Hi, well, since I'm kind of stuck in a rut, (as in, I don't know if my story is really attracting people, so I get a little down in the dumps), I'd really appreciate having someone review my story, and critique me on it. I will accept anything, as long as it isn't too overly mean. Please nothing like, "omg you suck blah blah blah".

I really don't have a great way to explain my story without saying anything in detail-- So I'll keep it as this: It's about Sesshomaru and Kagome, of course! There's a lot of angst, so I think that says all about it without revealing anything. (:

Please review, I'd love hearing your thoughts!

Tremors: www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/3519/1