Whoops. Sorry. That last review was for the story, "The Long Way Home" where Sesshomaru is an abusive husband.
I don't know why it posted it on this story. So sorry again.
I also read your fic. Someone played Yuka and I have a guess who it is.
The drug that creates artificial psychics remind me slightly of "Dune" where people take the "spice" to fold space, enhance psychic abilities etc.
Well Sesshomaru just gets worse and worse in this story doesn't he?
What kind of husband would blame his wife for a miscarriage?
Rin needs several bitch slaps upside the head, testing for any STDS and a one-way ticket back to the foster care system (Yeah I know you can't return her but I wish it was allowed.)
And I hope whoever dropped off Kagome at Inuyasha's door found her after the rape and didn't just stand by watching her get brutalized.
There is no hope left for this marriage. I wish Kagome will clean out Sesshomaru financially in the divorce and expose his ill treatment of her to the public. I wish she would kill him and Rin but that would make her stoop to their level.
She doesn't need to return to people who abuse her physically and emotionally. There is no road back when it comes to abuse. You leave to save whatever is left of yourself. You don't come back to be abused again.
A husband who blames you for losing a child, lets your daughter disrespect you, hits you, emotionally abuses you, threatens you and sleeps with your so-called best friend is not worth the spit on the sidewalk. He needs to be arrested for domestic violence, divorced and ostracized by the community.
Wives and girlfriends do not need to put up with that kind of treatment. Period.
Oh my gosh! The story keeps getting more and more intense! I love this slow build and anticipate yiur updates every week (though I suck royally at reviewing consistently. Sorry!!) Is it bad that aside from everyone's safety during the fight, I was really worried that Kagome's baby made it out alright. Oh! And when will they discover that Micah is dead? Who was Yuka's "saviour"? Is he the same one that is behind the leaks to the Baasratu? For a while I kept thinking Naraku had some hand in it, but i'm not so sure anymore; more like he's creepy. Evil, but not to the point of his own destruction... hmm... so many questions.
So... 10 chapters, as in done around a total of 30? that seems impossible. don't do it!!!! I need this forever! lol
Violla (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
Bellissimo non vedo l'ora per sapere che succederà .
Deana (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
Wow! I'm shocked that it was Yuka. I was sure it was Kanna. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next update.
Zyren (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
You are wonderful and amazing and so is the story and any one who doesn't like can find something else to read. This pace is perfect and realistic af. Don't change a thing, real fans are with you all the way.
Adding Yuka was a really interesting spin. i wonder if artificial psychics have anything to do with the human Basurata communications. and how was Yuka able to physically manifest her abilities to do physical damage without the use of a pod/partner? ? Was it because hers were artificial? can Kagome do that too? That would be handy on the chance that psychics were attacked. And I'm so intrigued by Naraku, I can't tell if he's really a bad guy or just a spindly little creep. Can't wait for more!!
I love this story. The plot is really great and it seems to just keep getting better, I like the fact Sesshmaru and Kagome haven't meet yet but they are both de some kind of attraction. i like the pace, keep it up! I'm excited for the next update :)
Mona (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
Great update, was not expecting it to be Yuk. I wonder how Sesshoumaru is going to respond to the news about Kagome. Please update again soon.
china (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
I love this fanfiction. Its so original and I think you should become a proffesional writer. If you arent already. Lol. Keep going and ignore the haters. They'll be there, hating on your success forever. Their jealousy will FUEL YOUR AWESOMNESS!!!
I loved this chapter so much! im glad we finally got to see the mystery character. I didnt expect it to be her old best friend though, such a great twist. now I wonder who is changing people into these psychic mutant things lol. i can't wait for sesshomaru and Kagome to finally meet face to face! I know it will definitely be worth the wait! My birthday is in January too, so that will be a good surprise! Lol. I cant wait for the next chapter, your updates always brighten my day!(:
Danna (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming Please. Thank you for for posting your stories, you are a good writter! I have "Her Voice" on my favorites so that I get notified when new chapters come out. So until next week!
candy (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
I like your story very much and I will wait for more to come out. You are doing a great job keep up the good work.
As always, this chapter was amazing. i love how you tied Yuka back into the story. i wonder how this will effect Kagome long them though.
what in the world! What did yuka give her? Update soon!
snow (Chapter 19) - Sun 30 Oct 2016
This story is good!! anime story line. this story could be a manga/anime on its own without anything Inuyasha. I'm serious you can make this story into an anime hell even a book that's how good it is!! id watch it if it was an anime, this would be one bad ass anime too lol. the plot, the story flow, even the character development it's all good like seriously good.
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