STORY RATED 'MA'! If you don't do MA stories, move on please and thank you!

I've taken a story off hiatus after about two years, I am writing the last chapter(s) and again I'm stuck T_T...I think my problem is that I'm trying to put too much in one chapter; and when trying to decide between what to keep, what to hold off, and what to delete completely, my mind can't really decide. So if you would like to help, here's the link to the story or you can pm me.
Kagome's Memories and Sesshomaru's Love

Thank You for your help!!

~Haru-Chan~