Plot is good.... we are so waiting for them to meet SK ALL THE WAY
I know you are writing a space saga but I have to be honest with you.
There are too many subplots and too many side characters. Is the junky Rin or Kanna? Just curious. But I'm not too invested in the character since she is among several who detract from my main interest.
I get it that Sesshomaru and Kagome are on different ships but really we are now on Chapter 19 and they still haven't seen each other via a video phone or computer? I mean even Kouga has seen her why not the hero of the story?
I suspect with the lavish amount of detail spent on that plant that it will be important to the plot but I get weary now reading graphs upon graphs about that plant and the boring botanist people.
You have the plant, the drugs, the side stories from the characters, the alien experimentation, the traitor, political machinations, an election, etc etc I thought the main story is about Kagome, the psychic who is fated to save the humans?
Anonymous (Chapter 19) - Sat 22 Oct 2016
I absolutely love this story! I check to see if there's a new chapter every day. Your story is one of the few well written ones. Keep up the good work!
Dee (Chapter 19) - Sat 22 Oct 2016
Please write s/k meeting at least!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D:
I absolutely LOVE this story and can't wait to read more!!!!!
Now i have to reread to find out exactly who this is having the tremors. I wonder what she wants from Kagome and even what the council trand master plan is with her.
I also CANNOT wait until she and sess meet in person!!
Now i have to reread to find out exactly who this is having the tremors. I wonder what she wants from Kagome and even what the council trand master plan is with her.
I also CANNOT wait until she and sess meet in person!!
Lonelylulaby (Chapter 18) - Mon 17 Oct 2016
OMG!!!! Who is this mysterious stranger and what does she want with Kagome-chan? Why is Higurashi's energy so interesting to everybody. Are the Baarastu and evolutionary step in the human races lives? Also, how the hell did humans loose their planet? was that mentioned somewhere and I just skimmed over it? Thank you so much for this chapter it was really enjoyable. my favorite part was Kagome blushing when Miroku asked her why she decided to become a battle link for real for real. I wonder what dark suspiciouns Miroku has and who he thinks is setting the stage.
ja ne till next time and keep up the great work.
keep it coming!
I think you are such a wonderful weiter, with such a great imagination. If you ever start writing novels let me know!!! Love love loveeeee your work. I am always so excited to read the new updates. I forget that I'm actually reading fanfiction sometimes in your story.
I really love your story! This chapter was really well written, and I can't wait to see who that mystery character is! (:
This is a lovely bit of writing you have here. I've been so worried as the popularity of this fandom wanes, that I would have to content myself with reading the oldies. However, you've given me something new with just the right balance of action and fluff. I hope you continue on. :D
P.S. I'm really enjoying it if you can't tell.
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Can't wait for more!
Kae (Chapter 18) - Sat 15 Oct 2016
I am SO CONFUSED, but don't mind at all! This is so great, I can't wait to see what's happening!
Anonymous (Chapter 17) - Tue 11 Oct 2016
I think you did just a stupendous job with the action scenes. I really like the way you show Sesshoumaru contemplating and falling. I wonder who this new character is and how she will shake things up even more. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I am absolutely in love with this story.. so much so that I'm writing this at 315am..
The way you write is extraordinary and I cannot wait to read more!
I do hope they meet soon.. the anticipation is killing me.
Love love love it! Please update soon!
Every time I see a new update I just about scream in excitement! Lol I'm just loving this so much!
Jennn (Chapter 17) - Mon 26 Sep 2016
ohhh it's getting good now (:
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