Awesome chapter! You did a good job with the battle scenes....it wasn't very descriptive but the feel of the situation was communicated clearly. This is such a unique fic, I am truly enjoying it. I feel like you keep teasing us with so many sub plots within the story. I can't wait for them to be exposed!
Love the “So they went in, killed some things, blew shit up and captured the resource planet. Tadaa!”
Also, you did exceedingly well with the battle scenes! I was fully immersed to the point where everything else around me ceased to be. That, to me, is a sign of excellent writing.
Looking forward to moar!
Holy hell!! They're finally going on their first assassin mission.
This is definitely going to be good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
when will they meet with each other?? want to read it as soon as possible kyaa
when will they meet with each other?? want to read it as soon as possible kyaa
I can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm just so into thisstory! Im always on edge.
I am just dying to read just when Sesshomaru and Kagome will finally meet...wether it is on screen or in person.... and what will happen. As for the next couple of chapters WOW!!! this battle for the resource planet is going to be awesome!!! I can't wait to read about everyone going down to the planet for water, vegetation, etc. Too bad they can't settle down on the planet...or will they??? It seems that the enemy taking the entire planet Earth hostage shows how much strength and technology they have but it is very strange to all of a sudden go to war with a different species for seemingly no reason. I personally want to know what started it and if there is some way to arrive at some sort of peace or something like that........I also want to know who would betray the human race to the enemy like it has become apparent that someone or a lot of someones have done.
Thanks for the updates though and keep them coming. I like how Kogua lost it when he saw Kagome for the first time and poor Sess hasn't even caught a glimpse or her yet! It's funny though, Kogua has already started calling her "my woman" and he doesn't even know anything about her, much less her name ha ha!!! Sesshomaru needs to get with Sango and link up with Kagome. Maybe he could stumble into the room while she is talking with her or something? I just can't wait!!! this is going to be good!!!
Once again thanks for the story!!!
This story is so wonderful! I adore the sesshomaru Kagome pairing and you portray them so well! Thank you for posting this story and I'm so excited to see where this goes!
See you in the next chapter!!
Love!
You're amazing and keep up the good work! I can't wait for what's in store and who was that at the end??? Eeepppp, can't wait to read more!
Omg, just wanted to say I adore your fic. Can't wait for the new chapter!
Master_sword1 (Chapter 15) - Wed 14 Sep 2016
Omg I want more this story is awesom!!
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