Laying Amongst Dokatsu by Nostawen Allesiel
www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story1968/1
Laying Amongst Dokatsu captures your attention within the first couple of paragraphs, compelling you to keep reading long after you know you should turn out the lights and go to bed. The author has gifted this fanfiction with cleverly detailed descriptions that allow you to immerse youself into the tale to be able to almost see, hear and feel the characters actions and reactions to events.
It is currently incomplete but is slowly being updated, and the interval for each new chapter, like the anticipation of the birth of a baby, is exquisitely torturous, but in the end well worth the wait.
Laying Amongst Dokatsu contains a complex, full cast of supporting characters, each well fleshed out and with a unique personality, whether they be good, neutral, or evil, with some being truly very evil.
The basis of the story is original with none to extremely few of the usual cliches, and shows the character growth and changes in a restrained, methodical manner.
There is an infinitesimal amount, probably less than a handful, of spelling and grammatical errors in the fifty chapters currently available, which in no way compromises or detracts from the pleasure of reading this captivating tale. For anyone who knows me well, and my meticulous nitpicking, this is extremely high praise indeed.
If you have the chance, do yourself a favor and read Laying Amongst Dokatsu, but don’t be surprised if, once you start, you are unable to stop reading until the end, so allow yourself plenty of time to enjoy this remarkable narrative of fate, acceptance and, ultimately, love.
Go! Now! Read!
And don’t forget to leave a nice review for Nat-chan!
P.S. - Laying Amongst Dokatsu has been nominated into several catagories for the 3rd Quarter 2009 Awards.