and others are noticing too. It can only get better from here right? I can't wait to see what happens next and good luck with everything :)
Uh oh i wonder if the trouble koga caused will interfere with sess assassination training. :'( just as they mastered it
Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Aug 2016
Koga so needs to be given a reality check. If you want to get more recognition, get better! It's not Sesshoumaru's fault. Also, not liking his turning Kagome into an object. So hoping that if she ever meets him that she puts him in his place quick, none of that passive crap. He cares about no one else, why should he get extra consideration? I tend to not like Koga, can you say creepy! Ugh!
Kae (Chapter 14) - Mon 29 Aug 2016
“Regardless of her violent tendencies, she really was a good teacher.” -favorite line!
I'm just sitting over here, loving every chapter! ;)
I am absolutely in LOVE with this already! As long as you finish it I'll be comin back for more!
This chapter was well written! I love this story so far. I cannot wait for Sesshomaru to finally see Kagome face to face. I also can't believe what Kouga said about trying to switch partners and getting Kagome. Bye. Lol. I like seeing the character development as well! (: I can't wait for the next update, also, don't apologize for long chapters, I could read your story all day!(;
Haven (Chapter 14) - Sun 28 Aug 2016
I loved this chapter! Little view into everyone's business. The training is getting to all of them, not just S/K. I wonder when the others will find out about Sess and how will Kouga react. He's already so salty.
Midoriko and Lydia crack me up, they're bigger fan girls than me. can you explain the difference between the training of midoriko and Natalia? Also, which ship is midoriko on, Sess' or Kags? She seems to be everywhere. Lastly, I love Kimi. Her precog dream was interesting, very Minority Report. It makes me wonder if she will ever meet and train Kagome? They seem to be very similar in that they are both prodigy psychics. That would be cool. Oh and cant wait until S/K meet That kinda goes without saying. Thanks for writing.
Yayyayyayyay!!! I loove love this chapter and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the amazing work!
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