Hello Lady Ice!!!
I'm FluffySesshomaruTail, but everyone calls me fluffy.
Soooooooo... you're looking for a beta, huh? Well..... I CAN HELP! Woot! When you say that you want a peice of my work, do you mean a story of MINE, or an example of my beta-ing skills? If you want a QUICK way to get to my OWN writing, you can just look over my stories in my profile. But I'd rather send you a newer chapter of a new story I am writing (it's actually a trilogy). I have a lot of experience and I am always comming up with ideas and whatnot, so I can always help you there. I get that whole, dissatisfaction thing, because I get it too. I tend to find myself re-writing things and somtimes deleting them until I fell that I can write them right. I, of course, also have MY own beta.
Who doesn't? Haha.
PM me if you're interested. I'll send that newer chapter to you, if you want!
Love,
Fluffy